GRE写作如何用好长难句

1、gre写作如何用好长难句 gre写作如何用好长难句?恰当运用比大量使用更重要gre写作请勿滥用长难句举例：recent years， this problem has appeared in the cities of china， the tendency of which is more and more serious.上面的这句话在中国考生看来，是既亲切又熟悉吧。但是这种啰嗦的运用从句是非常不可取的，这句话完全可以用一个句子说明白：this is a recent and growing problem in cities in china.考生要注意，在gre写作考试中，考试目的是为

2、了考察考生是否具有和他人进行学术交流的语言能力。如果你不能这样和别人交流沟通，那么，即便是你的句子写的再长，也不会拿高分。gre写作如何做到高效表达?究竟要如何做到convey meaning effectively呢?其实很简单，就是用最简洁的语言把意思表达清楚。但是，这绝对不是完全不用长难句的意思，究竟什么时候该使用长句呢?当我们用简单的话不能把意思表达清楚，反复地使用短句反而是啰嗦的，这样不以利于交流。此时，我们就要使用从句，来把分成几个句子表达的意思用一个句子说清楚，从而达到简洁的要求。所以，考生不要认为写长越难的句子会为作文加分，因为这不是重点，如果想要提高自己的gre作文成绩，要清

3、楚的表达自己的作文主旨，这样才能让评卷人看懂也不觉得厌烦。大家看完了这篇针对gre作文长难句的*，是不是有所收获呢?看看你的作文是否有不必要的长难句，有则改之，无则继续努力吧!gre写作：必背15句长难句1. that sex ratio will be favored which maximizes the descendants an individual will have and hence the number of gene copies transmitted.2. hardys weakness derived from his apparent inability to co

4、ntrol the comings and goings of these divergent impulses and from his unwillingness to cultivate and sustain the energetic and risky ones.3. virginia woolfs provocative statement about her intentions in writing mrs. dalloway has regularly been ignored by the critics, since it highlights an aspect of

5、 her literary interests very different from the traditional picture of the “poetic” novelist concerned with examining states of reverie and vision and with following the intricate pathways of individual consciousness.4. as she put in the common readers, “it is safe to say that not a single law has b

6、een framed or one stone set upon another because of anything chaucer said or wrote; and yet, as we read him, we are absorbing morality at every pore.5. with the conclusion of a burst of activity, the lactic acid level is high in the body fluids, leaving the large animal vulnerable to attack until th

7、e acid is recovered, via oxidative metabolism, by the liver into glucose, which is then sent (in part) back into the muscles for glycogen resynthesis.6. although gutman admits that forced separation by sale was frequent, he shows that the slaves preference, revealed most clearly on plantations where

8、 sale was infrequent, was very much for stable monogamy.7. gutman argues convincingly that the stability of the black family encouraged the transmission ofand so was crucial in sustainingthe black heritage of folklore, music, and religious expression from one generation to another, a heritage that s

9、laves were continuingly fashioning out of their african and american experience.8. this preference for exogamy, gutman suggests, may have derived from west african rules governing marriage, which, though they differed from one tribal group to another, all involved some kind of prohibition against un

10、ions with close kin.9. his thesis works relatively well when applied to discrimination against blacks in the united states, but his definition of racial prejudice as “racialbased negative prejudgments against a group general accepted as a race in any given region of ethnic competition,” can be also

11、including hostility toward such ethnic groups as the chinese in california and the jews in medieval europe.10. such variations in shape, chemistry, conduction speed, excitation threshold, and the like as had been demonstrated in nerve cells remained negligible in significance for any possible correl

12、ation with the manifold dimensions of mental experience.11. it was possible to demonstrate by other methods refined structural difference among neuron types; however, proof was lacking that the quality of the impulse or its condition was influenced by these differences, which seemed instead to influ

13、ence the developmental patterning of the neural circuits.12. although qualitative variance among nerve energies was never rigidly disproved, the doctrine was generally abandoned in favor of the opposing view, namely, that nerve impulses are essentially homogeneous in quality and are transmitted as “

14、common currency” throughout the nervous system.13. other experiment revealed slight variations in the size, number, arrangement, and interconnection of the nerve cells, but as far as psycho-neural correlations was concerned, the obvious similarities of these sensory fields to each other seemed much

15、more remarkable than any of the minute differences.14. although some experiments show that, as an object becomes more familiar, its internal representation becomes more holistic and the recognition process correspondingly more parallel, the weight of the evidence seems to support the serial hypothes

16、is, at least for objects that are not notably simple and familiar.15. in large part as a consequence of the feminist movement, historians have focused a great deal of attention in recent years on determining more accurately the status of women in various periods.gre高分作文必背句(一)1. according to a recent

17、 survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking。依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。2. the latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework。最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。3. no invention has received more praise and abuse than internet。没有一项发明

18、像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。4. people seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation。人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。5. an increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation。越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。6. when it comes to education,

19、 the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。7. many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。8. proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great effor

20、ts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。9. an increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. however, this opinion is now being qu

21、estioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution。越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和卖淫。10. many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spen

22、d much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers。gre高分作文必背句(二)21. people equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。22. in the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past。在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。23. in fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself。事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。24. we should spare no effort to beautify our environment。我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。25.