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高考英语作文建议信五篇建议信写作一、基础写作的内容分类1.应用文2. 人物写照3. 地方介绍4. 调查报告5. 事物介绍6. 新闻采访7. 看图写作8. 图表说明二、实例分析在紧张的高三备考阶段,各校为了确保教学质量,除了早读和晚自习以外,每天至少要上 9 节课,甚至周末都要上课,学生们有大量的作业要完成,感到非常疲倦。为此,校学生会根据学生的实际情况,给校长写了封信,表达你们的需求和建议。a)适当减少课时,留出思考时间b)反复训练重要、易错知识点,培养能力c)减少作业量以保证质量d)少些批评,多些鼓励注意:短文开头已给出。No. 42 Zhongshan Road,Shenzhen City, GuangdongChinaJune 8,20*1)In order to guarantee the teaching quality in the course of the general revision, we senior three students at least have 9 periods each day apart from morning and evening classes.2)Besides, we have got a lot of homework to do, which makes us exhausted.3)According to the real situation of us students, we think that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves.4)Meanwhile, give us more practice on those important and confusing points to cultivate our ability to deal with problems. 5)Furthermore, reduce daily homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all. YoursStudents Union讨论:1. 建议信的内容安排信头 _称呼_第 1,2 句 _第 3,4,5 句 _结束语 _签名 _2. 时 态 _3. 人 称 _4. 语言特征 _技巧点拨1. 概念:建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2. 分类:1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3. 内容安排:1)开门见山地写出写信的原因、背景;2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由4. 语言特征:1)建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2)提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。5. 注意事项1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3)符合英文信件的基本格式4)语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。三、常用写作句型1. 表对对方的情况表示理解,并乐意帮忙:Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to Im very glad to hear that you want to and give you some suggestions on how toIt is my pleasure to do Im willing to give a hand to you.After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that I know you have trouble inafter reading your letterI am writing to you for the purpose of -I am writing to share some advice with you.I am writing to express my views concerningYou have asked me for my advice onand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.Thanks for trusting me. Regarding, Id like to make some suggestions.2. 提建议的句式It is useful / helpful / important / necessaryfor you to doIt should be a good idea for you to doIt will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sthIt does harm to sb / sth = It is harmful tobenefits = be beneficial to = do good toI think it would be more beneficial if you could In my opinion, it would be better if you doAs far as Im concerned/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action.I would like to suggest/recommend thatIf I were you, I wouldI wonder if you have considered the following tips.I feel that it would be more beneficial if you could When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you shouldYou may consider doing3. 表意见并列的连词表先后次序:First, second, third.FinallyFirstly, secondly,eventuallyto begin with/ to start with, at last递进关系:furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in other words;at the same time;4.建议信结尾常用句式I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.If you have any more problem, please feel free to contact me at any time.Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.四、写作模板广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的 John 作为节目编辑助理。现在, John 就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给 John 写信:Dear John,I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。建议每周六、日举办,方便学生周末观看。建议邀请中学生参加节目, 激发学生的收看兴趣。这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化, 还有助于提高中学生的英语水平, 这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。句 1:cover / include(1)包括(节目) _(2)历史,教育,景点 ,饮食,名人History, education, scenic spots / tourist attractions, food, famous people / celebrities _句 3:(3) 激发某人的兴趣 spark / stimulate / arouse ones interest _句 4: improve ones English(4)提高英语水平_句 5:(5)受到欢迎 be popular among/with sb. / be well-received by/be welcomed by _3、难句翻译。 翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句 2:(1) (这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。(1) It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.2)方便学生周末观看。(2)We students can have the chance to watch it. /It will be convenient for us students to watch it. 合并:It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果关系, 可以使用 so. that.句型)句 3:(3) (你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program.(4) (这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。(4) It will surely arouse /spark /stimulate other students interest in it.合并:You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in theprogram, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students interest in it.(补充说明关系, 可以使用 which 非限制性定语从句)句 4:(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。(5) This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.(6) (中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。(6) The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(7) (这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。(7) This program helps students improve their English.并:Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第 5 个句子和第 7 个句子是并列关系, 因此我们可以用 not only.but also.这组连词把它们连接起来, 并且注意统一主语,第 6 句是作者提出建议的原因, 可以用 so as to 引导出目的状语。)4、连句成篇。把句子合并成篇章的时候, 需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的, 如:You have asked me for my advice on.and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me. /Regarding., Id like to make some suggestions 等句型。在表示建议的时候, 很多同学习惯使用祈使句或者 You should 的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬,因此可以转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如可以使用 I feel that it would be beneficial if./ I would like to suggest that.等句型。另外, 若是使用虚拟语气的句子If I were you, I would., 也会让文章增色不少。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如 wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。Dear John,I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students. So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua5、检查修改:词,句,篇六、能力提高To Whom It May Concern常用表示建议的句式段首:m writing to express my viewson/concerning2. You have asked for some adviceconcerning and I will try to giveyou my suggestions.3. I would like to suggest that4. I am writing in reply to5. In my opinion, I would say提出建议中:think/believe it would bebetter/very helpful / beneficial ifyou is desirable that 是可取的.would like to suggest/ recommendthat Why not would help to . This wouldthere could be 段尾: hope that you may consider doing 2 I would be ready to further discuss this decision. trust you will take my suggestions into account.高中英语满分书信作文模板建议信Dear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard to_ , and I will try to makesome practical suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _.I hope you will find theseproposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Yours sincerely,Li Ming模板:Dear ,I am writing to make somesuggestions as to/ I am writing to express my views concerning./ You have asked me for my advice with regard to , and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would bewise to / I would like to suggest first that . With the help of , you can Besides/In addition/Whatsmore/ Furthermore, if you , you would be able to .Finally/ Last but not least/, youmay consider. This way .I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration, and your prompt 迅速的 attention to my suggestions would be highly appreciated./ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely,Li Hua例文:建议信(1)-阐释原因;提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:1.菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。注意:1.词数不少于 120;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!Yours, Li Hua作文范文: Dear Principal,Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)price 价格2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品5. For one thing,. For another,6. make sb (not)do sth7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us cant afford them.10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which cant satisfy our needs.11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12. The food in the canteen doesnt taste .The taste of food in the canteen isnt13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted14. Its a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16. In the long run, its bad for our health and study.17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19. I think its necessary to provide more kinds of food.20. Its high time that we took measures to solve the problems.So its high time for us to take measures21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve thepresent condition to satisfy the students needs.22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23. The canteen should open more windows so that we neednt wait so long.24. As far as Im concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. Whats more,different kinds of food should be provided.25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.建议模板: Dear .,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to.(引出话题 ). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.建议句型积累:1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most effective ones.2. Id like to make some suggestions on .3. Its of great importance for sb to do sth.Its necessary for sb to do sth4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if. It contributes /helps a lot if 6. I suggest that / My suggestion is that Its suggested / advised / recommended that7. Youd better do sth./ Wed better do sthIts better to do sth8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sthWe are supposed to take effective measures to do sth9. Its high time that sb sth. / Its high time for sb to do sth建议信(2)-阐释原因;提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫 Sad Mother 的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?写作要点:1.表明了解她的问题;2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因;3.提出至少两条建议 要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于 100。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Hi,Sad Mother,I have learned that_作文范文: Hi,Sad Mother,she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she lie .heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, dont be too strict.微小的) mistakes.需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:daughter 女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事was because she didnt want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.2. She isnt aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And its you who can do this.4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.7. The reason why she didnt tell you the truth may be that she didnt want to let you down.8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.12. As far as Im concerned, its better to communicate with her in a friendly way to let her know its wrong to tell lies.13. Its suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. Moreover, its better to encourage her to do what she wants.改错:1. There are some advice.2. Dont sad.3. You should give her more encourage.4. She may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.5. If she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out.6. She doesnt want you angry.7. Please not to be so worried.8. One of the reason is that she isnt dare to tell you the truth.9. Because she afraid parents.10. So she dont want to mention it.11. You should apology to her.12. Youd better to encourage her to be a honest people.13. Youd better be care about her health and study.14. Im very understand your condition.15. She may doesnt want you to be angry.建议信(3)为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑 Jamie,收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:1表示理解并给予安慰;2提出建议并说明理由。注意:1词数 120 左右;2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment.Yours, Jamie Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips.First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble youre faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon become calmer and better.Yours, JamieHighlights:, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2. Whats more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.3. To solve the problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about
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