2025年高考英语复习应用文写作与读后续写精讲精练应用文技巧5：细节的增添与润色(原卷版)

细节的增添与润色1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,refusetousesingle-useproducts,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy(我们可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒绝使用一次性产品,种植更多的树木,节约水和能源).(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework(与他们聊天和做一些家务).(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences(如果可能的话,我们可以一起旅行或者分享旅行经历).2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall,somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere(有些人在墙上乱涂乱画,有些人在草坪上踢足球,有些人到处扔垃圾).3.增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容(1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00intheafternoon(直到下午五点左右才回来).(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavebroughtwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavebroughtwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary(去市图书馆).4.适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容(1)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。要点:a.休息;b.读书;c.参加社会活动。①Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears(因为经过所有这些年的辛苦工作,我确实感到累).Ofcourse,I’lldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell(为了乐趣也为了知识).②I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime(如果我有时间),I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→Ifpossible(如果可能的话),I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutsociety(为了更好地了解社会).(2)Tracy来电话说和你在博尔顿咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)的见面取消。Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo(因为她有重要的事情做).5.结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等(1)TiredasIwasthissummerholiday,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)(2)AsfarasI’mconcerned,suchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)(3)Inaword,ifshewouldliketolearnChinese,Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)(4)Asstudents,it’sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)【拓展训练】假如你是班长,你们学校本周日将组织一次参观首都博物馆的活动,请你写一个通知。相关内容如下:安排:1.上午8:00在学校大门口集合,集体乘车去首都博物馆;2.上午8:40在导游的带领下参观首都博物馆;3.中午12:00参观结束,集体乘车返回学校。要求:1.参观过程中请自觉遵守公共秩序;2.馆内禁止录像和开闪光灯拍照;3.参观后每人写一篇日记。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.通知的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dearstudents,Attention,please.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【综合演练】1．假如你是李华，收到外国朋友Tom的来信，信中说他正在学习中文古诗词，感觉很困难。请回一封信，内容包括：1.学习方法建议；2.鼓励Tom。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearTom,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是李华，交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(IdiomChallengeCompetition)中荣获二等奖，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1.向他表示祝贺；2.肯定他的付出。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你校上周五邀请专家做了题为“ArtificialIntelligenceandOurLife”的讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.讲座内容；3.收获和启发。注意：1.写作词数为80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。AlectureonArtificialIntelligenceandOurLife___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李华，校学生会将组织一次爱心捐赠活动(acharitydonationactivity)。请你用英语为本次活动写一则书面通知。内容包括：1.活动时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.号召参加。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Notice_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．2024年是中国农历龙年。假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Julia正在学习汉语，她来信说她对“龙”的寓意非常感兴趣。请你给她回信，内容包括：1.给予鼓励；2.介绍“龙”的象征意义。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJulia,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假如你是校学生会成员李华，为号召大家积极参与节约用水活动，请你代表学生会发出一份倡议书，内容包括：(1)发出倡议的原因和目的；(2)浪费用水的现象和节约用水的方法；(3)发出倡议。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearschoolmates,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentUnion参考答案1．DearTom,IamsorrytohearthatyouwereinlowspiritsafteryoudidnotdowellinyourlearningChinesepoems.Whatwasworse,youlostheartandnolongerstudiedashardasbefore.ActuallywealwaysmeetproblemsinlearningChinesepoems,whicharetheessenceofChineseculture.However,whydon'tyoutakeanactiveattitudetowardsthetemporarytrouble?Byencouragingourselevesandreadingmorepoemsloudly,wewillfindthesenseoflanguagesothatwecouldnolongerfeelitchallenging.Justastheoldsayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.Onlywithmorepracticecanweharvest/reapthefruitofsuccess.YoursLihua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Tom回信，就他学习中文古诗词的困难给与建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累情绪低落：inlowspirits→inabadmood更糟糕的是：whatwasworse→worsestill事实上：actually→infact困难的：challenging→difficult2.句式拓展倒装句变强调句原句：Onlywithmorepracticecanweharvest/reapthefruitofsuccess.拓展句：Itisonlywithmorepracticethatwecanharvest/reapthefruitofsuccess.【高分句型1】ActuallywealwaysmeetproblemsinlearningChinesepoems,whicharetheessenceofChineseculture.（运用了which引导非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Byencouragingourselevesandreadingmorepoemsloudly,wewillfindthesenseoflanguagesothatwecouldnolongerfeelitchallenging.（运用了动名词作宾语以及sothat引导的目的状语从句）【高分句型3】Onlywithmorepracticecanweharvest/reapthefruitofsuccess.（运用了“Only+状语”引起的部分倒装）2．DearTerry,I'mwritingtoextendmywarmestcongratulationstoyouforyouroutstandingperformanceinIdiomChallengeCompetition,whereyouwereawardedthesecondprize.Yourachievementistrulycommendable,anditreflectsyourhardworkanddedicationtowardsthiscompetition.Itisevidentthatyouhaveputinalargeamountofefforttomastertheidiomsandtheirmeanings.Yoursuccessisatestamenttoyourperseveranceandcommitmenttoexcellence.Onceagain,congratulationsonyourwell-deservedaccomplishment!Iamconfidentthatthisrecognitionwillmotivateyoutocontinuestrivingforgreatnessinyourfuturestudy.Keepupthefantasticwork,Terry!Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Terry在考生所在学校的成语闯关比赛(IdiomChallengeCompetition)中荣获二等奖，请考生给他写一封祝贺信。【要点分析】1.词汇积累表达：extend→express比赛：competition→match明显的：evident→apparent激励：motivate→inspire2.句式拓展合并句子原句：Yourachievementistrulycommendable,anditreflectsyourhardworkanddedicationtowardsthiscompetition.拓展句：Yourachievementistrulycommendable,whichreflectsyourhardworkanddedicationtowardsthiscompetition.【高分句型1】Iamconfidentthatthisrecognitionwillmotivateyoutocontinuestrivingforgreatnessinyourfuturestudy.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】I'mwritingtoextendmywarmestcongratulationstoyouforyouroutstandingperformanceinIdiomChallengeCompetition,whereyouwereawardedthesecondprize.（运用了where引导的定语从句）3．范文AlectureonArtificialintelligenceandOurLifeLastFriday,ourschoolinvitedanexperttodeliveralecturetitled“ArtificialintelligenceandOurLife”intheschool’slecturehall.Thelecturecoveredvariousaspectsofartificialintelligence(AI)anditsimpactonourdailylives,fromself-drivingcarstosmarthomes.Besides,expertalsoexplainedpotentialchallengesbroughtbyAI,encouragingstudentstodeeplythinkaboutit.Thelectureleftuswithprofoundinsights.Notonlyhasitbroadenedourunderstandingofit,butithasalsoinspiredustolearnmoreaboutthemodemtechnology.【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写报道介绍“ArtificialIntelligenceandOurLife”讲座。【要点分析】1.词汇积累各种各样的：various→avarietyof此外：besides→inadditions演讲：lecture→speech影响：impact→influence2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,expertalsoexplainedpotentialchallengesbroughtbyAI,encouragingstudentstodeeplythinkaboutit.拓展句：Besides,expertalsoexplainedpotentialchallengesbroughtbyAI,whichcanencouragestudentstodeeplythinkaboutit.[高分句型1]Besides,expertalsoexplainedpotentialchallengesbroughtbyAI,encouragingstudentstodeeplythinkaboutit.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Notonlyhasitbroadenedourunderstandingofit,butithasalsoinspiredustolearnmoreaboutthemodemtechnology.(运用了notonly…butalso…句型和倒装)4．参考答案NoticeInordertoadvocatehelpingpeopleinneed,acharitydonationactivity,organizedbytheStudents’Union,willbelaunchedinourschool.Theeventwilltakeplaceintheplaygroundat3p.m.thisSaturdayandwilllastfortwohours.Therewillbe20standssetuptocollectdifferenttypesofitems.Avarietyofitems,includingbooks,pens,basketballsandclothes,canallbedonated.Thiseventholdsgreatsignificanceasasmallkindactcanmakeadifferencetoothers.Wehopeeveryonewillactivelyparticipateinthisevent!Students’Union【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知，说明爱心捐赠活动。【要点分析】1.词汇积累为了：inorderto→soasto建立：setup→build各种各样的：avarietyof→various参加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therewillbe20standssetuptocollectdifferenttypesofitems.拓展句：Therewillbe20standssetup,whoseaimistocollectdifferenttypesofitems.[高分句型1]Inordertoadvocatehelpingpeopleinneed,acharitydonationactivity,organizedbytheStudents’Union,willbelaunchedinourschool.(运用了不定式作目的状语和过去分词作定语)[高分句型2]Wehopeeveryonewillactivelyparticipateinthisevent!(运用了省略that的宾语从句)5．DearJulia,KnowingthatyouarelearningChineseandwanttoknowthesymbolicmeaningaboutChinesedragon,IamverypleasedandIwishyouwillmakemuchprogresssoon.Meanwhile,havingagoodknowledgeofChinesewillbenefityougreatlyinthefuture.IdidalittleresearchabouttheroleofdragonsinChineseculture,whichIthinkmaybehelpful.ThedragonisamythicalcreatureinChineseculture.Itisconsideredasasymbolofpower,strength,successandgoodluck.TheChinesedragonisnotonlyasymbolofChina,butalsoasymboliclanguagesignwhichisusedinplentifulChineseidiomsandproverbs.IwillsendyouaChineseIdiomDictionarytohelpyoubetterunderstandChineseculture.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,feelfreetoask.Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Julia写封回信，向她介绍在中国“龙”的寓意。【要点分析】1.词汇积累高兴的：pleased→delighted掌握，精通：haveagoodknowledgeof→haveagoodcommandof有帮助的：behelpful→beofhelp被认为：beconsideredas→berecognizedas2.句式扩展同义句转换原句：Meanwhile,havingagoodknowledgeofChinesewillbenefityougreatlyinthefuture.拓展句：Meanwhile,itisclearthathavingagoodknowledgeofChinesewillbenefityougreatlyinthefuture.【高分句型1】IdidalittleresearchabouttheroleofdragonsinChineseculture,whichIthinkmaybehelpful.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】TheChinesedragonisnotonlyasymbolofChina,butalsoasymboliclanguagesignwhichisusedinplentifulChineseidiomsandproverbs.(运用了whic