初中英语写作课件.ppt

1、一、题型与特点 中考“书面表达”属于开放性的主观题，在命题中力求体现以下特点： 所选用的题材贴近考生生活和情感； 需要使用的语言材料是考生掌握的； 对字数的要求相对稳定（80左右）； 对语法不做过高要求； 通过文字说明或图画对考生所写内容进行限定，这类题型要求考生根据提示写出内容连贯、意思完整的短文。考生既要考虑人称、时态，还要考虑前后的联系，也给考生的发挥留下了很大的空间。,典型病例,名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用,名词的单复数问题：,1. Joy found there was much fish in the lake

2、.,2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.,3.Many place are very dry.,Joy found there were many fish in the lake.,The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.,Many places are very dry.,时态和语态问题,Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy. At last her mo

3、ther saved Joy. They were all got wet.,2. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.,3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park.,Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet.,On Tree Planting Day,many trees wer

4、e planted in Yongan Park.,Toms mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.,4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.,The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.,主谓一致问题,1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.,2. Everything are going very well.,3. David with his little brothe

5、r go to the park every Sunday.,4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,And now many rivers become very dirty.,Everything is going very well.,David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday,There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,Chinglish 现象,

6、1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.,2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.,Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.,My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language Sc

7、hool.,行文的逻辑性问题,1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mothers help.,2. But she wasnt careful, so that she fell into the river.,At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.,She wasnt careful, and she fell into the river.,词类错用,1.When I was sadly, I played with

8、it. When I was happily, I played with it.,2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy.,When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.,All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.,请你当老师,书面表达 自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越

9、多的人这使得。骑车既可以，又可以。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？,请你当老师,Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can he

10、lp people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.,Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.,Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to go to school or go to work by bike

11、. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.,English W

12、riting 英语书面表达训练,写过去的事,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,Write a short passage talking about feelings when receivi

13、ng a gift. What was the gift? Who gave it to you and why? How did you feel when you opened it? (4) Did the person who gave it think carefully about it.,Have a try!,You may use some sentences like the following: 1. My best/worst gift is 2. I got it on my thirteenth birthday. 3. gave it to me. 4. It m

14、ade me 5. I hope my gift is ,书面表达经典示例,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。 _About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,附图,1,2,3,4,一幅图，一要点,时态直达 语态到位,介/副词紧随,抓要点，配动词,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,

15、At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sud

16、den right turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to chec