英语高考作文范文17.求助信ppt课件.ppt

1、17.求助信,1,文体概述 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容： 1. 表明写信目的，请求帮助。 2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。 3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。,2,常用语块 做某事有麻烦 _ 2. 给某人帮助 _ 3. 寻求帮助 _ 4. 遇到一些问题 _ 5. 面临困难 _,have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth.,do sb. a favor / give sb. a hand,ask for help / seek for help,encounter

2、some problems,be faced with difficulties,3,6. 忙于做某事 _ 7. 为某事做准备 _ 8. 集中精力 _ 9. 学以致用 _ 10. 让某人失望 _,let sb. down,be busy doing sth. / be engaged in doing sth.,prepare for sth.,concentrate on / focus on,putinto use,4,11. 克服恐惧 _ 12. 取得巨大的进步_ 13. 渴望做某事 _ 14. 提供一些有建设性的指导 _ 15. 因某事感激某人_,be grateful to sb.

3、for sth.,overcome the fear,make great progress,be anxious to do sth. / long to do sth.,offer some constructive guidance,5,套用句式 我写信想请您帮我一个忙。 2. 我遇到三个困扰我的问题。首先，其次，最困扰我的是 3. 不幸的是，我觉得做某事很困难。,3. Unfortunately, I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth.,1. I am writing this letter to ask you to do me

4、a favor/give me a hand.,2. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, Whats more, What troubles me most is,6,4. 面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给予我一些关于的建议吗？ 5. 我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。,4. Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me

5、 some advice on?,5. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.,7,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, the Chinese student takes summer courses in your university. I am writing to ask for help. I come here last month and found my course

6、s interested. And I have some difficulties with note- taking and I have no idea of what to use the library.,a,taking,came,interesting,But,how,8,I told that the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.

7、 Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or call to me. Here is my email address and phone number: ; 12345678. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,on,are,9,1. the a此处表示“一个”学生，表泛指，要用冠词a。 2. takes taking此处是非谓语，且与逻辑主语是主动关系，故用现在分词taking。 3. come came由后面的last month可知，要用一般过去

8、时。 4. interested interesting此处是指courses令人有趣的，是修饰物。 5. And But根据上下文的逻辑关系，此处应该表示“转折”，而不是“递进”。,10,6. what how根据句意应该是不知道怎样使用图书馆，故用how。 7. 在told前加was此处表示“我被告知”，应该用被动语态，且是在写信前被告知，故用一般过去时的被动语态。 8. in on具体指“星期几的下午/上午”，要用介词on。 9. 去掉call后的to因为call是及物动词。 10. is are此句是倒装句，主语是my email address and phone number，故用

9、are。,11,课堂练习 假定你是李华，你正在为高考紧张复习，但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1. 作业多，没有时间运动。 2. 压力大，难以入睡。 3. 希望得到Kate的帮助。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,12,Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exam, but un

10、fortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. Im encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.,13,Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my

11、parents makes me extremely stressful because I dont want to let them down. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the above problems, Im anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Sincerely yours,

12、 Li Hua,14,课外作业 假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Tom写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下： 1. 本人简介。 2. 求助内容。 3. 希望得到Tom的帮助。 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,15,Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in your school. Currently, Im having trouble learning English. So Im writing to ask you for help. Th

13、erere two main problems Im faced with now. First, I find it quite hard to master the English grammatical rules and put them into use. Furthermore, so nervous do I feel in front of my classmates that I cant say a word in English.,16,Therefore, I sincerely hope you can offer me some advice on how to study E