高中英语高考写作之写好建议信.ppt

1、Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read book

2、s, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you

3、 learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua,How to write a letter for advice,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。 全卷整洁美观，书写端正,要点全,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道,连接词,写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构

4、，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。,常用句式,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图) 1After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that 2I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 3.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 4. You have asked me for my adv

5、ice with onand Ill try to make some suggestions. 5.I am writing to express my views concerning.,B. 表达建议（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that 3. If I were you, I would 4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5.I s

6、uggest that 6. You would better do/ not do 7. You may consider doing first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats more,C.建议信结尾常用句式,1. I believe you will take my advice into account /consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful

7、. 3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,篇章结构及内容： 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。 结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。 注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few sug

8、gestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua,Dear_, You have asked me f

9、or my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Y

10、ours, XXX,假如你朋友Jim是多年的烟民，现身体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他戒烟。,Task 1,1.首段：写信的目的,After reading your letter, I am sorry to know you are not well these days and that you still have trouble in giving up smoking.So I am writing to express my views on how to quit smoking.,2.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议,主题句 + 建议：意志； 参与有益活动, 远离烟友,2.关于如何戒

11、烟的建议,主题句： In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _. About how to stop smoking ,here are a few suggestions . In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.,I have read many books and also have searched some information about how to quit smoking. Here are some a

12、dvice I found for you, hoping they may be helpful. Firstly,to give up smoking,you must have strong will. you have to inform yourself again and again that smoking not only does harm to your health, but also does harm to your families. Secondly,I think you can take part in some healthy activities such

13、 as swiming, reading newspapers and magzines,listening to the music. Only if you have much to do, will you forget to smoke. Thirdly,I think it would be more beneficial if you could stay away from other smokers because they may have a bad influence on you.,3.结尾,I hope youll find these proposals usefu

14、l and I wish you lead a healthy life and be happy everyday.,Dear Jim， After reading your letter, I am sorry to know you are not well these days and that you still have trouble in giving up smoking.So I am writing to express my views on how to quit smoking. I have read many books and also have search

15、ed some information about how to quit smoking. Here are some advice I found for you, hoping they may be helpful. Firstly,to give up smoking,you must have strong will. you have to inform yourself again and again that smoking not only does harm to your health, but also does harm to your families.,Seco

16、ndly,I think you can take part in some healthy activities such as swiming, reading newspapers and magzines,listening to the music. Only if you have much to do, will you forget to smoke. Thirdly,I think it would be more beneficial if you could stay away from other smokers because they may have a bad

17、influence on you. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I wish you lead a healthy life and be happy everyday. yours sincerely, XXX,假如你是营养师Mr. Li,李华向你写信咨询有关如何保持健康的建议： 1.健康的重要性 2.如何保持健康,Task 2,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like

18、 to give you some advice. As the proverb says, “No one knows the value of health until he loses it”. In other words, nothing is more important than health. Good health is beneficial to your work and study. But how to keep healthy? Here I want to give you some advice. First, you should have a regular

19、 life: go to bed and get up early. Second, keep a healthy and balanced diet: eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy and fiber; eat as little sugar and oily food as possible. Dont eat food which has gone bad. Third, get rid of the bad habits such as smoking, drinking or staying

20、up too late. Physical exercise can make your body strong, so we should exercise every day. In a word, health is more valuable than anything else. We should do everything we can to keep us healthy. yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would

21、 like to give you some advice. As we all know, health is very important for everyone . Without health, its more difficult for us to enjoy a happy life. However, in our life, not everyone can have a healthy lifestyle. To be healthy, we should take proper exercise and have a balanced diet. Besides, ha

22、ving a scientific timetable is also very necessary. In addition, wed better develop some good habits in our daily life and keep away from alcohol and drugs. Whats more, as students, we should not be addicted to addictive computer games, which will distract us from study. In a word, its a good idea f

23、or us to keep fit. Only in this way can we live a positive life. yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods,such as fish fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of stud