杨恒四级写作讲座.ppt

1,Lecture 5,CET-4 写作,2012年5月10日,Way to success,2,CET-4 写作,分值比例 评分原则 评分标准 写作时间安排 写作学习方法,Way to success,3,四级写作分值比例,四级总分710分，作文占15%，下面是作文标准分的换算方式： 分数 标准分 分数 标准分 分数 标准分 15 106.5 10 81 5 58.5 14 100.5 9 76.5 4 55.5 13 94.5 8 72 3 52.5 12 90 7 67.5 2 49.5 11 85.5 6 63 1 46.5 0 43.5,Way to success,4,评分原则,1、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求。 2、采用总体评分（Global Scoring)方法 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（reward scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3、 从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合判断。作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错误是否造成理解障碍。,Way to success,5,评分标准,1. 评分标准分为五个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 2. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分），但不得加或减0.5分。,Way to success,6,评分原则和评分标准,对各等级的具体解释为： 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱；语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。 5分：基本切题；表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差；有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题；有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，0分。字数不足应酌情扣分。,Way to success,7,各分值范文,2009年6月英语四级作文 Free admission to museums,越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放,目的是 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题 在我看来,Way to success,8,2分 一塌糊涂,条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples life and increase more knowldeges But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited,Way to success,9,5分糊里糊涂,基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life,Way to success,10,8分马马虎虎,基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。 There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums. ,Way to success,11,11分清清楚楚,切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. This contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development. Every coin has two sides. It can also bring some problems. For example,Way to success,12,14分漂漂亮亮,切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误。,Nowadays, more and more museums are open to the public for free. Free admissions to museums will motivate peoples interests in history, arts and science. In this way, museums can provide people with easier access to knowledge, which is of vital importance for the whole nation.,Way to success,13,However, some people hold that free admissions to museums can bring about many problems. Since anybody can enter a museum without paying, the museum can be overcrowded and it will be a difficult job for museums to maintain their collections. Besides, museums will face financial problems since they cant make profits from the admission fee. Due to the decrease in profits, museums have less motivation to up-date their collections and out-of-date museums cant avoid the fate to close up in the long run.,Way to success,14,In my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.,Way to success,15,写作时间安排,9：10 考试正式开始 8：509：00 试音时间 9：009：10 播放考场指令，发放作文考卷 9：10 开始作文考试 9：35 发放含有快速阅读的试题册（但9：40才允许开始做） 9：409：55 做快速阅读 9：5510：00 收答题卡一（即作文和快速阅读） 9：5510：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试 10：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音 ，听力结束后完成剩余考项。 11：20全部考试结束。,Way to success,16,写作时间安排,30分钟完成写作 1. 3 分钟审题 2. 25分钟写作 3. 2分钟检查 拼写 标点 语法,Way to success,17,写作学习方法,一、提高实力 背诵 默写 中译英 写作,Way to success,18,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2001年1月四级作文 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 议论文：阐述面试在求职过程中的作用及注 意事项 2001年6月四级作文 A letter to a Schoolmate 书信：给同窗好友写信邀请他参加度假活动。,Way to success,19,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2002年1月四级作文 书信：就本校食堂卫生状况给校长写一封抱怨 信 2002年6月四级作文 Student Use of Computers 图表：根据图表阐述大学生使用计算机的情况并解释原因。,Way to success,20,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2003年1月四级作文 It Pays to Be Honest 议论文：做人应该诚实 2003年6月四级作文 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 书信：假设你在某地目击一起车祸就此向警察同志写一份见证书 2003年9月四级作文 记叙、议论：简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况，以及同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的。最后谈谈人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是什么。,Way to success,21,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2004年1月四级作文 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 书信：关于报考大学专业问题给朋友回信 2004年6月四级作文 导游词：名胜古迹介绍及一天的旅游活动计划安排,Way to success,22,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2005年1月四级作文 A Campaign Speech 演讲稿：写一份竞选学生会主席的演讲稿 2005年6月四级作文 In honour of teachers on the occasion of Teachers Day 书信：在教师节给老师写信表示感谢,Way to success,23,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2005年12月四级作文 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 议论文：如何看待大学校园成为旅游热点？ 2006年6月英语四级作文 An announcement for a voluntary program 海报：校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动，现招聘志愿者,Way to success,24,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2006年12月四级作文 议论文： CCTV 春节晚会是否应该开，有的人认为该开，有的人认为不该开，你的观点 2007年6月英语四级作文 Welcome to our club 欢迎辞：欢迎加入俱乐部。,Way to success,25,2007年12月四级作文 What electives to choose 议论文：各大学开了很多选修课，学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课，以我为例。 2008年6月英语四级作文 The Internet 议论文：有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率，还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习 ，你的看法,Way to success,26,2008年12月四级作文 Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 议论文：一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用，造成的问题，限制使用塑的意义。 2009年6月英语四级作文 Free admission to museums 议论文：越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么? 这也会带来一些问题，你的看法,Way to success,27,2009年12月英语四级作文 Create a green campus 议论文：建设绿色校园十分重要 ，绿色校园不仅指绿色环境 ，为了建设绿色校园我们应该 2010年6月英语四级作文 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 议论文：如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，出现这种现象的原因，我认为(措施),Way to success,28,2010年12月四级作文 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 议论文：目前不少父母为孩子包办一切，为了让孩子独立，父母应该 2011年6月英语四级作文 Online Shopping 议论文：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚，网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题，我的建议,Way to success,29,写作学习方法,二、掌握技巧 - 模版（思路与表达） Bicycle- An Important Means of Transport in China Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people men and women, the old and the young ride their bicycles to work or study. That is why China is called “ The Kingdom of Bicycles”.,Way to success,30,第一句模版提炼,Bicycles are very popular in China. 词性转化：popular popularity In China, bicycles have gained great / wide popularity among Chinese people.,Way to success,31,练习：请完成以下真题句子的写作,2011-06：现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 2010-06：如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2009-12：建设绿色校园很重要 2009-06：越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是 什么？ 2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样,Way to success,32,2011-06：现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 In the recent decade, shopping online has gained wide popularity among youngsters.,Way to success,33,2010-06：如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However, ,Way to success,34,2009-12：建设绿色校园很重要 In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gain great popularity among universities and colleges.,Way to success,35,2009-06：越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是 什么？ In the present day society, free admission to museums is enjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.,Way to success,36,2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic bags gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.,Way to success,37,2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity among individuals.,Way to success,38,模版的提炼：思路和提炼,Bicycles are very popular in China. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. In China, no means of transportation is more popular and important than bicycles.,Way to success,39,第二句模版提炼,Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. 调查法描述：Based on a recent report, a majority of Chinese families acknowledge that they have two or three bicycles.,Way to success,40,练习：在完成首句之后，对以下现象进行描述,2011-06：现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 2010-06：如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2009-06：越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是 什么？ 2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样,Way to success,41,2011-06：现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚 Based on a recent report from China Daily, 72.34% of young people reckon that they have purchased clothes, books and other items on Taobao, Dangdang, Amazon and Group-buying websites.,Way to success,42,2010-06：如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 However, according to a recent survey, a great many learners admit that they pay less attention to words spelling.,Way to success,43,2009-06：越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是 什么？ Based on an investigation, a majority of visitors reckon that by visiting museums freely, they acquire rich knowledge on history, military and customs.,Way to success,44,2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 As a recent report reveals, a majority of residents acknowledge that they have been using these bag