2017-2018学年高中英语 ModuleMusic Section Ⅴ Writing-如何写关于音乐的电子邮件教学案 外研版选修6

1、学必求其心得，业必贵于专精module 4 music section writing如何写关于音乐的电子邮件一、注意事项写email和写英文信件相差不多，主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。写正文时要注意以下三点：1邮件内容从问候语开始.要根据与收件人的关系密切程度来选择适当的称呼语.2表明写作意图。在邮件开头就要澄清写作意图，这样才能更好地引出邮件的主要内容。3语言应简洁明晰.电子邮件篇幅一般不太长，因此简洁明晰的语言在表言达意中非常重要.二、增分佳句（1）邮件开头常用句式：i am glad to receive your letter.how happy i am when i know

2、 .。thanks for your letter， its my pleasure to do 。.。（2)表达看法常用句式：as far as i am concerned 。.in my opinion .。as for me 。.personally， i prefer 。my own point of view is that 。.。(3）邮件结尾常用句式：i look forward to hearing from you。i would also like to know if you can/could 。.i would be grateful if you could/wo

3、uld .i will appreciate it if you can .。题目要求现在有许多选秀活动，因此有些学生不顾学业去参加这些活动。假如你叫楚志，你的网友mike发e。mail给你,说他想休学一段时间去参加一个选秀节目。请回复mike,表明你的看法。参考词汇：休学quit school偶像idoldear mike，ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show searchingformusictalent， _best regards！yours,chu zhi第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用

4、文：电子邮件;2确定中心人称:本文的主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定主体时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：对对方的决定发表自己的否定看法;第二部分：给出否定对方的理由；第三部分：作总结,告诉对方正确的认识。第二步:核心词汇想周全1excuse借口2reasonable合理的3disagree_with不同意4be_ambitious_of/have_the_ambition_of渴望5be_designed_for为设计6in_short简言之第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我听说你想停止学习去参加音乐选秀节目,我完全不同意你。ive heard that you want to quit s

5、chool to attend the show searchingformusictalent， i_disagree_with_you_totally。2我认为这不是一个很好的你放弃学习的借口.（it isn.for sb. to do sth.; give up)it_is_not_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study,_i_think.3我知道现在越来越多的青少年有成为超级明星的雄心。(that宾语从句； more and more)i_know_that_nowadays_more_and_more_teenagers_have_th

6、e_ambition_of_being_superstars。4许多电视选秀节目是为能参加音乐比赛的青少年设计的.（take part in; and并列句)a_lot_of_tv_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_and_they_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests。5作为学生,我们应该做的最重要的事情是学习。（定语从句)as_students,_the_most_important_thing_we_should_be_doing_is_studying。6发展我们的业余爱好也很重要,但我们应该以一个合理的方式发展

7、.（动名词短语作主语； but并列句)developing_our_hobbies_is_also_important,_but_we_should_develop_them_in_a_reasonable_way。7简而言之，我们学习能懂得更多,这是很重要的。（it isadj.that .。）in_short，_it_is_important_that_we_study_to_know_more.8这就是为什么我们应该关注学习。（thats why； pay attention to）that_is_why_we_should_pay_our_attention_to_our_studie

8、s。第四步：句式升级造亮点1把句2改为否定转移句i_dont_think_it_is_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study。2把句4改为who引导的定语从句a_lot_of_tv_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_who_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇dear mike，ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show searchingformusictalent， i_di

9、sagree_with_you_totally。_i_dont_think_it_is_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study。i_know_that_nowadays_more_and_more_teenagers_have_the_ambition_of_being_superstars._a_lot_of_tv_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_who_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests。as_students，_the_most_important_thing_we_should_be_doing_is_studying。developing_our_hobbies_is_also_important,_but_we_should_develop_them_in_a_reasonable_way。in_short,_it_is_important_that_we_study_to_know_more。that_is_why_we_s