人教陕西 九年级 下册 英语 Unit 13《Period 6 Section B (3a-3b) 单元主题写作》复习课 课件

Period6SectionB(3a-3b)单元主题写作Unit13We’retryingtosavetheearth!主题分析本单元写作情境为“环境污染和保护环境”,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中的“自然生态、环境保护”这一主题群,涉及子主题“环境污染及原因,环保意识和行为”。常见的写作任务是介绍环境污染问题,在日常生活中采取措施保护环境,呼吁人们积极参与到保护环境的行动中。一、素材积累【单元主题词汇】保护环境Protectingtheenvironment自然生态Naturalecologyearth,nature,coal,ecosystem,mountain,land,sea,desert保护环境Protectingtheenvironment环境污染Environmentalpollutionlitter,plastic,takeaway,fisherman,rubbish,bottle,harmful,metal,industry,transportation,iron,pull...down,beharmfulto,throwaway解决方法Solvingmethodsbin,law,scientific,afford,reusable,recycle,takepartin,turnoff,payfor,takeaction,putsth.togooduse,bringback【单元主题佳句】开头句1.It’sveryimportantforustotakecareofourenvironment.2.It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.中间句1.Wecantakeactioninourdailylife.2.Wecanbeginwithsmallthings,suchasplantingmoretreesandridingbikes.结尾句1.Inmyopinion,everyonecanplayapartinprotectingtheenvironment...2.Let’stakeactionandbeagreenperson!二、以读促写“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己保护环境的做法,以“HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautiful”为题,写一篇英语短文。写作要求:1.表达清楚﹐语法正确﹐上下文连贯;2.词数不少于70。第一步:审题时态:____________人称:____________一般现在时第一人称第二步:列框架HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautiful引出话题Thecleanwaterandgreenmountainsareourtreasures...具体做法Wecantakeactioninourdailylife...陈述观点Inmyopinion,...第三步:教材句型微训练1.教材原句:Thetopofthehouseisanoldboatturnedupsidedown.结构解读:turnedupsidedown表示“被翻转过来的”,此处是过去分词短语作后置定语。仿写:他正在使用一个由布制成的购物袋。________________________________________Heisusingashoppingbagmadeofcloth.2.教材原句:Notonlycantheartbringhappinesstoothers,butitalsoshowsthatevencold,hardironcanbebroughtbacktolife...结构解读:notonly...butalso...表示“不仅……而且……”,连接两个并列分句时,notonly位于句首,notonly后面的分句需要倒装。仿写:他不仅会弹钢琴而且也会弹吉他。__________________________________________________Notonlycanheplaythepianobutalsohecanplaytheguitar.第四步:连句成篇优秀作文HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautifulThecleanwaterandgreenmountainsareourtreasures.Soit’sveryimportantforustotakecareoftheenvironment.

①Butwhatshouldwedo?Wecantakeactioninourdailylife.Wecanplantmoretreestokeepthesoilinplace.Wecanalsousebothsidesofthepaper.②

Weshoulddealwithpollutedwaterintimebecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.

③Whenwegotootherplaces,wecanchoosepublictransport.Inmyopinion,everyonecandosomethingsmalltomakeadifference.④Ifallofusworktogether,wewillhaveamorebeautifulhome.满分作文HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautifulThecleanwaterandgreenmountainsareourtreasures.Soit’sveryimportantforustorealizetheimportanceoftakingcareoftheenvironmentanddealingwithpollution.

①Butwhatshouldwedo?Wecantakeactioninourdailylife.Notonlycanweplantmoretreestokeepthesoilinplace,butwecanalsousebothsidesofthepaper.

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Pollutedwatershouldbedealtwithintimetokeeptherivercleanbecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.

③Whenwegotootherplaces,wecanchoosepublictransport.Inmyopinion,everyonecanplayapartinprotectingtheenvironment④andmakeadifference.Ifallofusworktogether,wewillhaveamorebeautifulhome.满分指导①处可使用高级词汇realizetheimportanceof和dealwith使得句子表达更加完整。②处把两个简单句可用notonly...butalso...连接为一个句子,且使用倒装语序,使得表达更高级。③处可把主动句改为被动句,使得文章句式多样,表达灵活。④处可使用高级短语playapartinprotectingtheenvironment使得文章更加出彩。三、[2024内江]迁移写作假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,他给你发来邮件想了解一些信息。请根据以下内容,给他回复一封邮件。DearLiHua,Ihadagoodtimeinyourschoollastweek.Itissobeautifulandclean.Iwanttoknowasstudents,1.howyoumaketheschoolgreen;2.howyoukeeptheschoolclean;3.howyoureusewaste;4.howyousaveenergy.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,Alan注意:1.所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容,并进行合理拓展;2.文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名;3.词数不少于70。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAlan,Iampleasedtohearfromyou.I’malsogladyoulikeourschool.Firstly,ourschoolplantsmanytreesandflowerseveryyear.Secondly,eachstudentisacleaner.Ifweseegarbage,wewillactivelypickitupandputitinthebin.Thirdly,toavoidwaste,wereusetextbooks.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthesametime,wealsouseolditemstomakesomereusableitems