山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练短文改错+写作(2)

1、山西省 2012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（ 2）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。I am a senior high school student To my opinion, the classroom is a p

2、lace forstudents to gain knowledges So quietness is badly need for us to learn in theclassroom But recently somestudents has brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of thering of mobile phonesSome of them even wasted precious time in class type shortmessages on the mobilephone

3、s To keep the classroomquietlyand make us focusmoreon our studies, I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom At least,they shouldn t be used where we are having a class书面表达假如你是 Li Hua ，担任学生会主席，你校刚在10月10日举行完首届校园外语节，请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英语稿，投递到英文报，stCentury 。The 21目的： 为了丰富校园生活，提高同学们学习外语的积极性，校学生会特举

4、办首用心爱心专心1届校园外语节。参赛形式：以班级为单位参加。活动内容：英文演讲，英文歌曲和英语短剧比赛。活动裁判：本校英语教师和外教。活动影响：增强了学生学习英语的兴趣等。参 考 词 汇 ：ForeignLanguage Festival,EnglishSpeech Contest,EnglishPlaylets Competition注意：词数 100 左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Editor，On Oct.10th , our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.Yours sincerely,Li Hua改错

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6、 之间加 not或 shouldn t10.where we are havingwhere wheneditor,On Oct.10 th ,ourschoolheld the firstForeignLanguage Festival.Itaimed to makecampus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.Therewerethreeactivitiesduringthisfestival EnglishSpeechContest,English Songs and English

7、 Playlets Competition. Each contestant from allthe classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our Englishteachers and foreign teachers.As the chairman of the Students Union, I was completely involved in thefestival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, theatmosphereoflearningEnglishhasbeenwellconstructed.Moreover,ithaseffectivelyraisedourawaren