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写作技巧 （学业水平考试）（掌握这些技巧，你就可以得高分） 2009年 阅读下面的征友信。假定你是潇湘中学的李华，愿意与写信人交朋友。请根据以下要求写一封回信，介绍个人的基本情况和学校生活。信的开头和结尾已给出。要求：1）介绍个人基本情况不少于3条信息，如年龄、性格、爱好等；学校生活也不少于3条信息，如作息时间、班级大小、学习课程等；2）词数：100左右；3）将回信写在答题卡上。 Dear friend,Hi! My name is Jack. I am a high school student in the UK. Im 17, an active and easy-going boy. I like ball games and surfing the Internet very much. School here starts at 9 a.m. and ends at about 3:30 p.m. Our class is small, only 29 students or so. We have to move to different classrooms for different classes. Besides the main subjects, we can choose other subjects like Woodwork and German. Right now, Im busy preparing myself for the A-level exam.Please write and tell me about yourself and your school life if you are willing to be my pen friend. Best wishes,Jack2010年下面是一位同学些的随笔，记述了她考完语文后的感受。作文这道题，本次英语考试即告结束，你应该也有一些感想。请参照一下汉语提示写一篇日记，把你此时的真实感受记录下来，字数100左右。试试看！日记开头部分已写在答题卡上。提示：1 试卷难易如何？四道大题(Part 1 Listening, Part 2 Grammar and usage, Part 3 Reading,Part 4 Writing)中，哪一道题你觉得最难，哪道题容易？2 你喜欢这套试卷吗 （最）喜欢哪些内容？为什么？3 今后你如何进一步学好英语？ The Chinese test paper is very easy for me. Part 1 is the easiest, but the writing part is a little difficult. It took me quite a lot of time. Anyhow, I think the paper is well prepared. And I like the reading part most. The passages are vivid and interesting. And Ive learned a lot from them. In order to improve my Chinese, I think i have to work still harder at it. I have to read more and write more from now on.评分标准：满分15分。其中内容占12分，形式占3分。按4档计分。第一档 15分 文章内容完整， 语言形式正确；第二档 14-11分 文章内容较完整， 语言形式错误不多；第三档 10-5分 文章内容不完整， 语言形式错误较多；第四档 4-0分 写了个别词语或基本没有作答；记住：1 字数要求要达到（100字左右）2卷面要求整洁，切忌潦草(记住：相同的内容，整洁与潦草至少有3分之差）写作步骤：1阅读写作材料，写出要点。2 找出参考文章里的对应的要点。3 根据材料的要求把参考要点作相应的改动（如人称/时间/地点/科目等），不要全部照抄。4 把要点变成完整的句子。（记住：不要写自己真实的姓名或学校等）5 连句成文。（加上适当的连接词，使文章连贯，语义顺畅）要写的要点（中文）材料里的参考要点要写的要点（英文）1 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _71 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _7 1 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _7 1 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _7 1 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _71 _2 _3 _4_ 5 _6 _72009年 参考范文：Dear Jack,Hi, I am Li Hua from China. I am very glad to be your pen friend. I study in Xiaoxiang High School. This year Im 17, too. As a shy and quiet girl, I love reading and listening to music, especially classical music. In our school, class begins at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. Compared with yours, our classes are very big, generally up to 50 students each. Besides, we usually have different classes in the same classroom. At school, we study as many as 13 subjects, and I am crazy about English. By the way, I am engaged in an English speech contest. Could you please give me some advice?Hope to hear from you soon!Best wishes,Li Hua2010年 参考范文：June 12 The English exams coming to an end. So far Ive found the whole paper is neither too hard nor too easy for me. Part 1 Listening is rather difficult ,especially the dictation. On the other hand, Part 3 Reading is a little easier than the other three. On the whole, I like the paper, of which I am really fond of the reading part. Ive had a better understanding of the saying Where there is a will, there is a way, after I finished the table Chinese Nobel Prize Winners. Of course, I like this writing part, too. I can write what Im feeling about at this very moment. It seems to me that were using English in our real life, not having an English exam, doesnt it? English, no doubt, is another way to enrich ourselves. From now on. Im sure my English will become better and better in the future.Practice：假设你是李明，收到你美国笔友Tom的一封信，请给你的美国笔友写一封e-mail，介绍你的语文老师Miss Lee，要点如下：1年龄，家庭情况 2性格，与学生相处情况 3 课堂情况，课后情况4 爱好 5 写一至两点其他同学对他的看法字数 100左右 Dear Li Ming, How are you recently? Now Ill tell you something about my English teacher Mr. Johnson. Mr. Johnson is forty years old. He has a happy family and has two sons. Hes outgoing and gets along well with us students. His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps us with our English. He never smokes