《作文润色技巧》PPT课件.ppt

1、润色技巧,6.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. 7.She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music. 8.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 9.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms./Twentysix classrooms make up our school. 10.Youll have no trouble/difficulty findi

2、ng my house.,1. 一得知那个消息，他就放声大哭。,Hardly had he learnt the news when he burst into tears.,As soon as he learnt the news, he burst into tears.,The moment/ Immediately he learnt the news, he burst into tear.,2. 据说他看电影去了。,It is said that he has gone to the cinema. He is said to have gone to the cinema.,3

3、. 尽管他是个孩子, 但英语学的不错。,Although he is a child, he knows much English. Child as he is, he knows much English.,4. 既然你时间有限，那么我们就立刻开会吧。,Since your time is limited, lets start our meeting right away. Now that your time is limited, lets start our meeting right away.,When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.

4、（使用V-ing形式） On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him. It surprises him that the littler girl knows so m

5、any things .,Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型 .It was .not until) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Not until he h

6、ad read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.,I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虚拟语气） I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help. If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam. She walked out of the lab and many students followe

7、d her. (用过去分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) Singing and laughing, they went back to school. I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） No matter what he says, I wont believe.,If you study hard, you will make rapid pro

8、gress. （使用并列句） Study hard and youll make rapid progress. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,11 If there is enough time, we might drive up to Beijing University. A friend of mine is studying there.

9、If there is enough time, we might drive up to Beijing University, where a friend of mine is studying. If there is enough time, we might drive up to Beijing University where a friend of mine is studying .,12Beijing is cold. I need a warm coat. I need a hat. I also need warm trousers. Beijing is cold,

10、 so I need a warm coat, a hat and warm trousers. Because Beijing is cold, I need a warm coat, a hat and warm trousers. 13I am going to Beijing to see my brother. He works in a bank. I am going to Beijing to see my brother who works in a bank. I am going to Beijing to see my brother, who works in a b

11、ank.,14. I counldnt find anything but then I found a beautiful ring in a bag, which was buried in the earth. I couldnt find anything but then I found a beautiful ring in a bag buried in the earth.,15 The house is a wooden house and there is a small garden around it. The house is a wooden house with a small garden around it.,16There is a table and six chairs at one end of the living-room. There is a sofa and some chairs a