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作文评分等级14分：切题；表达思想清楚；文字通顺，连贯性较好；基本无语言错误。11分：切题；表达思想清楚；文字连贯；但有少量语言错误。8分：基本切题；表达思想比较清楚；文字上连贯；但语言错误较多，且有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题；表达思想不够清楚；文字连贯性差；有较严重的语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱；语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。论说文1. 问题解决型真题再现2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview?(社会热点)2000.1 How I Finance My College Education?(校园生活)预测专项训练 1.How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas 2.On a Harmonious Dormitory Life 3.How Could Parents Cultivate Kids to Make Good Use of Money? 4.How to Protect Animals 5.How to Make Friends 6.How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? 7.Noise 8.Traffic and Population结构模板1Nowadays it is generally accepted that 总述问题. 表现1. 表现2. There are many reasons accounting for 该问题./ Special attention should be paid to the fact that该问题 is bringing great damage. On one hand / For one thing, 原因1/危害1。On the other hand/For another,原因2/危害2. Therefore, it is high time that 解决该问题. Many a way can be adopted to解决该问题./Many a factor plays an important role in 解决该问题. Firstly/First of all, 方法1/因素1. Secondly/In addition, 方法2/因素2. Thirdly/Besides/ Moreover, 方法3/因素3. Only through these ways/ Only in this way 该问题才能够解决。 1.目前盗版的现象比较严重 2.造成这种现象的危害 3.我们应该怎么做 知识产权 intellectual property rights 侵犯版权 infringe sb.s copyright; copyright infringementSay No to Pirated ProductsNowadays it is generally accepted that piracy is becoming more and more a problem in China. Almost any product, such as tape, CD and hi-tech device can be copied. Shortly after a newly-developed product is put on the market, people will unsurprisingly find its pirated counterparts in the stores. Special attention should be paid to the fact that piracy is bringing great damage. On one hand, pirated products often cost far less than the original ones, so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in price in spite of their relatively poor quality, and the original ones, on the contrary, sell poorly. On the other hand, in the long run, pirated products may also have negative impacts on customers since those legitimate producers enthusiasm may be greatly hurt as a result of money loss. Therefore, it is high time that we solved the problem as soon as possible. Many a way can be adopted to reduce the piracy phenomenon. First of all, it is the duty of the government to call on everyone to fight the battle against piracy. In addition, as customers, we should develop our consciousness to resist pirated products. Moreover, strict laws and decrees are of great importance. Only in this way can this problem be solved radically. 结构模板2Recently, there has been a discussion about总述该问题./ Nowadays, it has become a common phenomenon总述该问题.危害1/原因1. Additionally,危害2/原因2. Therefore, it is high time that 解决该问题. The following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. /Some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题. /Many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. Firstly/ First of all, 方法1/因素1. Secondly/ In addition,方法2/因素2. Thirdly/Besides/ Moreover,方法3/因素3. Only through these ways /Only in this way该问题才能够解决。 It is no doubt that 解决该问题的意义. As for me, 我的建议或看法.总结观点.Reduce Waste on Campus1.目前有些校园内浪费现象严重2.浪费的危害3.从我做起，杜绝浪费2. 现象解释型真题再现2006.6 On Students Selecting Lectures2002.6 Student Use of Computers1998.1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities预测专项训练 1.The Adaptation of the Classics 2.Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 3.Selfishness in Dormitory Life 4.Online Education 5.The Generation Gap 6.Housing Shortage in Large Cities结构模板1From the chart/graph/ table/ picture, we clearly learn that 总述社会现象/事实现象，which has aroused great/common concern. What impresses us most is 图表中重点数据. There are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化. First of all/To begin with, 原因1. Whats more/Moreover, 原因2. 进一步说明原因2. In addition/ Besides, 原因3. Therefore/ As a result, 总结原因导致的结果. As to me/ As far as I am concerned, 我的观点. For one thing/ On one hand, 影响1/问题1. For another/ On the other hand, 影响2/问题2. Thus/ In brief/ To conclude, 总结观点.结构模板2总体现象has been brought into focus. /总体现象, which has aroused great concern. 现象表现或变化In addition, 进一步阐述现象There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. /The reasons/factors 影响该现象 are varied. Among all these reasons/factors, 原因plays a very important role. 阐述原因Whats more/ Moreover, 原因In addition/Besides, 原因 As to me/As far as I am concerned, 我的观点For one thing具体的看法理由For another, 进一步说明看法理由To conclude/ In a word, 观点总结The Adaptation of the Classics近年，许多经典名著被改写为各种版本以供大众娱乐这种现象产生的原因经典名著被改写可能产生的问题The Adaptation of the Classics Recently many classics are being adapted in many ways, which has aroused great concern. In those adapted works, all plots are changed and all characters become somewhat watered clown. In addition, some familiar characters expressing the good wishes of our common people have been distorted.(描述现象段) There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Among all these reasons, readers preference plays a very important role. That is a precondition for the market of the adaptation of classics. What is more, the concept of creativity is prevailing in every aspect. In addition, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of entertainments including the adaptations of the classics. (说明原因段） As far as I am concerned, the adaptation of classics does more harm than good. For one thing, since the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation, the act of adapting may ruin its charm. For another, those adapted works will affect childrens outlook on life, who are the future of the nation and always believe what is in the books is the truth. In a word, the real classics should be presented on the bookshelves to lead people to appreciate the real art. （总结观点段）3. 对比选择型真题再现2006.12 On the Spring Festival Gala2005.12 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?1999.6 Reading Selectively or Extensively?1998.6 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?预测专项训练 1.Exam-oriented or Quality-oriented Education? 2.Is the Spirit of Leifeng Out of Date? 3.Major or School Brand? 4.Why I Take College English Test Band 4. 5.Telephone or Letter?/Credit Cards 6.Is Study Pressure Good for University Students? 7.Talent Shows on TV Should (not) Be Kept. 8.Ideas on Love and Learning 9.Private Cars in China 10.Who Should Pay for This Education, the Government or the Student?结构模板1When it comes to事物/问题, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that 一种观点. However, others maintain that 另一种观点. Those people who hold the former opinion believe观点1理由1. In addition, 观点1理由2. Therefore, 总结观点1. However, still others advocate the latter opinion because they hold 观点2理由1. Besides, they argue that 观点2理由2. So, 总结观点2. Weighting up these two arguments, 我的看法.For one thing, 个人看法依据1.For another,个人看法依据2. Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that 重申观点.结构模板2 Different people have different views on 看法/问题. Some prefer 一种观点. Others tend to 另一种观点.As for me, I agree to the first/second opinion. Of course, 我不赞同观点的合理性 For example, 支持其合理性的例子. But in my opinion,我不赞同观点的不足 The following reasons can account for my argument. Firstly, 支持观点的理由. A good example to illustrate is 支持理由的例子In addition/Moreover/Whats more, 支持观点的理由To conclude / From the foregoing, 重申观点On FateNowadays, different people have different views on whether we can change our fates or not. Some people hold that our fates lie in our own hands, and we can control them with our determination and efforts. Others tend to believe that fate is determined by God and we have nothing to do with it. As to me, I agree with the first statement. Of course, sometimes something unexpected usually occurs. For example, a healthy young man may suffer a traffic accident and lose his legs all of a sudden. But in my opinion, it doesnt mean that people can do nothing to change their miserable fortune. The following reasons can account for my argument. Firstly, our human beings have the intelligence and ambition which enable us to conquer difficulties. A good example to illustrate is that many a hero, such as Zhang Haidi, has succeeded in fighting against fate. In addition, God only helps those who help themselves. To conclude, we should be confident in and faithful to ourselves, rather than give in to fates, no matter what happens.4. 观点论证型真题再现 2003.1 It Pays to Be Honest 1999.1 Dont Hesitate to Say “No”预测专项训练1. Work is Necessary2. Devotion Is Rewarding3. Where There Is A Will, There Is a Way4. There Is No End to Learning5. The Importance of Establishing Harmonious Society6. Preserve Every Inch of Farmland结构模板1It is well know that 论点. The truth is deep and profound./The truth of it is self-evident. 正确性表现.总结观点. Many remarkable factors/ reasons contribute to this argument.First of all,论据1. Whats more/ Moreover, 论据2. For example, 支持论据2的事例.In addition/ Besides, 论据3. All mentioned above tell us that 重申观点.Therefore, there is no denying that 正确态度或做法. In short, 总结全文.结构模板2论点背景. It is true that观点No one can deny that 正确性表现. Therefore,重申观点. Many remarkable factors/ reasons contribute to this argument.First of all,论据1. For example, 支持论据1的事例. Whats more/ Moreover, 论据2.In addition/ Besides, 论据3. All mentioned above tell us that 重申观点.Therefore, there is no denying that 正确态度或做法. In short/In a word, 总结全文.Devotion Is RewardingIt is well known that devotion is an important and fundamental quality for anyone who undertakes great deeds. The truth is deep and pro