外研 九年级 下册 英语 Module 7《模块主题写作》复习课 课件

模块主题写作Module7Englishforyouandme一、主题分析本模块写作情境为“学习语言”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群，涉及子主题“积极的学习体验,恰当的学习方法与策略，勤学善思”。常见的写作任务是谈论学习的重要性、谈论学习方法、提出学习建议等。二、素材积累(1)主题词汇English//learn//should//begood/badat//nervous//suggest//Englishnewspapersandmagazines//practice//readingaloud//writedownsomenotes//rememberwords//giveup(2)重点句式1.___________________(……是不容易的)learnaforeignlanguage.2.___________________(众所周知),Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.3.Don’t______________(害怕)makingmistakes.It’snoteasytoAsweallknowbeafraidof4.If__________________(你努力学习),youcaneasilyimproveit.5.Ithink______________(它是一个好的方式)toimproveyour...6._____________________(最重要的)isthatyoumustbeconfidentandnevergiveup.youstudyharditisagoodwayThemostimportant三、写作示例随着中国的发展，越来越多国人走出国门。由于传统文化的输出，汉语热席卷全球。假如你是林美，即将到你们学校进行交换生项目的Susan写了一封信向你请教如何学好汉语，请结合以下图表，写一封回信，为她提一些建议。要求：1.内容完整，要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：80~100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。DearSusan,I’mverygladthatyouarecomingtoChinasoon.Iknowit’snoteasytolearnaforeignlanguage,butIhavesomeideasthatmayhelp._________________________________________________Yours,LinMei谋篇布局1.审题立意①主题：语言学习；②人称：第一人称、第二人称；③时态：一般现在时。2.写作提纲语言学习引出话题Iknowit’snoteasytolearnaforeignlanguage,butIhavesomeideasthatmayhelp.提出具体建议Firstofall,trytocatcheverychance...Moreover,IthinkwatchingChineseprograms...What’smore,you’dbetterplanyourtimewell...Lastly,ifyouwanttolearnfaster,youcantake...总结鼓励I’msureyou’llsucceedwithyourhardwork.基础篇DearSusan,I’mverygladthatyouarecomingtoChinasoon.Iknowit’snoteasytolearnaforeignlanguage,butIhavesomeideasthatmayhelp.First,practicespeakingChineseinyourfreetime.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.TrytolistenandreadmoreinChinese.Second,youcanalsowatchChineseprograms.Theycanhelpyouimproveyourlisteningandspeaking.Third,youshouldplanyourtimewellandstudyitregularlyeveryday.Fourth,youcantakeaChineseclassafterschool.ThenyoucanmakemorefriendsandcommunicatewiththeminChinese.I’msureyou’llsucceedwithyourhardwork.Yours,LinMei名师点评本文结构完整，层次清晰，第一步，点明写这封信的目的;第二步，具体给出几点建议；第三步，结束语。但是在具体介绍学习建议时，添加的细节不够充足，内容不太充实，语言的组织方面也需要加强。提升篇DearSusan,I’mverygladthatyouarecomingtoChinasoon.Iknowit’snoteasytolearnaforeignlanguage,butIhavesomeideasthatmayhelp.Firstofall①,trytocatcheverychance②topracticespeakingChinese.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakesandtrytolistenandreadmoreinChinese.Moreover①,IthinkwatchingChineseprogramsisagoodwaytoimproveyourChinese③.What’smore①,you'dbetterplanyourtimewellandstudyitregularlyeveryday.Lastly,ifyouwanttolearnfaster,youcantakeaChineseclassinyourfreetime③.Thatwouldbehelpful.Aboveall①,Ithinkyoushouldbeconfidentin②yourselfanddon’tgiveup②whenyoumeetwithdifficulties.I’msureyou’llsucceedwithyourhardwork.Yours,LinMei名师点评本文逻辑层次清晰，内容更加充实。①使用Firstofall,Moreover,What’smore,Aboveall，避免了句子的堆砌。②运用catcheverychance,beconfidentin,giveup等短语，使语句更加丰富。③运用宾语从句IthinkwatchingChineseprogramsisagoodwaytoimproveyourChinese.和条件状语从句ifyouwanttolearnfaster,youcantakeaChineseclassinyourfreetime.等，使补充的细节更加完整，可读性更强。四、写作练笔请你以“HowtoLearnEnglishWell”为题写一篇英语短文，说说英语学习的重要性，并给出学习英语的建议。要求：词数：80~100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。HowtoLearnEnglishWellAsweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HowtoLearnEnglishWellAsweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.SoweshouldlearnEnglishwell.Howcanwelearnitwell?Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldoftenlistentoEnglishtapes,songsandradios.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsohelpfultous.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyou’llmake.We’dbetterjointheEnglishclubandpracticeEngl