2025年高考英语复习应用文写作与读后续写精讲精练应用文技巧3：表达的多样与扩充(解析版)

句子的多样与扩充1.句子形式多样化:根据表达的需求,可以采用多种句式,这样既能恰当表达,又能避免形式单一【典型例句】①Theyweresoheavythat(如此沉重以至于)wecouldn’tliftthematfirst.②Thereisnodoubtthat(毫无疑问)itisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.【拓展训练】①Inrecentyears,moreandmorepeoplestarttoprotectourenvironment,whichmakesourenvironmentmoreandmorecolorful.→Inrecentyears,withmoreandmorepeoplestartingtoprotectourenvironment,ourenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmorecolorful.(with复合结构)

→Inrecentyears,therearesomanypeoplewhostarttoprotectourenvironmentthatourenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmorecolorful.(therebe句式)

②Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.→Studyhardandyouwillmakerapidprogress.(并列句)

2.使用非谓语动词形式,句子凝练高端【典型例句】①Afterlearningthecourse(学过这门课程后),I’msureI’llhaveabetterunderstandingofthedifferencesandsimilaritiesbetweenChinesecultureandWesternculture.②Onarrivingattheteahouse(一到达茶室),theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.【拓展训练】①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.→Shewalkedoutofthelab,followedbymanystudents.(非谓语动词)

②Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.→Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughing.(非谓语动词)

3.运用定语从句,增加细节,填补内容【典型例句】①Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhich(在此期间)weinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.②Iameagertoinviteyoutojoinourteamfortheupcomingevent,inwhich(在活动中)youwilldemonstrateyourabilityandmakeacquaintancewithmorefriendswiththesameinterest.【拓展训练】①Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).

②IhavefoundaflatforyouonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorwiththreerooms,oneofwhichisbedroom(其中一个是卧室),andtheothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.

4.巧用倒装,增强句子的表现力【典型例句】①Notonlywillourclub’sworksbedisplayed(不仅我们俱乐部的作品会被展出),butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.②NotonlydidyouhelpimprovemyEnglish(你不但帮我提升了英语),butyoualsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.③NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.(接下来,我让他们自己试一试。)【拓展训练】①ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.→Weakas/thoughIam,I’llmaketheeffort.(倒装)

②HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.→NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(倒装)

5.恰当使用强调句,增强说服力【典型例句】①ItwasyouwhotaughtmehowtolearnEnglishwell.(是你教我如何学好英语的。)②ItwasonFridaythatouractivitybegan.(我们的活动是在星期五开始的。)【拓展训练】①Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.(强调句)

②Itisworkinginteamsinsteadofonmyownthathasfreedmeoftroubleandmademyworkmoreefficient.(强调句)

6.自如应用各种名词性从句,精彩纷呈【典型例句】①IfyouareinterestedinwhatIhavestatedabove(如果你对我上面所说的感兴趣),signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeSeptember1st.②That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.(那就是我认为沿长江旅行将是一个更好的选择的原因。)【拓展训练】①Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.→Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(主语从句)

②IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).

7.withorwithout精彩点缀,妙不可言【典型例句】①Withsomanydifferentformsofpoetrytochoosefrom(有这么多不同形式的诗可供选择),studentsmayeventuallywanttowritepoemsoftheirown.②Withoutanyhesitation(毫不延迟),webegantowork.【拓展训练】①Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaim(没有清晰可达到的目标)islikesailingwithoutacompass.

②Ican’tthankyouenoughforyourgeneroushelp,withoutwhichIcouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).

8.巧用副词,充分表情达意【典型例句】①Iamextremelydelighted(非常高兴)tohearthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoakeyuniversity.②Igenuinelyhope(真心希望)thatyoucansqueezesometimeforourfestivalandhavefunwithus.【拓展训练】①Shepatiently(耐心地)explainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequiredeveryonetofollowthem.②Wewereperfectly(完全地)satisfiedwiththeresultoftheexperiment.9.变主动为被动,凸显英语思维【典型例句】①Myfathergavemeanewbookonmybirthday.→Iwasgivenanewbook(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(间接宾语作主语)→Anewbookwasgiventome(bymyfather)onmybirthday.(直接宾语作主语)②Andsomeworld-famousplayerswillbeinvited(将会被邀请)togivelessons.【拓展训练】①Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowed(可以被借用)atatimeandtheycanbekept(可以被保存)fortendays.

②Youareallowed(被允许)abouttenminutestoprepareforthework.

10.语气委婉而中肯,易于接受【典型例句】①Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow(请随时告诉我).②Isincerelyhope(真诚地希望)youcansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.【拓展训练】①Iwonderifyoucouldtellme(你能否告诉我)whatbooksIneedtoreadandtherequirementsofmyhomework.

②Whatdoyouthinkofit?Areyousatisfiedwithit?Ifnot,pleasetellmeasquicklyaspossible(请尽快告诉我).

【语篇填空】根据所给信息补全短文,并注意高级句式的应用。假定你是李华,你校的交换生Tom对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣,本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”,请你写一封电子邮件,邀请Tom去体验编织艺术。DearTom,Herecomesapieceofgoodnews(好消息来了).TheCampusCultureFestivalwillbehostedthisFriday.SinceyouhaveastrongpassionforChinesefolkart,it’sagreatpleasureformetoinviteyoutojoinus.

Theactivityisscheduledtolastabouttwohours,from3:30pmto5:30pmintheschoolhall.Itcoversawidevarietyofcontents.Notonlycanweappreciatenumerousappealingweavingworksrangingfromchairsandtablestovariousdecorations(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品,从桌椅到各种装饰品,不一而足),butalsowe’llwatchthedocumentaryconcerning(关于)thehistoryoftheweavingart.

Inaddition,somedistinguishedprofessors(一些著名教授)willbeinvitedtodeliverlecturesabouthowtopromotethedevelopmentoftheweavingart(如何促进编织艺术的发展),duringwhichtimeyouwilldefinitelygainabetterunderstandingofit(在这期间你一定会对它有更好的了解).Bytheway,ifyouareavailable,we’llmeetatthreeoutsidetheschoolgate.

HowIhopeyoucantakemyinvitationintoconsideration(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)!I’mexpectingyourreply.

Yours,LiHua【综合演练】1．假如你是李华，下周你校将开展中国传统文化周活动。你已邀请交换生Jerry观看下周六学校古典音乐俱乐部举行的古筝表演，但该表演因故取消。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.告知表演取消及原因；2.提议参加其它活动；3.期待回复。参考词汇：古筝theChineseZither注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearJerry,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是李华，你校下周将举行露天电影节。请给你的留学生朋友Jane写一封邮件，邀请她一起参加，内容包括：1.电影节时间、地点；2电影节内容。注意：写作词数应为80左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Luke准备参加你市将举办的国风音乐节(TraditionalChineseMusicFestival)，来信向你询问作为观众可以做的准备。请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.建议及理由；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是高中生李华，你校正在举行青少年模拟政协（ModelCPPCC）提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节（TheDoubleNinthFestival）设为国定假日，请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席，内容需包含：1你是否支持此提案；2.你支持或反对此提案的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．你校上周在学校礼堂举办了一次讲座，主题为“学校生活中时间管理的重要性”。请你给学校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.讲座的内容；2.学生的反响；3.你的收获。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你拟好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，为了弘扬中华民族的传统美德，你校将以“MoralsandVirtues”为主题举办英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.你对善举的理解；2.以事例说明；3.你的期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TheChainofKindnessDearfellowstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall,thankyou!参考答案1．DearJerry,IregrettoinformyouthattheChineseZitherperformancescheduledat6p.m.nextSaturdayhastobecanceled.Ithappensthatsomeoftheactorswillparticipateintheartfestivalofthecityatthattime.Itisapitythatwecan’tappreciatethesplendidperformancebyactorsintraditionalcostumes.Fortunately,thereareavarietyofotherrelatedactivitieswhichyoucan’tmiss.WouldyouliketoattendtheChineseClassicsRecitingcontestonSundayinstead?ItprovidesanotheropportunitytoexplorethecharmofChineseculture.Ibetitwillneverfailtosatisfyyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给交换生Jerry写信，告知其下周六学校古典音乐俱乐部举行的古筝表演因故取消，并提议参加其他活动。【要点分析】1.词汇积累取消：cancel→calloff参加：participatein→takepartin各种各样的：avarietyof→various幸运地：fortunately→luckily2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WouldyouliketoattendtheChineseClassicsRecitingcontestonSundayinstead?拓展句：WouldyouliketoattendtheChineseClassicsRecitingcontestwhichwillbeheldonSundayinstead?【高分句型1】IregrettoinformyouthattheChineseZitherperformancescheduledat6P.M.nextSaturdayhastobecanceled.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Itisapitythatwecan’tappreciatethesplendidperformancebyactorsintraditionalcostumes.（运用了that引导的主语从句）2．DearJane,Informedthatanoutdoorfilmfestivalwillbeheldinmyschool,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoengageinthisvisualfeast.Thefestivalisscheduledtobeheldintheschoolplaygroundandlastthreehoursfrom7:00pmto10:00pmnextSaturday.Duringthefestival,someclassicscenesfromwell-knownmovieswillbeperformed.Thehighlightforme,however,isthatvariousmicromoviesdirectedbystudentsconcerningcampuslifewillbedisplayedonthescreen.Ibetyou’llbeamazedbythisfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jane写一封邮件，邀请她一起参加学校下周将举行的露天电影节。【要点分析】1.词汇积累加入：engagein→participatein安排：schedule→arrange各种各样的：various→allkindsof惊讶的：amazed→surprised2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thefestivalisscheduledtobeheldintheschoolplaygroundandlastthreehoursfrom7:00pmto10:00pmnextSaturday.拓展句：Thefestival,whichisscheduledtobeheldintheschoolplaygroundnextSaturday,willlastthreehoursfrom7:00pmto10:00pm.[高分句型1]Informedthatanoutdoorfilmfestivalwillbeheldinmyschool,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoengageinthisvisualfeast.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Thehighlightforme,however,isthatvariousmicromoviesdirectedbystudentsconcerningcampuslifewillbedisplayedonthescreen.(运用了that引导的表语从句)3．DearLuke,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.IwasthrilledtohearaboutyourinterestintraditionalChinesemusicandyourplantoattendtheTraditionalChineseMusicFestivalatourcityculturalcenter.Toprepareforthefestival,Ihaveafewsuggestionsforyou.First,itwouldbebeneficialtofamiliarizeyourselfwithsometraditionalChinesemusicalinstrumentssuchastheguzheng(Chinesezither)orerhu(two-stringedbowedinstrument).Additionally,beingdressedintraditionalChineseclothing,likeaqipaooratangsuit,canaddtothefestiveatmosphereandallowyoutoimmerseyourselfintheculturalambiance.Furthermore,itmightbehelpfultolearnafewbasicChinesephrasesrelatedtomusic,suchascommoninstrumentnamesormusicalterminologies,whichwillenhanceyourabilitytocommunicatewithfellowmusicenthusiastsduringthefestival.Mayyouhaveatrulyunforgettableexperience,filledwiththeenchantingmelodiesandcaptivatingperformancesoftraditionalChinesemusic!Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Luke介绍关于国风音乐节(TraditionalChineseMusicFestival)的情况，并给予建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累高兴：thrilled→excited建议:suggestions→recommendations此外：Additionally→Moreover提升：enhance→improve2.句式拓展同义句替换原句：IwasthrilledtohearaboutyourinterestintraditionalChinesemusicandyourplantoattendtheTraditionalChineseMusicFestivalatourcityculturalcenter.同义句：YourenthusiasmfortraditionalChinesemusicanddecisiontoparticipateintheupcomingTraditionalChineseMusicFestivalatourlocalculturalcenterhavedefinitelycaughtmyattentionandbroughtmegreatjoy.【高分句型1】Toprepareforthefestival,Ihaveafewsuggestionsforyou.(运用了不定式作目的状语)【高分句型2】Furthermore,itmightbehelpfultolearnafewbasicChinesephrasesrelatedtomusic,suchascommoninstrumentnamesormusicalterminologies,whichwillenhanceyourabilitytocommunicatewithfellowmusicenthusiastsduringthefestival.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．DearChairmanoftheModelCPPCC,IamLiHua.IamwritingtoexpressmysupportfortheproposalofappointingtheDoubleNinthFestivalasanationalholiday.IbelievethatthistraditionalChinesefestivalholdssignificantculturalvalueanddeservesmorerecognitionandcelebration.Firstly,byestablishingtheDoubleNinthFestivalasanationalholiday,wecanpreserveandpromoteourrichculturalheritage.Thisfestival,alsoknownastheChongyangFestivalisnotonlyatimeforfamilyreunionsbutalsoanoccasiontohonorandrespecttheelderly.Bygrantingitnationalholidaystatus,wecanencouragefamiliesandcommunitiestocarryouttraditionalcustoms,suchasvisitingelders,climbingmountains,andappreciatingvariousscenes.Thiswillcontributetothepreservationandpassingdownofourtraditionalvaluestofuturegenerations.Inconclusion,IfirmlysupporttheproposaltomaketheDoubleNinthfestivalanationalholiday.Thisdecisionnotonlybacksupourculturalheritagebutalsopromotesfamilyvaluesandsocialharmony.Ibelievethatsuchinitiativescontributetoamorebalancedandculturallyrichsociety.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Yourssincerely,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在举行青少年模拟政协提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节设为国定假日，要求考生按照要求就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席。【要点分析】1.词汇积累表达：express→convey建议：proposal→suggestion相信：believe→beconvinced重要的：significant→important2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,byestablishingtheDoubleNinthFestivalasanationalholiday,wecanpreserveandpromoteourrichculturalheritage.拓展句：Firstly,ifweestablishtheDoubleNinthFestivalasanationalholiday,wecanpreserveandpromoteourrichculturalheritage.【高分句型1】IbelievethatthistraditionalChinesefestivalholdssignificantculturalvalueanddeservesmorerecognitionandcelebration.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Firstly,byestablishingtheDoubleNinthFestivalasanationalholiday,wecanpreserveandpromoteourrichculturalheritage.（运用了动名词establishing作宾语）5．AMeaningfulLectureLastweek,ourschoolorganizedalectureontheImportanceofTimeManagementinSchoolLifeintheauditorium.Theguestspeakerprovidedvaluableinsightsonhowtoeffectivelymanagetimeforstudying,hobbies,andsocialactivities.Heemphasizedcreatingastudyschedule,settingdailygoals,andtakingregularbreakstoavoidburnout.Thelecturewasmetwithenthusiasmfromstudentswhofoundthestrategiesbeneficial.Manyexpressedtheirintentiontostartplanningtheirtimemoreeffectivelytoachieveabetterbalanceintheirlives.Asforme,Irealizedthatwithpropertimemanagement,Icanexcelinmystudieswhilestillhavingtimeformyinterestsandfriends.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为主题为“学校生活中时间管理的重要性”的学校讲座写一篇英文报道。【要点分析】1.词汇积累重要性：importance→significance强调：emphasize→highlight有益的：beneficial→beofbenefit达到：achieve→attain2.句式升级简单句变复合句原句：Theguestspeakerprovidedvaluableinsightsonhowtoeffectiv