2016年高考英语新题型-续写ppt课件.ppt

读后续写训练1,1,Myfatherisa_tome.,teacher,friend,superman,hero,liar,2,Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions,whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention.,Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo?,3,Readingforbriefinformation,acoupleoflovers,God,thedoctor,_coupleofloversledan_(envy)lifeinatown._(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_(injure).Thewoman_(attend)himdayandnight._herloverwasstillsleeping,_(hope),shemadeadeal_God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangeforthemans_(recover),_wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.,A,enviable,Unfortunately,injured,attendedto,But,hopelessly,with,recovery,which,4,Readingforsummary,Theplot（情节）ofthestory,Development,Ending,Beginning,Climax(高潮),A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.,A,C,B,5,*structures（结构）*sentencepatterns（句式）*words&phrases（词和短语）1,*theme：negative/positive*interpretation（解意）,*keywords（关键词）*clues（线索）,Step3polish（润色）,Step2draft（拟稿）,Step1compose(构思）,Readingforwriting,6,underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-stricken,underlinedwords（选5个以上）who(人物）：Godthebutterflywhere（地点）：thechurchevent（事件）：enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearsloveregretbecameflysweetheart-stricken,clues“Icanhelpyouforthreeyears”“Yes,Ido!iwontregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”,7,Readingforcreation,Thepossibleversionsoftheending,e.,b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.,Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.,c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.,d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.,negative,negative,positive,negative,8,Competition,9,Chooseyourteamleader!,10,1.目睹；见证(2分)vt._,2.他说过的最甜蜜的话(2分)（提示词sweet）_,3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(4分)（提示词tears）_,see/witness,Thesweetestwordshehaseversaid,Thebutterflycouldnthelpsheddinghertearssadly.,/Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears.,/Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown.,11,2.第三年的最后一天(2分)_,Onthelastdayofthethirdyear,1.变深；使加深(2分)vt./vi._,deepen,3.他们的爱已成为回忆。(4分)_,Theirlovehasbecomememories.,/Theirlovehasturnedintomemories.,/Theirlovehasbecomeapast.,12,2.揭露真相(2分)_,1.被打动的；受感动的(2分)adj.be_by,touched,uncoverthetruth,/exposethetruth/revealthetruth,/moved/impressed,3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。(4分)（提示词regret,用倒装句式）_,NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.,13,1.唤醒(2分)vt._,awaken/rouse,2.遭受许多挫折(2分)_,gothroughmanyobstacles,/suffermanystruggles,3.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚(4分)（提示词regrets/guilt）_,Themanwasshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.,14,draft,Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”_,四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role1：ThemecontrollerRole2：StructurebuilderRole3：GrammarcheckerRole4：Coherence(连贯）master（每人至少写两句）,VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.,15,Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,draft,Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldntbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldntknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.,16,Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”_,draft,Thebutterflysaid,“No.NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.”movedbyherwords,Godwaslostinthought:shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldntdeservethat.So,thedaybeforethemanandthedoctorswedding,Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim.Obviously,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened.Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewomansforgiveness.Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewontlethergo.Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime.,17,Paragraphy1:ThebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedToher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestonthemansshoulderoffandon._,afterrevision,Witnessingtheirlovedeepenwitheachpassingdayswasextremelyhardforher.Timeslippedbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriendwithabeautifulring,swearingthesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbacktears.Shewastremblingandcouldnotfeelherheartbeating.Withdeepgriefandgreatdespair,sheflewaway.Atthatmoment,shecompletelyrealizedthattimehasburiedeverythingaswellashersacrifices,andtheirlovehasturnedintodustymemories.,18,Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”_,Thebutterflycleanedhertearyeyesandsaid,“No.IneverfeelsorryforanythingIdoforhim.”Struckbyherreply,Godwaslostinthought:thewomanwhosufferedsomanystrugglesshouldntdeservesuchatragedy.Andhehadotherplans.Thedaybeforetheirwedding,Godrevealedthewholetruthtotheman,whichlefthimspeechless,ashethoughtshewasjustscaredandleft.Apparently,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened,andherushedtothechurchwithadeterminedheart:thistime,hewontlethergo.He