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阅卷过程 阅卷程序 关于评分标准的整体印象 例文点评 10年,09年,08年及07年各题目均分比较 基础写作读写任务 10年7.5611.45 09年7.0710.32 08年6.8311.32 07年6.758.89 平均分 题型 年份 基础写作 该部分全省考生这四年均分都在及格分以下 2009年2008年2007年2006年 主要 内容 我国中小 学生近视 问题采访 报道 编写奥运 项目射击 的英语介 绍 “谁是你的 偶像”调查 报告 今昔通讯 方式的变 化 题材 健康体育/热点 话题 学校生活日常生活 命题 形式 中文提纲中文提纲表格(=柱 状图表) 图画 基础写作的特点和要求 1题材贴近考生 2内容略有开放 3命题形式多样性 4要求只能用五句 5三个评分要素 2009年高考作文 你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采的 情况: 时间:上周末 对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于50(2)人数:世界第一 专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂 (2)治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关 内容包括:1采访的时间、对象和主题; 2中小学 生近视的发生率及人数; 3专家解读。 基础写作 考生存在的主要问题 1. 词汇匮乏,造成用词不准,表达不地道 2.信息组合不合理,增加了表达的难度 3.句式单调,缺乏必要的变化 4.没有注意到时态的变化 基础写作部分的教学建议 一 强化三个重要基础训练 1.掌握简单句的五个基本句型和there be结 构 2.掌握并列句的结构 3.掌握主从复合句的结构 二 关注“三性一度”的 评分原则 内容的完整性 用词的准确性 篇章的连贯性 句子的复杂程度 三 五个重要巧技 1.使用非谓语动词短语 2.使用with的复合结构 3.用从属连词,合并为主从复合句 4.用并列连词,合并为并列复合句 5.一些特殊句型 四 加强考生信息组合能力的培养 1).信息分配均衡 2).有利于采用多种句式进行表达 读写任务 该部分全省考生均分在及格分一下 读写任务的要求和试题特点: 1.长度: 2.难度: 3.主题: 4.内容: 5.短文都是来自外国网站。 2009年高考读写任务 Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern AustraliaAll the koalas there are unhappy and complainingYou would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it offThatS right-sleep it offThe average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is SO they can be hugged and photographed by tourists,who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experienceWhatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal,which is understandableHow would you react,my friend,if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round,furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? 内容包括:(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照;(2) 假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应; (3)你认为是否 应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 2009年高考英语读写任务 考生存在的主要问题: 1.部分考生明显没有达到150字(30+120) 左右的写作要求. 2.整体而言,明显的语法错误偏多 3.段落不清,要点不明(没有进行适当的分段 ) 4.段落内部组织混乱(严重影响文章得分) 5.上下文的连贯性不够 6.书写不清楚 任务型写作部分的教学建议 1.加强写作过程中每一个环节的指导(从审题到 最后的抄写) 2. 必须要让考生能写出具有“典型特征”的段落 写好每段落的主题句 3.写作训练的系统性: 4.对主题句展开充分的论述(拓展句) 高分作文的要求 1.表达精炼简洁 2.避免低级错误 3.保证赏心悦目 4.句子错落有致 5.句式多种多样 写作教学建议 1.差生要抓基础 (记单词,背句型,练范文) 2.优生要抓书写 3.全体要抓能力 4.最后要抓技巧 例:I have a brother, he is studying in a middle school. He has many hobbies. They are basketball, swimming, running. He likes the book, there are many interesting pictures in it. He works hard on his subjects and he has passed the exam. It makes my parents happy. I have a brother studying in a middle school, he has so many hobbies as basketball, swimming, running. He likes the book with many interesting pictures in it. He works so hard that he has passed the exam, which makes my parents happy. I must admit that Im not interested in and dont like biology even though it is very helpful and important. In order to enter college, I have to choose it as my elective subject. According to my opinion, biology is not only difficult but also terrible. Only by doing a lot of homework and being busy with biology day and night can I manage to get high mark in the biology examination in the end. But I am excited that I come to develop a good sense of enjoying biology. I must confess that I dont show great interest in, and even care nothing for biology even though it is of great help and significance. For the purpose of having easy access to college, I have to choose it as my elective subject. Based on my personal idea, biology is not only challenging but also terrible. Only by doing endless homework and being occupied with (burying myself into) biology day and night can I manage to get high mark in the biology examination eventually. But what makes me excited most is that I come to develop a good sense of enjoying biology.(陈文杰) In January 2008, a blizzard, lasting twenty days, hit the southern part of China. The snow storm which is the most serious among 50 years made over 43700000 km of forest and farm badly damaged .The blocked traffic, resulting from the blizzard, caused a great number of people who wanted to go back to their hometown detained in the stations. About 100 people were killed and millions of people became homeless. In the southern part of China, the cleaning and rebuilding works are under construction. Those who want to give them their hands please call (蔡悦) As many as 70% of students think it is of great pain when failing to learn what they show interest in, therefore, they prefer to choose their majors based on their interests while 45% argue that choosing a major should depend on what the society real needs so as to develop their interests in their appropriate future jobs. Whats more, there are 25% of students who tend to take the advice from parents as well as teachers. In a short, views of choosing a major varies from person to person, however, students, I think, should treat it by hearts,(黄少霞) 高级词汇 1.important: essential/significant 2.Be interested in: show great interest in /take interest in 3.develop a sense of 4.Very difficult: challenging 5.helpful: be of great help 6.finally: eventually 7. Go home in a hurry: hurry home 9.Because of: thanks to/ owing to/ due to 10. Happen to: it happens that 11. If : on condition that 12. As a result: turn out to 13.In order to: for the purpose of/in hope of 14.hear: at the news of/On hearing the news 15.cant do sth: have trouble in doing sth/fail to do 16.lead to: result in/give rise to 17. A lot of homework: endless homework 18.dont like: care nothing for 19. Be being built: be under construction 20.be angry with: be annoyed with 21. on time: on schedule 22.be busy with: be occupied with/bury oneself in. 23. show great interest in: be fascinated by 24.make peoples lives dangerous: threaten peoples lives. 25. in ones opinion: personally speaking; based on ones personal idea. 26.apologize to sb: make an apology to sb 27.attend: be involved in/ participate in 28.face sb/ sth: be faced with 29.hold: offer/ organize 30. more and more people: an increasing number of people 31.many different sizes of rooms: rooms of many different sizes. 32.watch the performance given by the students from: enjoy the performance given by the students from 33.Live happily: live a happy life 34. See suddenly: catch sight of 35. suddenly: all of a sudden 36. want to learn everything: have a strong appetite for knowledge 37.hurriedly: in a hurry 38.try to do: spare no effort to do 39. immediately: without hesitation/ delay 40. Because: for the reason that 41.tired: exhausted 42.Be surprised at: be astonished at 43.Very quickly: in no time 44. rapidly, quickly : swiftly 45. decide: be determined to do 46.good:outstanding,distinguished 47. Concentrate on :be addicted to, be crazy about, be absorbed in 48. use: make use of/take advantage of 49. visit: pay a visit to/ go (come)tofor a visit 50.should: be supposed to 51.lie in: be located in 52.hope: be expected to 53. fear: be scared 54.and: as well as 55.send: deliver 56.spend the time with: share the time with 57.very: extremely 58. like to do: tend to do/have a tendency to do 59.know: be aware of/that 60.be sure to: will surely do 61. I hope; hopefully find,keep,fail He found it necessary to make full preparations for the coming examination. I found him associated with the case. They kept the blind informed about the latest news around the world. He failed to meet him when he arrived there. I failed to help him with his homework, for I was quite busy then. 表达人物爱憎感情: like; love; prefer; enjoy; be keen on; have a passion for; fall in deep love with; be crazy about; be fond of. hate; dislike; be tired of; be fed up with. happy; excited; pleased; satisfied;delighted. angry; sad; worried, disappointed, terrified, mad; frightened; depressed. 写作常用词组 1.养成好的饮食习惯。 2.保持健康。 3.增强体质。 4.获得知识。 5.服务国家。 6.珍惜时间, 7.增长知识,拓宽视野。 develop a good eating habit keep healthy/keep fit build up body gain knowledge serve country treasure/ value time increase ones knowledge, broaden ones view 8.迅猛增涨 9.引人注目 10.负担过重 11.很容易进入 12.养成独立的意识 13.肩负责任 14.公认是 15.尽力去做 16.想出主意 17.帮助某人 18.如前所述 19.减轻负担 increase dramatically attract more attention be heavily burdened with have easy access to develop a sense of independence shoulder the responsibility be commonly acknowledged as do what one can to do come up with an idea offer ones help to As is previously stated lighten ones burden 20.刺激工业的发展 21.使世界更加了解中国 22.沉溺于 23.发生了巨大变化 24.与-相比 25.得到资助 26.想做而不想做 27.有多少人口 28有多少面积 29.远非 30.采取有效措施 stimulate the development of industry make China better known to the world be addicted to/ be absorbed in Great changes have taken place in Compared with get the support from prefer to -rather than- have a population of have an area of/ with an area of be far from take effective measure to do 达到目标 首先 掌握 所以 实际上、其实 利用 而不是 最重要的是 正要做突然 希望 与-有联系 Achieve the goal Above all/ most importantly Have a good knowledge (command ) of As a result Actually 、 as a matter of fact Take advantage of Instead of/ rather than Most importantly Be about to do when- In hope of Be associated with 句子翻译 1.他不仅是一个科学家,而且是一个画家。 He is not only a scientist but also a painter. Not only is he a scientist, but also a painter. 2.只有用这种方式以才能够解决这个问题。 You can solve this problem only in this way. Only in this way can you solve this problem. 3.李明就是一个胸怀大志的人,他为我们树立了好 的榜样。 4.老太太坐在屋子中间,在给孩子们讲一些有趣的 故事。 Li ming is a great person full of determination, he sets a good example to us. Such is li ming ,a great person with determination, who sets a good example to us. The old lady sat in the middle of the room, she was telling the children some funny story. In the middle of the room sat the old lady, who was telling the children some funny story. 当句首状语是表示地点的介词词组时,也 常引起全部倒装。 South of the city lies a big steel factory. From the valley came a frightening sound. Under the tree stands a little boy. 划线的均是表示地点 状语的介词词组,并 且是位于句首。 lie. stand. come. appear. sit. be 1. In front of my house lies a small river, which was seriously polluted in the past. 2. Under the tree stands a boy who is my best friend. 4. There came an old lady with a baby in her arms. 5. In the classroom appear five new students this term. 6. Around the teacher sat all his students who were listening to how to solve the problem. 7. Behind me is our new teacher who graduated from Beijing university. 写作内容: 根据下列内容要点,描述你理想中的学校: 1。地点:在安静的郊区或乡下 2。设施:大的图书馆或电子图书馆 3.课程安排:每天两节课,大量时间用来阅读 4.时间设置:上午九点上课,下午三点结束 5.课外活动:多种多样,唱歌,跳舞,艺术等 用于“形容词(或名词、动词) as (though)” 引导的让步状语从句。 Though she is young, she is not clever. =Pretty as she is, she is not clever. Though he is a child, he knows a lot. =Child as he is, he knows a lot. Money as they had, they dont know how to spend it. 在 so / such that 的结构中,若so 置于 句首,则句子部分倒装 So difficult a problem is it that I cant work it out. So interested in physics is he that he is always forgetting his meal. Such a noble person is he that people all respect him. 5.我真的希望你能来中国参观。 I do hope that you can come to China for a visit. 6.我坚信他在这一点上是正确的。 I hope you can visit ( pay a visit to )China. I firmly believe that he is right on this point. I do believe that he is right on this point. 直到老师告诉他,才直到自己所犯的错误。 It was not until the teacher told him that he was aware of the mistakes he has made. 是他带着我找到了我所去的地方。 就是在这个城市我们第一次相遇。 It was he who led me to the place where I want to go It was in this city that we met each other for the first time. 7.为了使学生的生活丰富多彩,我们学校将要举 办多种多样的活动。 8.我认为政府应该多加关注我们所生存的活动。 In order to make the students life coloful, our school will offer us different kinds of activities.In order to make the students life coloful, activities of different kinds will be offered in our school. I think our government should focus its attention on the environment we live in. I do think that our government s attention should be focused on the environment we live in. 9.他将是第一个到山区任教的大学生。 10.你认识不认识和你妈妈说话的那个老人。 11.你读过鲁迅写的小说吗? He will be the first university student who will teach in the mountain village. He will be the first university student to teach in the mountain village. Do you know the old man who is talking to your mother? Do you know the old man talking to your mother? Have you read the novels which were written by Luxun. Have you read the novels written by luxun? 12.很多人参加的那次会议举办的很成功。 13.雨下得很大,造成了这个地区的严重水灾。 14.杰克生于1984年,是一名工人。 The meeting, which were attended by many people, is a great success. The meeting , attended by many people, is a great success. It had rained heavily, which resulted in severe flood in this area. It had rained heavily, resulting in severe flood in this area. Jack who was born in 1984, and he is a worker. Jack, born in 1984, is a worker. 15.他坐在桌子旁边,在看报纸。 16.猎户离开房间,后面给着他的狗。 17.她坐在窗户旁边,陷入了沉思。 He sat at the table and he was reading newspaper. He sat at the table, reading newspaper. The hunter left the room, and he was followed by his dog. The hunter left the room, followed by his dog. She sat by the window and she was lost in thought. She sat by the window, lost in thought. 18.冰加热到一定程度时,它就会变成水。 19.和你比起来,我们还有很长的路要走。 When it was heated enough, water can be changed into water. When heated enough, water can be changed into water. If we are compared with you, we still have a long way to go. If compared with you, we still have a long way to go. 20.她在看电视时,忍不住流下了眼泪。 21.听到这个消息时,他高兴的跳了起来。 While she was watching TV, she couldnt keep back her tears. While watching TV, she couldnt keep back her tears. When he heard the news, he jumped with great joy. On hearing the news, he jumped with great joy. 22.如果你听从我的建议,将会按时完成任务。 23.尽管以个人留在屋里,萨姆一点也不害怕。 You can finish the task on time if you take my advice. You can finish the task if taking my advice. Though he was left alone at home, Sam wasnt afraid at all. Though left alone at home, Sam wasnt afraid at all. Though it was raining heavily, we managed to find the lost boy. Heavily as it was raining, we managed to find the lost boy 24.我认为很有必要提前到达那个地方。 25.他应该做的是呆在家里,等他的母亲下班回来 。 I think it is necessary to get there ahead of time. I think it necessary to get there ahead of time. What he should do is to stay at home, waiting for his mother from work. He should do is that he stays at home and waits for his mother from work. 26.中国国家主席胡锦涛下个月将要对美国进行友 好访问。 27.老是在讲课,那个学生站在外面。 Hu Jintao, president of China, will pay a friendly visit to the United States next month. The teacher is giving a lesson while his student is standing outside. The teacher is giving a lesson with his student standing outside. 28.这个孩子还没有做完作业就出去玩了。 29.在这个还的带领下。我们好不费劲的找到了他 的家。 30.我认为电脑在我们日常生活中很重要,可是我 们的工作效率提高。 The child went out for a play, he didnt finish his homework. The child went out for a play with his homework unfinished. With the boy leading us, we had no difficulty in finding his home. Computer,I think, is of vital importance in our daily life, which can make (making) us work effectively. 31.由于对他们谈话很好奇,所以他就坐在 靠近他们的地方。 Because he was curious what they were talking about, he sat closer to them. Curious about what they were talking about, he sat closer to them. 主语从句 32.我们现在最需要的就是得到他的帮助。 33.他现在应该做的就是呆在家里等他妈妈 下班回来。 What we are in great need of is to get help from him. What he is supposed to do is to stay at home ,waiting for his mother to come back from work. 表语从句 这就是他做告诉我要做的。 这就是他今天没来上学的原因。 这就是他要去的地方。 This is what he told me to do. Thats why he was absent from school today. Thats where he wants to go. With and without He likes learning with the window open. The teacher came into the classroom with a book in his hand. The teacher is giving a class with the boy standing outside. He went out for a play with his homework unfinished. With the boy to lead us, We had no difficulty in finding limings home 万能句型模板 用于开头的句型 With the rapid development of science and technology ,an increasing number of people come to realize that knowledge is power/a weak nation has no internatioal prestige/education is of vital importance) With the growing popularity of computers in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed. Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about is under way in China. Some people believe thatwhereas others argue that How can we succeed in a job interview? Different people have different opinion on this question. Some people believe that 用于结尾的句型 From the graph)table,chart) listed above, it can be seen that In a word, there is no time to be lost in solving the problem of air pollution. We must take some immediate and effective measures to control it. From what has been discussed above, and taking all these factors into account,we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive at the conclusion that 表示原因。 The reason for this are as follow. There is good reason to believe that 表示好处。 It has the following advantages. It is beneficial to(of great benefit to ) us 表示缺点、坏处。 It has more disadvantages than advantages. It does us much harm/It is harmful to us. 表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能。 It is important (necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do. It plays an important part in our life. 表示措施、怎样做。 We should take some effective measures. We should try our best to overcome the difficulties. We should solve the problems that we are confronted with. 表示变化。 A great change will certainly be produced in Sth has brought about many changes in Sth 表示事实、现状。 We can not ignore the fact that No noe can deny the fact that There is no denying the fact that There is a phenomenon that many people are interested in 表示比较。 Compared with sth I prefer to do sth rather than do There is a striking contrast between them. 表示数量。 The population in this ci

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