2020年中考英语试题分项版解析汇编第03期专题13书面表达含解析2

1、专题13 书面表达1.【2020年四川省宜宾】初中三年即将过去，你在这三年中一定有没有实现的愿望。为此，校园广播站特向全校 初三学生征稿。请你根据下面提示，写一篇广播稿。1. 没有实现的愿望(如:学会吉他)；2. 没有实现愿望的原因（至少两个）；3. 进入高中后为实现愿望的计划。 要求：1短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，90 词左右。（开头己给出，不计入 总字数）2短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。3短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。how time flies! three years of junior high school has gone by before we

2、 know it.【答案】how time flies! three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.each time i look back on my school days, i feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasnt been realized. that is to learn how to play the guitar.although i am really interested in playing the instrument, i w

3、as busy working at my lessons. besides, there was much homework to every day.the end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. if i can enter the senior high school, i will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. i believe ill live a colorful life in the senior hi

4、gh school.2.【2020年浙江省金华】在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。注意：发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数80100；文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the chinese culture tour. now allow me to introduce one of the chinese traditional festivals the spring fe

5、stival.the spring festival falls in january february. it is chinese new year and also the biggest day of year.so people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start. during the festiv

6、al, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, children can often get hongbao from their elders. do you think it interesting?thats all. thanks for listening【高分句型一】many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.

7、 许多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他们有一个光明的开端。动词不定式to welcome the new year用作目的状语，分词短语hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴随状语。【高分句型二】children can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子们通常可以从长辈那里得到红包。此句写出了春节的传统习俗，也是孩子们最开心的事情之一。get sth. from从得到某物。3.【2020年浙江省绍兴中考】你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ how do students find study partners？”的

8、讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。注意:（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）你的理由至少两条；（3）词数:80-100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇:学伴 study partner方便的convenient短文首句: i have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.【答案】i have recentlydone a survey about how students find study partner

9、s. some students find study partners through the internet. they believe its convenient to find partners to study with online. besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. w

10、hats more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily. as for me， id like to get study partners by going to summer camp because i can learn something new while having fun. also， its a good way to learn how to get on well with others.题目中已经给出；接下来我们来介绍两种不同的方式以及理由；最后阐述自己的方式及理由。所以短文

11、可以分成三段来叙述。时态应该是一般现在时态为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称复数为主。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，写完整的句子。句式结构以主谓宾和主系表为主，辅以并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息。短文共分成三部分，第一部分是题目中给出的一句概括的句子，点明了文章的主题。第二部分中作者介绍了不同学生们寻找学伴的不同方式以及他们的理由；最后作者介绍了自己的方式及理由。分段叙述，使文章结构清晰，有条理。其

12、次短文使用了恰当的英语表达方式，句式符合英语的表达习惯，语言地道、得体。文章以一般现在时态为主，第二段使用了第三人称叙述，最后一段使用第一人称，语法规范、准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如they believe its convenient to find partners to study with online中使用了宾语从句，和非谓语动词作主语的句型；再如some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face中使用了目的状语

13、从句；再如id like to get study partners by going to summer camp because i can learn something new while having fun.中原因状语从句等等。同时文章中使用了恰当的连接成分，如besides, whats more, as for me, also等等，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。 4.【2020年甘肃省白银】书面表达 “读万卷书，行万里路”，旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，发表你的看法。注意：1要点齐全，适当发挥；2从思维导图sayi

14、ng部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中；3句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；4词数：80-100词左右；5文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。【答案】travellingtravelling is one of the best ways for learning. you may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. seeing is believing. furthermore, if yo

15、u are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. while travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. you can also create great memories for your lifetime. no matter how well educated you are, there is alwa

16、ys a lot for you to learn through travelling.5.【2020年河北省中考】请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示：（1）what are the man and the woman doing?（2）what should you do when you see people litter like this? why?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文

17、明的i can see a man and a woman in the picture. the man is_【答案】i can see a man and a woman in the picture. the man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.the other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.the city is our home. we should protect it. therefore, when we see s

18、omeone litter like this, we should act like the woman.the environment should be protected by everybody.we should be civilized citizens.点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6.【2020年湖北省黄冈市中考】美丽中国,美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的

19、城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明,请你以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向你的英国笔友tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡黄冈。要点提示：1.黄冈位于长江之边,大别山之南；2.黄冈历史悠久,名人辈出；3.黄冈风景迷人,乡村秀美;4.人人参与,从小事做起,黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境;5.邀请tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。写作要求：1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇:lie(位于); dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and gr

20、een mountains dear tom,thanks for your last letter. you asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _best wishes!yours, li ming【答案】dear tom,thanks for your last letter. you asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.my hometown is huanggang. it lies by the yangtze river and at the southern

21、 foot of dabie mountains.it's a beautiful city with a long history. a number of famous people come from our city, such as li siguang, li shizhen, wen yiduo and so on. there are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. they are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit huangga

22、ng every year. you can also see beautiful villages everywhere. we are proud of our hometown.now the people in huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. we plant trees as many as possible every year. we stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. volunteers go to the mountain

23、s, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. we are taking action!tom, would you like to come to huanggang? you can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. i believe you will

24、 fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. looking forward to your visit!best wishes!yours,li ming点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了黄冈的地理位置，接下来介绍黄冈的历史、风景和环保情况，最后邀请tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。此处ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, asas possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a w

25、onderful time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。7.【2020年湖北省宜昌中考】为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请谈谈你建议的时间和地点并陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（2）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear leaders,i am li hua from class, grade 8. _we can discuss the details(细节)later.yours,li hua【答案】dear leaders,i am li hu

26、a from class 3, grade 8. here is my advice about our study travel.i suggest going to wufeng houhe forest park. it is a beautiful park with green water and mountains. there are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. we can get closer to the nature. i think june is the best time to g

27、et there. because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.we will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. i'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educationalwe can discuss the details(细节) l

28、ater.yoursli hua点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。 8.【2020年湖南省郴州市中考】假如你是李华，上周六上午，你们班全体同学在特殊教育学校做了一次志愿者活动。请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语给你的笔友 sandy写一封信。what you seewhat you dowhat you feel1.school: clean, tidy2. students:bl

29、ind, deafspeak/read/write, difficult follow teacher, carefully1.paly games learn paper cutting2. give books, snacks, toys要求：1.文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译)，并适当发挥；2.词数：80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。dear sandy,last saturday morning, our class went to the special education school to have a volu

30、nteer activity. _do you have anything special to tell me? im looking forward to your reply.yours,li hua【答案】last saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the special school. my classmates and i took a lot of presents to them,such as books,snacks and toys. the school is clean and tidy.some

31、 students are blind.others are deaf.some students cant speak or read or write.it is difficult for them to do everyday things.but they followed the teacher to do things carefully.after arriving there,some of us began playing games with them. some of us taught them to learn paper cutting .we also perf

32、ormed wonderful programs，such as singing, dancing. we also asked them to join us and they were very happy. all of us were happy because we did something good to others. in my opinion, we should spend more time helping them. helping others is chinese peoples virtue.9.【2020年湖南省衡阳市中考】假如你是刘伟，你在英国的笔友jim对

33、中国的传统节日很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节，请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。注意：1. 80100词左右。2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear jim,im glad to receive your e-mail. .what do you think of the dragon boat festival? looking forward to your reply.yours,liu wei【答案】dear jim,i am glad to receive you

34、r e-mail.the dragon boat festival ,also called the duanwu festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the chinese calender.people always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.the festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the s

35、outhern places where there are many rivers and lakes.its very popular.the rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.you can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.they are very delicious .and dragon boat festival is for qu yuan.he is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the rive

36、r.overall,the dragon boat festival is very interesting!what do you think of the dragon boat festival?looking forward to your reply.yours,liu wei点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。10.【2020年甘肃兰州】假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，

37、你的英国笔友jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。1.中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史（the dragon boat festival; one of the chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history）；2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原（honor the great poet qu yuan）；3.中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗（dragon boat races）；4.家人团聚听懂粽子和其他美食（eat zongzi and other deliciou

38、s food）；5.有三天假期，可以外出旅游（a 3 day holiday）。要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。注意：不得出现学校，姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。【答案】dear jack,hows it going? i am very glad to introduce the dragon boat festival to you. it is one of the chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. the

39、festival is celebrated to honor the great poet qu yuan. on that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. in southern parts of china, people often have the dagon boat races. it is so exciting to watch this activity on tv. besides, we also have a 3-day h

40、oliday during the festival. so we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. how interesting the dragon boat festival is and i like it very much.best wishes.yours,li hua【点睛】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1.认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想。2. 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络。3. 准确定位人称、时态注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。4. 最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标

41、点误用等。11.【2020年湖北省咸宁】.“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “huang xuhua the father ofchinas nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点：1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇；2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造；3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止；4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民

42、的热爱。写作要求：1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名；2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥；3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇：核潜艇 nuke; 国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal ones identityhuang xuhua the father of chinas nukeslast friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video abouthuang xuhua the fa

43、ther of chinas nukes. we were all inspired by his heroic deeds.【答案】huang xuhua the father of chinas nukeslast friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video abouthuang xuhua the father of chinas nukes.he was born in a rich family. in order to make our country stronge

44、r, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes.to protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. for abou

45、t 30 years, he was unknown for others. and now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old.(and now he doesnt stop working/struggling even if he is over90 years old)his story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country.we were all inspired by his heroic deeds12.【

46、2020年山东东营】在你的成长历程中，一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重，但是在你看来却非常珍贵。某英语杂志以“a precious present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动，请写一篇短文，跟大家分享。内容包括：1.这件礼物是什么？2.你为什么觉得它珍贵？3.它背后有什么故事？ 要求： 1.100词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。【答案】a precious presentthe title “a precious present” reminds me of quite a few gifts ive got. yet, the first come to my mind

47、is the book, the adventures of tom sawyer. on my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. because i didnt like reading, i put it on the bookshelf. one boring day, i picked it up and looked through it. unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. i found pleasure in reading books. from th

48、en on, i became fascinated in reading. though the book is not valuable, its precious. ill regard it as a treasure forever.【解析】这是一篇命题作文，以“a precious present”为题与大家分享一件自己所拥有的珍礼物。人称为第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时要注意作文的整体框架。首先介绍这件礼物的名字是什么，附带着说明它的来历，接着讲述这件礼物背后的故事，最后可以总结说明为什么这件礼物对你来说非常珍贵。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的

49、结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。13.【2020年广西贺州】 假设你是susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。父母的要求每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉你的看法虽太严厉，但理解他们你的解决方式与父母多交流，为父母做些家务要求:1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容,可以展开思路,自由地适当发挥。2.不能出现真实的校名、人名和其它真实信息。3.词数80词右。前两句已经给出,不计入词数。【答案】my name is susan. there are too many rules in

50、 my family. i have to clean the room every day. i am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. i can't go out on school nights. i must go to bed by 10 pm. i think my parents are too strict with me. sometimes i feel bored, but i understand they really love me. i communicate with my pare

51、nts as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. and i often help them do housework. these are my good ways to get on well with them.【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如there be，be allowed to，free time，be strict with，communicate with，as much as possib

52、le，share . with，get on well with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。14.【2020年黑龙江龙东地区】writing(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分)81. 为了绿化环境,打造花园城市，你校将组织学生去北山公园植树。请你以学生会的名义写一则通知。要求同学们明天上午8点在学校门口集合，乘坐校车一起前往