如何写作文.ppt

1、如何写作文,From:Huaishupu Middle School Name: 王齐鸿 E-mail address: ,英语写作重要性,英语写作的重要性 初中阶段的英语写作既是英语学习“听、说、读、写”四项必备基本技能之一。写作还是是中考的必考题型，且所占比重较大（15分），同时也是拉开考生距离的关键题型。,初中生写作“现状”,初中生写作“六大病症”： 1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯： 2) 单词拼写错误： frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet 3) 动词缺失：Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. 4）前后不一致（

2、数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）： Eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest. 5）中式英语 Eg: I very like sports. 6) 综合性错误： 包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。,如何写作文？ 如何写出高分作文？,问题思考：,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,英语作文五步法,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此

3、次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,找出题目的关键词,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,写作第二步,列,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit

4、friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列,加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our s

5、urvey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other peopl

6、e visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,要用上连接词。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则, 因此考生应尽量使用according to ,and, or, (al) though, but, however, because, so等词, 以便使行文自然流畅。,How do people spend their vacation? We

7、made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,We inter

8、viewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends o

9、r parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,原文： How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some

10、 other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,效果对比,英语作文“五步法”,审,列,加,连,美,实战演习,以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。 (以下句型供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If m

11、y dream comes true,I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want. When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to