一招搞定雅思小作文 终极版本.ppt

1、雅思小作文,目录,小作文基本信息,字数：150字 时间：17-20分钟为宜 分值比重：占了作文分数的1/3 类型： 图表类作文,小作文类型,线形图：line graph 柱状图：bar chart 饼图：pie chart 表格：table 流程图：flow chart 地图：map,line graph,line graph,bar chart,bar chart,pie chart,pie chart,table,table,flow chart,map,主流题型,线形图 柱状图 饼图 表格,主流图形分类,把上述4种图形可以总的分为2种： 1 动态趋势图 2 静态数据图 区分标准： 1 动

2、态趋势图：多时间， 上升下降，做纵向比较 2 静态数据图：单时间， 多和少 ， 做横向比较,动态图中的线形图,上升（v）,increase rise go up grow jump climb,下降（v）,decrease decline go down fall drop,修饰上升下降（v）的变化幅度词（adv）,轻微地 slowly slightly marginally,变化幅度词（adv）,平缓地 steadily smoothly gradually moderately,变化幅度词（adv）,剧烈地 significantly sharply dramatically drasti

3、cally steeply surprisingly strikingly hugely,几个特殊动词,increase significantly= soar rocket surge,上升(n),increase rise growth,下降（n）,decrease decline fall drop,修饰上升下降(n)的变化幅度词（adj）,把刚才变化幅度词（adv）去掉ly，就成了形容词，除了下面三个词： dramatically-dramatic drastically- drastic steadily-steady,到达顶点,reach the peak peak (v) 注：达

4、到底点 reach the bottom,波动性下降,sth have/show a downward trend sth decrease with (minor) fluctuations 注：波动性上升 sth have/show an upward trend sth increase with (minor) fluctuations,保持不变,keep/remain+ unchanged stable steady constant,带数据的介词,带数据的介词,从到 fromto eg: The sales of the computers increased slightly f

5、rom 500 to 700.,带数据的介词,表示“了” by 比如：电脑销量轻微地上升了200台。 The sales of computers increased slightly by 200.,带数据的介词,表示某个时间点稳定的数据 at stand at 比如：1990年的时候电脑的销量是500台。 The sales of computers were/stood at 500 in 1990. 比如：电脑的销量在2005年的时候以2100台的水平达到了顶点。 The sales of the computers reached the peak at 2100 in 1990.,

6、时间的表达,时间的表达,1 在某个时间点 in+年或月 in 2010 in the year of 2010 in August on+日 on 1st at+小时 at 10pm,时间的表达,2 从一个时间到另一个时间 如:从1990年到1997年 from 1990 to 1997,时间的表达,3 在一个时间和另一个时间之间 如：在1990年到1997年之间 between 1990 and 1997,时间的表达,4在某段之间里 如：在1990年到1997年的7年之间 during/over/throughout 7-year period between 1990 and 1997 d

7、uring/over/throughout 7-year period from 1990 to 1997,时间的表达,5 自从since 直到until,动态图中必用的三大句型,1 主题+变化（v）+ 变化幅度（adv）+数据+时间 2 There be + a + 变化幅度（adj）+ 变化（n）+ in +主题+数据+时间 3 时间+see/experience/witness/undergo+ a +变化幅度（adj）+变化（n）+in +主题+数据 注：第三种句型也可以用主题做主语,第一部分,The sales of the computers increased slowly fr

8、om about 600 to 900 between 2001 and 2002. There was a marginal growth in the sales of the computers from 600 in 2001 to 900 in 2002.,第二部分,The sales of the computers rose steadily by 500 in the following year . The following year saw/witnessed/experienced a steady increase to 1400.,第三部分,The sales of

9、 computers went up dramatically since 2003,reaching the peak at 4000 in 2005. The sales of computers increased steeply to the peak at 4000 in 2005.,第四部分,The sales of computers showed a downward trend, decreasing to 3000 in 2007. There was a downward trend in the sales of computers during the followi

10、ng two years, which decreased to 3000 in 2007.,第五部分,The sales of the computers remained steady at 3000 in 2008.,第六部分,The sales of computers declined dramatically to 1800 in 2009.,全段,There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from 600 to 900 between 2001 and 2002, and they increased graduall

11、y to 1400 in the following year. Then they rose dramatically to the peak at 4000 in 2005. After that there was a downward trend in the sales, which decreased to 3000 in 2007. Before they decreased sharply to 1800 in 2009, they remained constant at 3000.,动态图中起点的写法,第一种：直接带过法 There was a slight growth

12、in the sales of computers from 600 to 900 between 2001 and 2002, and they increased marginally to 1400 in the following year.,动态图中起点的写法,第二种：起点单独介绍 如果起点单独介绍又可以用2种手段 a：用介词at带数据法 b：用直接带数据法,a：用介词at带数据法写起点,The sales of computers stood/were at 600 in the year of 2001. Beef was most popular in the year of

13、1979, for its consumption was at 200 grams per person per week.,b：用直接带数据法,In 2001, 600 computers were sold in that shop. About 7 million tonnes of CFC-11 were produced in the year of 1980. 注：2种单独写起点的手法，后面可以直接跟上which从句,写顶点的方法,第一种方法：用分词的方法 The sales of computers went up dramatically since 2003,reachin

14、g the peak at 4000 in 2005. 第二种方法：用which从句形式 The sales of computers went up dramatically since 2003,which reached the peak at 4000 in 2005. 第三种方法：直接法 The sales of computers increased steeply to the peak at 4000 in 2005.,呈现出向上或向下趋势,用了show/have a downward trend这个句型后发现数据比较难带，可以采用以下的办法： The sales of the

15、 computers showed a downward trend, decreasing/which decreased from XX to XX.,带数据方法的总结,1 介词带数据法 2 直接带数据法 3 从句带数据法 4 分词带数据法 5 括号带数据法,动态小作文开头段,The line graph/bar chart shows/ illustrates/ demonstrates/ reveals/ describe the changes/ trends in + 数据表现形式 + 数据表达对象+ 地点 + 时间。,The graph below shows the consu

16、mption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004,静态图形的写作,其实要写好静态图的一个关键步骤是如何加工数据。 如果数据加工不好，会产生两个比较严重的问题，一是字数不够，二是感觉文章是数字的罗列。,加工数据的方法,数据加工一般可以有三种方法 1 描写数据本身所传达给你的最直观信息 2 进行各个项目之间的横向比较，这个是最重要的 3 对数据进行一个模糊化表达,横向比较的方法,所谓横向比较，就是两个或者多个不同事物在同一时间或者同一范围内的比较。在静态图的写作中极

17、其重要。一般我们会有以下的8种方式进行横向比较。,第一种,the popularity of different car color,第一种,1 The most popular car color is white. 在此基础上，我们可以用小括号带数据，定语从句，或者分词带入数据。 The most popular color is white, 1 which accounts for 56% 2 accounting for 56% 3 (56%),第一种,2 在主系表结构中，还可以把主语和表语互换。 White is the most popular car color. 3 The

18、highest percentage of the popularity of car color is white. greatest proportion largest 4 White has the largest percentage of all car colors. 5 White has 56% of all the car color,第二种,图中红色所占百分比仅此于白色，所以我们也可以说： A significant percentage of car color is red Red is substantially/ considerably/ significant

19、ly/ much/ far more common than blue. 如果表示只多一点点，那么可以说： Sth is a little more common that sth.,第三种,从数据的比较中，还可以考虑用分数的表达方式: Red has almost a third of the total number of different car colors. School A has almost a quarter students as school B. There is a quarter as many students in school A as in school

20、B.,第四种,与分词相类似的是倍数 1 White is about twice as common as red. 2 The number of students in school A is twice as many as that in school B.,第五种,有时候比较的数量比较多，可以将其排序，尤其可用于饼图和表格图中。 A is largest, followed by B. C comes next. D ranks fourth. E takes the fifth position. F lies last.,第六种,两个被比较对象如果数量相同，也值得描述 1 A a

21、nd B both had 10%. 2 A is exactly the same popular as B. 3 A is same in size/ popularity with B.,第七种,两个比较数据数量接近，也要考虑 1 School A has almost/ nearly as many students as school B. 2 School A has almost the same number of students as school B. 3 The number of students in school A is similar with that in

22、 school B. 4 School A come close to school B in the number of students.,第八种,要是比较对象相差很悬殊的话 The greatest difference is found in sp, where A , B, The main difference between A and B is that,The pie chart shows the total meat sold.,As can be seen in the pie chart, chicken, which makes up 40%, is the mos

23、t popular among the total meat sold, then next is pork and it occupies 20%, followed by the beef, constituting 18%; and finally come lamb,fish and others, at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively.,表格,The table shows the female workforce and managers in 5 countries.,The table lists the percentage of the total

24、workforce and the percentage of managers who are women in five countries. The Unite States has a roughly gender-balanced workforce: women make up about half the countrys working population (46%). Women in Australia and Japan have similar share of the countrys labor force (42% and 41%respectively). N

25、ext comes Sri Lanka with 37% of all workers being women. Finally, Egypt is where the most striking gender difference is found : there is only one women for every four men in the workplace.,Turning to employment at management levels, the United States and Australia have a similar percentage of manage

26、rs who are women (43% and 41% respectively), which is only slightly lower than the corresponding percentage of women in the overall workforce. However, managerial positions in the other three countries are predominantly occupied by men, as women constitutes only 12% of all managers in both Egypt and

27、 Japan, and only 9% in Sri Lanka,动静结合图,动静结合,The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adults Americans in two of the years.,Numer of marriages and divorce in the USA 1970-2000,Marital status of adult Americans, 1970 and 20

28、00,In terms of the marital status of adults in America, it can be seen that the majority of Americans were married, for the percentage in 1970 was highest,accounting for 70%. Compared with that of married adults, the percentage of widowed adults was considerably lower, at 8%. But the percentage of b

29、oth marital status showed a downward trend in the following 30 years, decreasing to 59% and 6% in 2000.,While about 15% of adults never married and only a tiny share of adults divorced (2%) in 1970. and the figues increased gradually to 20% and 8% respectively in the year of 2000.,流程图,流程图注意事项： 1 时态为

30、一般现在时态 2 尽可能多使用被动语态，以显示客观和正式 3 分清楚图中基本上分几个步骤，把箭头变成相应的动词 4 多使用表示顺序的连接词 5 如有可能，多使用表示被动的分词，来代替被动语态,流程图,流程图开头的写法 The diagram shows the production of sth, and the whole procedure can be divided into (how many) stages. It works as follows. The following picture shows the structure of sth, and it mainly co

31、nsist of (how many) parts.,流程图,表示时间顺序的连词： 首先 in the first stage the first stage is to do sth the first stage involves sth to begin with,流程图,表示时间顺序的连词： 其次 after this in the following stage the second stage is to do sth,流程图,表示时间顺序的连词： 最后 eventually in the last stage,流程图1,The diagram below show the lif

32、e cycle of this silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.,流程图1,范文1,The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworth. First of all, egges are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry le

33、aves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.,范文1,The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk c

34、loth. Once selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be seperated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage. Overall, the diagrams show that the coccon stage

35、of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.,流程图2,The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer.,范文2,This series of five diagrams shows how three kinds of organic wastes are turned into a chemical mixture or fertilizer to be use

36、d for garden plants. A plastic container, two cubic meters in volume, stores these wastes. On its fours walls are three tires of vents for air coming in and going out. Waste food lies at the bottom of the container and piles up to 15cm in height. On its top is grass which is also 15cm in thickness.

37、Then shredded newspaper are spread over.,范文2,Nitrogen is poured in. Water is needed only when it is hot in weather. With the cover tightly closed on the container, the decomposition process of these organic wastes is starting under the effect of heat and vapor begins emitting out, too. The biogas ar

38、ises continuously from the pile of wastes and releases out. After six months of fermentation all the wastes are finally converted into fertilizer. This illustrates a chain of chemical reactions than can be transform what are the wastes to something useful, even valuable.,流程图3,The flow chart below sh

39、ows the three stages of glass bottle recycling.,范文3,This diagram illustrates the recycling process of glass bottles. The whole process is a cycle which can be divided into three main stages. In the first stage, used bottles are collected at a recycling point ready to be transported by a truck. The s

40、econd stage first takes place in a cleaning plant, where these recycled bottles are sorted by color into green, brown and clear ones, and washed by high pressurised water. When this clean process finishes, the bottles are transported to a glass factory where they are cut into pieces which are then p

41、oured into a furnace. After being heated in the furnace, the molten glass, mixed with added glass liquid from other sources, flows into a glass mold. After the remolding process a new bottle emerges.,范文3,In the final stage, new, empty bottles are filled with liquid, packed and despatched to the supe

42、rmarket ready to be picked by consumers. At this point, a cycle has been completed and a new cycle will begin.,地图,地图要注意是否有指南针，要是没有就按照上北下南，左西右东。,地图1,The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000.,范文1,The three diagrams illustrate what the village of Kelsbey l

43、ooked like in 1780, 1860 and 2000. In 1780, Kelsbey had only 100 homes. But it had a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the middle, In the west there was a river running from north to south. The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes. But

44、 the size of farmland and woods was reduced by half. In the same year, a bridge could be seen over the river and a road was constructed linking the river to the residences. 140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared. Several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the v