外研安徽 九年级 下册 英语 Module 3《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

Module3Lifenowandthen模块主题写作一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“生活变化”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁、历史的发展、对未来的畅想”。常见的写作任务是描述家乡的变化和社会的发展、畅想未来生活等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇life//change//building//takeplace//narrow//old//inthepast//simple//getmarried//pollution//atpresent(2)重点句式1.Greatchanges_________________(发生)in...2.__________(过去)peoplewrotelettersto_______________(保持联系)eachother.3.People___________(过去)livein...4.Nowpeople______________(习惯于)communicatingwitheachotherbymobilephone.havetakenplaceInthepastkeepintouchwithusedtoareusedto5.Peopleinourhometown________________(更加富有)thanbefore.6._________________(一般而言),Ithink...isbettertoday.7.____________(总之),peoplehave______________(更好的生活)thanbefore.arericherGenerallyspeakingInawordabetterlife三、写作示例近年来,我们的家乡发生了许多变化,请根据下表提供的信息,以“GreatChangesinOurHomeTown”为题写一篇短文来阐述家乡的变化及你对家乡未来的憧憬。pastpresent生活条件poor;liveinsmalldarkhouses...richer;liveinmoderntallbuildings...联系方式bypostingletters...bymobilephoneore-mail...出行方式onfootorbybike...bybus,bycarorbytaxi...要求:1.文中必须包含所给信息,可以适当拓展,要求语句通顺,书写规范;2.词数：不少于100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。GreatChangesinOurHomeTownInrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________谋篇布局1.审题立意：①主题：家乡变化；②人称：第一人称和第三人称；③时态：一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时。2.写作提纲引出要介绍的对象Inrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.从不同方面阐述变化Inthepast...Butatpresent...Iftheywantto...Butinthepast...Andtheywentto...Butatpresent...表达愿望，展望未来Ihopewestudentswillworkhardertomakeourhometownmorebeautiful.基础篇GreatChangesinOurHomeTownInrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.Inthepast,manyofthepeoplewerepoor.Theylivedinsmalldarkhouses.Butatpresent,peopleinourhometownarericher.Manyofthemliveinmoderntallbuildings.Theynowcommunicatewithothersbymobilephoneore-mail.Butinthepast,theycommunicatedwitheachotherbypostingletters.Inthepast,theywenttodifferentplacesonfootorbybike.Butnow,peoplecangotootherplacesbybus,bycarorbytaxi.Ihopewestudentswillworkhardertomakeourhometownmorebeautiful.名师点评本文要点齐全,结构完整,逻辑清晰。第一步:开门见山,点明家乡发生了巨大的变化(第一段)。第二步∶具体介绍,分别从生活条件、联系方式和出行方式三个方面介绍从过去到现在的变化(第二段)。笫三步:表达愿望,展望未来(第三段)。但在具体阐述的过程中,句式稍显简单,缺乏对目前生活感受的描写,可在这方面进行优化。提升篇GreatChangesinOurHomeTownInrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown.Inthepast,①manyofthepeoplewerepoor.Theylivedinsmalldarkhousesandtheywerenothappy.Butatpresent①,peopleinourhometownaremuchricher②thanbefore.Manyofthemliveinmoderntallbuildingsandtheyfeelmorecomfortable②.Iftheywanttocommunicatewithothers,theycanusemobilephonesorsende-mails.Butinthepast,mostofthepeopleusedtokeepintouchwitheachotherbypostingletters③.Onlyafewmadetelephonecallstoeachother.Andtheywenttodifferentplacesonfootorbybike.Butatpresent,peoplecangotootherplacesbybus,bycarorbytaxi.Ihopewestudentswillworkhardertomakeourhometownmorebeautiful.名师点评本文从三方面对比了家乡从过去到现在发生的巨大变化。内容充实,逻辑清晰,层次分明。①文中inthepast和atpresent的运用使得文章层次分明。②比较级muchricher及morecomfortable的正确使用反映了人们现在生活的美好。③usedtodosth.及bydoingsth.的运用恰到好处,为文章增色不少。四、写作练笔本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’sLife”展开。请你根据以下提示问题写一篇英语作文，从生活、工作、家庭等方面描绘25年后你的生活。Wheredoyouwanttoliveandwork?Whatwillyourfamilybelike?Howareyougoingtospendyourfreetime?Somethingmoreaboutyourfuturelife.注意：1.文中不得透露个人真实信息；2.词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Tomorrow’sLifeMylifewillbeverydifferentin25years.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tomorrow’sLifeMylifewillbeverydifferentin25years.IthinkI’llbeareporterinBeijing.IwillliveinanapartmentwithmysisterbecauseIdon’tlikelivingalone.AndIcanplaywithherinmyapartment.Myparentswilltravelaroundtheworldandenjoythemselves.IwillmeetalotofinterestingandfamouspeopleandIwillgotoanotherplaceonbusiness.Iwillhavemanydifferentpets.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________