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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IliveinSamburu,innorthernKenya.WhereIgrewup,therewereelephantslivinginthewild.Iwasattractedbythesecreatures.They'resosocial,complexandsympathetic;theirsizeisbreathtaking.Now,workinginthefieldforSavetheElephantsinKenya,IammostlybasedinSamburuNationalReserve—a165km²protectedpark—recordingdetailsofthepopulationandleading,collaringoperations.WearrangeGPStrackersaroundwildelephants'necks,sowecanmonitortheirmovements.Morethan1,000knownelephantsusethereserve.OneofthoseelephantswasRommel.Rommeldidn'tcomeoften,butwhenhedidturnup,we'dhavetobeprepared.Hewashugeandeasytobeannoyed,weighingaboutsixtons.InMay2019,inthemiddleofthewetseason,Rommelappearedagain.Anditwashisturntobecollared.Wesentthreecarsouttosearchforhim.There'sariver,theEwasoNyiro,runningthroughtheparkwheremanyelephantsmeetinthemornings.At10:30a.m.,searchingthegroupsaroundtheriver,JohnclockedRommel,withabigcutonhisrightear.Rommelwasdarted(用飞镖射)adrugforhimtosleep.Normallyittakessevenminutesforthedrugtohit,butforRommel'ssizeitcantakelonger.Whenthedarthithim,heturnedaway,headinginanunexpecteddirection.Rommelstartedshaking.Hewasinthemiddleofcrossingtheriverwhenthedrughit.Hecollapsedintothewater.Ijumpedoutofmyvehicle:Rommeldrowningwouldbeadisaster.Onlybyliftinghistrunkandstoppingitfrombeingsunkenintherivercouldweensurehissurvival.Theproblemwasthecurrentoftheriverwasfastflowingandunpredictable,andtheriverwasfilledwithcrocodiles(鳄鱼).“Wemustgoimmediately,"Johnsaidasheassessedthesituation."I'llhelpyousteadyhisheadsoyoucanlifthistrunkmoresafely."注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本主旨​本文讲述了“我”在肯尼亚为保护大象工作，负责记录大象种群信息及为大象安装GPS追踪器。大象Rommel体型庞大且易发怒，在一次为它安装追踪器的行动中，被麻醉镖射中后在过河时陷入水中，面临溺水危险，“我”和同伴决定展开救援。​词汇积累​野生动物相关：elephant（大象）、creature（生物）、wild（野外）、reserve（保护区）、population（种群数量）​动作相关：record（记录）、monitor（监测）、searchfor（搜寻）、dart（用飞镖射）、collapse（倒下，崩溃）、lift（抬起）、steady（使稳定）、assess（评估）​环境相关：river（河流）、current（水流）、crocodile（鳄鱼）、wetseason（雨季）​续写分析​衔接句：第一段以“Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.”开头，自然承接上文决定救援Rommel的情节，引出“我”在救援过程中首要完成安装GPS的任务。第二段“Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.”则通过对“我”在河中感受的描写，进一步渲染紧张氛围，与第一段“我”进入河中救援相衔接。​情节合理性：在第一段续写中，“我”在同伴帮助下靠近Rommel并安装GPS，同时与水流和Rommel庞大的身躯艰难对抗，符合救援时既要完成任务又要克服困难的逻辑。第二段续写中，“我”在河中时刻担心鳄鱼攻击，在紧张氛围中坚持支撑Rommel，直到它苏醒，这一系列情节既延续了紧张感，又合理地推动故事发展，最终以Rommel苏醒游走作为圆满结局。​情感铺垫：前文对Rommel的庞大及易发怒的描述，以及它陷入河中面临危险的状况，为整个救援行动奠定了紧张的情感基调。在续写中，“我”的紧张、对鳄鱼的恐惧以及坚持救援的决心等情感，都与前文铺垫相契合，使情感发展连贯且自然。​情感走向​整个故事情感从最初发现Rommel时的紧张，到它陷入水中时的焦急，再到救援过程中的极度紧张与恐惧，最后Rommel苏醒游走时转变为欣慰与喜悦，情感起伏明显且符合情节发展。​主题深化​通过描述对Rommel的救援过程，不仅展现了人们为保护野生动物所付出的努力和面临的危险，还强调了保护野生动物的重要性以及人与自然和谐共处的意义。下水文一​Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.WithJohn'shelp,Icarefullymademywayintotheriver,fightingagainstthestrongcurrent.Rommel'shugebodywashalf-submerged,andIstruggledtoreachhisneck.Everynowandthen,thecurrentwouldpushmeback,butIrefusedtogiveup.Finally,ImanagedtofastentheGPS.However,thesituationwasstillcritical.Ihadtokeephistrunkabovewaterwhilewaitingforhimtowakeup.​Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Myheartwaspoundinginmychest,andmyhandswereshaking.ButIknewIcouldn'tletgo.IkepttalkingtoRommel,asifhecouldunderstandme.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,Rommelbegantostir.Slowly,heliftedhismassivebodyandstoodup.Withagratefullook,hewalkedawayintothewild.Iwatchedhimgo,feelingagreatsenseofreliefandpride.Wehadnotonlycompletedourmissionbutalsosavedapreciouslife.​下水文二​Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thewaterwascoldandthecurrentwasfierce,butIpressedon.JohnheldRommel'sheadassteadilyashecould,andIswamtowardsthegiantelephant.Hisbodywassolargethatitwaslikeapproachingasmallisland.WhenIreachedhisneck,IfumbledwiththeGPS,myhandsslipperyfromthewater.Finally,Isecuredit.Butthen,Ihadtofacethemoredifficulttaskofkeepinghimafloat.​Eachtimeasmallfishtouchedmylegs,Iwouldwonderifitwasacrocodile.Fearcreptupmyspine,butIwasdeterminedtoseethisthrough.IpushedwithallmymighttokeepRommel'strunkabovewater.Theminutestickedbyslowly.Suddenly,Rommelletoutalowrumble.Hiseyesopened,andhestartedtomove.Iquicklyswambacktotheshore,exhaustedbutoverjoyed.Rommelregainedhisfootingandlumberedaway,carryingwithhimthehopeofourresearchandthefutureofhiskind.​参考答案Inasecond,IdecidedtoactquicklyandputaGPSonhisneck.Thewaterwasicycold,andthestrongcurrentconstantlypushedmeoffbalance.WithJohn'sassistance,IinchedclosertoRommel,hismassivebodylookingevenmoreimposingunderwater.EverytimeItriedtoreachhisneck,thecurrentwouldpullmeback.ButIwasdetermined.Finally,afterseveralattempts,ImanagedtofastentheGPS.However,thejobwasn'tdone.Istillhadtokeephistrunkabovewater.Hisheadwassoheavythatittookallmystrengthtoholditup,andIwasconstantlyworriedaboutmyow