江苏高考英语专题五书面表达第二节分类突破四读写任务类_记叙文优选习题.docx

四、读写任务类记叙文典例请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didnt offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou.Later he was proved to be a disabled person.In a series of cases nationwide，we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport，which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.People with moral deficiency (who dont give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned，but they dont deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values but not laws.In comparison，the attackers behave worse.The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats.It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice，but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice？This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same，especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.If cruel and rude acts are rooted in childrens hearts，society will never step into civilization.The practice violates common values，neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.写作内容1.用约30个词概括短文的要点；2.用约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法，内容包括：(1)读完这则新闻，你有什么感受？(2)假如你是车上的一名乘客，你会怎样做？(3)就如何创建文明、和谐社会提出你的建议。写作要求1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。满分作文The news is about a young disabled man attacked on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby，which leads a debate about who is right and who is wrong.I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite.It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence，which will really do great harm to our society.Today in our society，many other people like her would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus，as the morality requires.However，if I were a passenger on the crowded bus，I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.So there is still a long way to go for us to build up a harmonious society.In my opinion，we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized and harmonious society.阅卷老师点评1.层次分明，结构清晰本篇习作按照三段式：概括文章大意谈谈自己对这则新闻的看法及感受对于创建和谐社会自己的一些建议。按照这一顺序展开叙述，不但做到了要点齐全，而且富有层次感。2.高级词汇的使用习作中用到了：do great harm to；take.for granted; stand out; in need of; build up; fight against; civilized and harmonious society等，显示了作者扎实的综合语言运用能力，让文章更具有可读性。 3.多样化句型的使用习作中运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句；who 引导的名词性从句；if虚拟条件句；there be句型等。 读写任务型写作中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件，并说出自己从事件中得到的启示或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。1写作步骤概括原文衔接过渡描述事件发表看法概括原文记叙文常用模版：(1)The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher.(2)The author tells us a story about.(3)The passage is a story about.(4)According to the passage，the hero in the story.(5)From the story we know that.记叙文常用的过渡语句：(1)This reminds me of the similar experience.(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago.(3)I had a similar experience.2注意事项(1)注意时态的运用。记述经历类的记叙文，无论写人还是记事，通常以过去时态为主。如果所写的内容不但有过去的人和事，而且还有现在的人和事，那么对过去的人和事应采用过去时态，对现在的人和事应采用现在时态。(2)注意人称的一致性。要根据题目的要求选用合适的人称，做到上下文人称一致。(3)篇章结构。通常以时间或事件发展的顺序为线索，有时也可采用倒叙手法。详写主要情节，略写次要情节。(4)根据关键词和主题句进行概括。根据圈定的关键词和主题句进行改写，用相应的同义词进行替换或句型转换，千万不能原封不动地抄写原文。应变换表达原文的句子。原文变换表达You will not succeed.You will fail.You cant be too careful when driving.You should be careful when driving.I cant agree with you more.I quite agree with you.(2018无锡高三期末)In life，we will succeed and fail often for reasons that are entirely out of our control.For instance，we can be incredibly nice and love someone deeply，and they may not love us back.We can work harder than anyone else at our lessons and still not be as excellent as our peers.We can eat healthy food，exercise and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes，and still get sick.My first marriage ended in divorce.To me，it felt very unfair.I had worked hard to be a good wife and mother.However，no matter what I did，I could not make the relationship work.I could have been shut down by that experience.I could have decided that if one person didnt appreciate me as a wife，then no one would.I could have given up.But I knew that I wanted to be married.I knew that I wanted to experience traditional family life.So I didnt let one seemingly unfair experience stop me from believing that I could one day be happily married.And then one day，I met this kind，thoughtful，generous man with whom I now have a wonderful friendship and marriage.But that wouldnt have happened if I had decided to give up after one failed marriage.What Ive learned over the years is that we can do all the things that deserve a good outcome，but get bad things in return instead.The bottom line is that life is not fair.That is a tough pill to swallow for many of us.As a result，some people shut down after being hit by even one unfair blow from life.They cant handle the fact that our efforts dont always get the results that we expect.But if we let lifes unfairness defeat us，we will never receive the beautiful blessings that life has in store for us.写作内容1用约30个词概括短文内容；2用约120个词就“生活中处处存在看似不公平的事”这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括以下要点：(1)你对这一现象的看法(至少两点)；(2)假如你遇到这一现象，你会如何处理。 写作要求 1可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。参考范文Life is full of varieties of seemingly unfair experiences，which may defeat those who have lost courage and even confidence，but bless those who remain true to their original aspiration.For many reasons，we often have to encounter unf