美国留学文书写作技巧

1、留学文书写作技巧全解,问题（一）：特点不清,中国学生总是给美国招生官造成选择困难。,团队精神（美国）（Teamwork）VS人多力量大（中国）,Earth. Fire. Wind. Water. Heart! Captain Planet supposes that the world is made up of these five elements. Were familiar with the previously-noted set and with actual elements like hydrogen, oxygen, and carbon, but select and ex

2、plain another small group of things (say, under five) that you believe compose our world.,人多力量大中国,团队精神美国,美国招生官希望申请人是这样的,而中国学生写的文书是这样的,总结：你可以是怪物，但不能没特点。,问题（二）：素材不足,中国学生容易在自身特点的方向上素材薄弱，竞争力不足。,素材的数量和质量，就是你在这个方向上的高度。,总结：,你在你的特点上，算不算一号人物？,问题（三）：思想性弱,The lateNew York Timesphotographer Bill Cunningham once

3、 said Fashion is the armor to survive the reality of everyday life. I dont think you could do away with it. It would be like doing away with civilization. Tell us about your “armor.”,总结：用思想的高度，撬开名校大门。,问题（四）：预示性差,总结：好的文书，能把你散落在过去、现在和未来的珠子（个人经历），串连成美丽的项链。,问题（五）：方向模糊,“其实你在哈佛的本科四年里，我们最担心的就是学生能不能找到他愿意为之付

4、出一生的方向”。 福斯特（哈佛大学校长）,Explain your interest in the major you selected and describe how you have recently explored or developed this interest inside and/or outside the classroom. You may also explain how this major relates to your future career goals. UIUC 2017-2018年主文书题目,“我们在阅读学生文书的时候，最感兴趣的就是他们如何表述他们的学术兴趣与方向”。 约翰霍普金斯大学招生官,Why are you drawn to studying the major you have selected? Please discuss how your interests and related experiences have influenced your choice