Unit 5 单元写作小专题 【知识精研精讲】八年级英语下册高效课件（人教版）

RAINSTORMWhatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?Unit5单元写作小专题Some

unexpectedeventsfrompasttonow.AUNIVERSITYPeopleoftenrememberwhattheyweredoingwhentheyheardthenewsofimportanteventsinhistory.01

主题分析

本单元的写作情境属于“人与自然”以及“人与社会”主题范畴，涉及子主题有“社会热点与国际事务；身边的自然现象与生态环境；自然灾害与人身安全，灾害防范基本常识”等。常见的写作任务是描述重大历史事件和难忘的事件等。体裁多为记叙文或图表类说明文等。AUNIVERSITY

在生活中，有些事情会让你记忆犹新，经久难忘。请以“AnUnforgettableEvent”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。内容包括：1.这件难忘的事情的经过。2.它令你难忘的原因。BYYUSHEN三审时态一般过去时过去进行时叙事文体裁第一人称为主人称审题BYYUSHEN列题纲Para.1IntroductionPara.1IntroductionPara.2DetailsPara.3ReasonsEventTimePlaceActivitiesReasonsWhatwastheevent?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whatwereyoudoing?Whatwereyourfriends/familydoing?Whywasitimportant?Whydoyourememberthisevent?FeelingsHowdidyoufeel?BYYUSHENPara.1IntroductionPara.1IntroductionPara.2DetailsPara.3ReasonsFirst,writeabouttheevent（whenandwhereithappened）.AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwas_________.Ithappenedin/on_____at/in_____.句型Youandyourfriends(family)weredoing&feelingsWhenIheardthenewsofthisevent/Whenthiseventhappened,Iwas____.Myfriends/familywere______.Iwascompletely___________.Then,writeaboutwhythiseventwasimportant.Thiseventisveryimportanttomebecause_______./Irememberthiseventwellbecause____________.AnimportanteventthatJimrememberswellwas....Whatwastheevent?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whatwereyoudoing?Whatwereyourfriends/familydoing?Howdidyoufeel?Whywasitimportant?Whydoyourememberthisevent?onSeptember23rd,2023theopeningceremonyof19thAsianGamesHangzhouinHangzhouIwaswatchingTV.Myparentsweredrinkingtea.Chinaisbecomingstrongerandstronger.AdigitalhumanlightedOlympicFlame（数字人点亮奥运圣火）.Itwascreative.completelyshockedTheshowsweresowonderful.BYYUSHEN

AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwastheopeningceremonyofthe19thAsianGamesHangzhouonSeptember23rd,2023inHangzhou.

Whentheopeningstarted,IwaswatchingTVwhilemyparentsweredrinkingtea.Wewerecompletelyshocked

whenadigitalhumanlightedOlympicFlame.Ithoughtitwassocreative.Theshowsattheopeningweresoamazingthatwealllostourselvesinthem.

Iwillneverforgetthisevent,becauseitwasreallyexcitingtowatchsucha

wonderfulshow.Chinaisbecomingstrongerandstronger.I’msoproudofmycountry!Sample2timeeventplaceactivitiesfeelingsreasonsAnUnforgettableEventAnimportanteventthatBenrememberswellwas....Whatwastheevent?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?Whatwereyoudoing?Whatwereyourfriendsdoing?Howdidyoufeel?Whywasitimportant?Whydoyourememberthisevent?onMarch2nd,2024Ourclasswonthebasketballcompetition.atthegymIwascheeringontheplayers.Myfriendsweretakingphotos.Itwasthefirsttime.Iunderstoodthatunionisstrength.excitedTalkaboutwhatyoulearntfromit.BYYUSHEN

Peopleoftenrememberwhattheyweredoingwhenthey

heardthenewsofimportantevents.AnimportanteventthatIrememberwellwasthatourclasswonthebasketballcompetitiononMarch2nd,2024atthegym.

WhenIheardthenewsofthevictory,Iwascheeringontheplayerswhilemyfriendsweretakingphotos.Wewerepretty

excitedandjumpedupanddownhappily.

Irememberthiseventwell,becauseourclasswonthebasketballcompetitionforthefirsttime.Iunderstoodthatunionisstrength.Everyplayertriedtheirbesttofightinthecompetitionandtheywerereallyunited（团结的）.I’msoproudofmyclass!Sample3timeeventplaceactivitiesfeelingsreasonsAnUnforgettableEventAn

Unforgettable

Event

①

There

are

so

many

unforgettable

events

in

my

life

that

I

can't

forget

them.

I'd

like

to

share

one

of

them

with

you.

On

November

5th,I

took

part

in

an

English

talk

show

competition.②

On

that

day,I

woke

up

very

early

because

I

wanted

to

practice

the

speech.

When

I

walked

onto

the

stage,I

almost

forgot

all

the

words.

Then

I

took

a

deep

breath

and

talked

as

usual.

Luckily,I

made

up

some

words

to

let

my

speech

go.③

What

surprised

me

most

was

that

（最使我惊讶的是）

I

won

the

first

place

at

last.

④

What

an

unforgettable

day

it

was!

I'll

always

remember

that

day.升格技巧技巧一：巧so…that…句型升格①技巧二：巧用because引导的原因状语从句升格②技巧三：巧用主语从句升格③技巧四：巧用what引导的感叹句升格④04

写作练笔

1.记叙文

2.一

3.一般过去时

4.介绍事件发生的时间、地点、过程,表达自己的感受

作答题、Moving

There's

a

moving

family

event

that

I

will

never

forget.

①Introduce

the

event

（when,where,what）②Express

how

I

felt

I

made

up

my

mind

that

I

would

study

hard

to

thank

my

parents.

A

Moving

Event

There's

a

moving

family

event

that

I

will

never

forget.

When

I

was

in

Grade

Three,one

day

it

rained

heavily

after

school.

But

I

didn't

have

an

umbrella,so

I

stood

helplessly

in

the

doorway.

Suddenly,I

felt

the

rain

stop

over

my

head.

I

looked

up

and

it

was

my

father

who

came

to

pick

me

up

with

an

umbrella.

I

climbed

happily

on

my

father's

shoulders.

We

talked

and

laughed

all

the

way

home.

When

we

got

home,my

mother

immediately

served

us

a

big

bowl

of

hot

soup.

At

that

moment,my

heart

was

warm.

And

I

realized

what

family

meant

to

me.

I

made

up

my

mind

that

I

would

study

hard

to

thank

my

parents.

02

素材积累◆开头句①There

are

many

unforgettable

events

in

my

life.②I

had

a

terrible

day

the

day

before

yesterday.③There

is

always

something

unforgettable

in

my

life,especially

the

story

between

my

friend

and

me.◆中间句①While

I

was

doing

my

homework…②He

was

riding

very

fast

when

a

car

came.③I

was

so

worried

that

I

couldn't

say

a

word.◆结尾句①In

my

opinion,no

matter

what

happens,true

friends

will

always

be

friends.②I'll

always

remember

that

day.③What

an

unforgettable

day

it

was!【名言积累】①It

never

rains

but

it

pours.祸不单行。②With

the

new

day

comes

new

strength

and

new

thoughts.新的一天，万象更新。③Experience

is

the

best

teacher.经验是最好的老师。Dear

students,

There

are

many

events

on

our

road

to

growth（成长）.Maybe

they

made

you

happy,excited,nervous

or

sad.

Our

school

magazine

is

having

an

essay

contest（征文大赛）

this

month.

Please

write

an

essay

on

“An

Unforgettable

Event”.In

your

essay,you

must

talk

about

these

questions:

1.What

was

the

event?When

and

where

did

it

happen?

2.What

was

the

result?

Please

send

your

essay

to

us

as

soon

as

possible.

E-mail

us

at

gmzx666@163.com.Mr.

Zhang范文剖析

假如你是李嘉，请阅读下面的学校通知，然后根据通知内容写一篇80词左右的应征稿。可以适当发挥。►►审题指导1.文体:记叙文2.人称:第一人称3.时态：一般过去时►►思路点拨An

Unforgettable

Event

①There

are

many

unforgettable

events

in

my

life

and

I

can't

forget

them.I'd

like

to

share

one

of

them

with

you.

On

November

5th,I

took

part

in

an

English

talk

show

competition.②On

that

day,I

woke

up

very

early

to

practice

the

speech.When

I

walked

onto

the

stage,I

almost

forgot

all

the

words.

Then

I

took

a

deep

breath

and

talked

as

usual.

Luckily,I

made

up

some

words

to

let

my

speech

go.③Finally,I

won

the

first

place.

④It

was

an

unforgettable

day!I'll

always

remember

that

day.An

Unforgettable

Event

①____________________________________________________________________

I'd

like

to

share

one

of

them

with

you.升格技巧技巧一：巧用so…that…句型升格①技巧二：巧用because引导的原因状语从句升格②

There

are

so

many

unforgettable

events

in

my

life

that

I

can't

forget

them.

On

November

5th,I

took

part

in

an

English

talk

show

competition.②___________________________________________________________________When

I

walked

onto

the

stage,I

almost

forgot

all

the

words.

Then

I

took

a

deep

breath

and

talked

as

usual.

Luckily,I

made

up

some

words

to

let

my

speech

go.③_______________________________（最使我惊讶的是）

I

won

the

first

place

at

last.

④_______________________________

I'll

always

remember

that

day.技巧三：巧用主语从句升格③技巧四：巧用what引导的感叹句升格④

On

that

day,I

woke

up

very

early

because

I

wanted

to

practice

the

speech.What

surprised

me

most

was

thatWhat

an

unforgettable

day

it

was!续表04

写作练笔

请结合下图内容及提示，以“A（n）

__________

Event”为题,根据写作要求，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

要求：

1.结合实际，用适当的形容词补全标题；

2.短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展；

3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。►►审题指导1.文体:________2.人称:第____人称3.时态:____________4.写作要点:①________________________________;②________________记叙文一一般过去时介绍事件发生的时间、地点、过程表达自己的感受►►思路点拨MovingThere's

a

moving

family

event

that

I

will

never

forget.①Introduce

the

event

（when,where,what）②Express

how

I

felt

I

made

up

my

mind

that

I

would

study

hard

to

thank

my

parents.►►小试身手A

________Event_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________