图表作文（满分范文）专练-上海新高考英语一轮总复习（解析版）

进阶练15图表作文（满分范文）专练（解析版）

学校:姓名：班级：考号：

一、图表作文

1.（2022秋・上海•高三上海市向明中学校考阶段练习）GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研

你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报

告中，你必须：

1.描述调研数据；

2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

父母：我以孩子•为荣爨：80%

孩子：父母以我为荣60%

0°o20°o40%60%80°o100%

【答案】Recently,wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren.The

resultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesame

opinion.Accordingtothesurvey,wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%more

thanofchildren.

Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference.First,conservative

Chineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren.This

tendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence.Second,thecurrent

educationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance,thusforcingchildrentoextensively

believethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud.Thisbiasunfairlyundermines

thesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports,whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelyto

underestimatethemselves.

Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam-orientededucationalmethods,akid

wouldneverendupwithapositivegrown-up.

【分析】这是一篇说明文。要求考生根据图表写一份报告

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.描述调研数据；

2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

madeasurvey,beproudof,heldthesameopinion,figureout,beneveraccustomedto,

developastrongsenseof,emphasizethevalueof,endupwith

第三步：连词成句

1.Recently,wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren.

2.Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesame

opinion.

3.Accordingtothesurvey,wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethan

ofchildren.

4.Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference.

5.First,conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudof

theirchildren.

6.Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First,Second

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1]Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports,whicheasily

frustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves.which弓I导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2]Second,thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance,

thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparents

proud.现在分词作状语。

2.（2022春・上海•高三上海市洋泾中学校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150

wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对手写字的重视程度降低了。下图是一项调查显示中学生不想

改善字迹的理由。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。

2

中学生不想改善字迹的理由

可以用电脑写字L

没有时间练[

没有什么用[

其它|在5.3%

【答案】Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofcomputers,teachers,studentsandtheirparentsarepaying

lessandlessattentiontohandwriting.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about85.8percentofmiddleschoolstudents

thinkthattheirhandwritingispoor.Yetforvariousreasons,manystudentsdon'twanttoimprovetheir

handwriting.51.5percentofthestudentsthinkthattheycanjustuseacomputer,sothereisnoneedtowastetime

improvingtheirhandwriting,and32.2percentbelievethattheyaresobusywiththestudythattheydonothave

timetopractice.10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshows

theman.Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.Therefore,inmy

opinion,moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonthisaspectinthefuture.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生说明该调查显示的中学生不想改善字迹的理由的这种现

象并发表自己的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

调查：survey-research

各种各样的：various-allkindsof

提高：improve一enhance

认为：think—consider

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.

拓展句：Beautifulandneatcalligraphyisgoodforstudents,whichisespeciallyformiddleschoolstudents.

【点睛】【高分句型1]10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

3.（2022•上海•上海市第二中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

accordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

目前，网络语言(InternetSlang)在青少年中极为盛行，你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调

查，调查结果见下面饼状图(piechart)o请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表

达你自己的观点。

【答案1WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.

Theresultsareasfollows.

Somestudentsareinfavorofitwhilesomeareopposed.35%studentsfeelitactiveandfashionabletosay

InternetSlang.And33%studentsthinkitisfullofhumorandwisdom.Quarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitis

moreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.While7%studentsviewitasasimplething.TheythinkInternetSlang

wasn'tusedbymostpeopleandifitisusedtoooften,itwillcausemisunderstanding.

AsfarasIamconcerned,InternetSlangisadouble-edgedsword.Ifweuseitinaproperway,ouronline

communicationwillbemorecolorful.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就网络语言在同学中极为盛行的现象的调查结果进行阐述,

并表达自己的观点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

越来越多：moreandmore一increasing

支持：support一infavorof

认为：think-holdtheopinionthat

我认为：Ithink一AsfarasIamconcerned

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.The

resultsareasfollows.

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拓展句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey,

whoseresultsareasfollows.

【点目青】[高分句型l]WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedout

asurvey.（with的复合结构）

[高分句型2]QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.（同位语从句）

4.（2022•上海静安•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了

调查，结果如下：

获取短视频内容的类型受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）

辅助学习类48%

娱乐休闲类31%

生活技能类12%

其他9%

请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。

（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）

【答案】Asurveyconductedbyawebsiteisaimedatfiguringoutthesituationabouthighschoolstudents9useof

shortvideosasachannelforgaininginformation.Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreen

timehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedto

entertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideos

concerningsomeimportantlifeskills.And9%isspentonrandomcontents.

AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwith

theirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.Thus,itis

nowonderthatalargeproportionoftheirtimeisspentonshortvideos.Iamsurethatthistrendwillcontinueand

lastforever.

【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。

【详解】1.词汇积累

旨在：beaimedat一beintendedtodo

与...相关：relatedto一withregardto

除此以外：inaddition-additionally

提IWJ：improve一enhance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.

拓展句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosthatarerelevanttosomeimportantlife

skills.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspenton

contentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisure

accountsfor31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentsto

helpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.

（运用了强调句型以及makeit+形容词+forsb.todosth.的结构）

5.（2022•上海嘉定•高三专题练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

某校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如图所示。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动,

并针对图表2中任何一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的观点。

生词：图表chart

学生主要课余活动及所用时间学生各项主要活动所占课余时间比例

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活动项目

图表1图表2

【答案】AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly

100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,using

computers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.

I'vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.InChart2Ifindthat

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doinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren'somschooltime.Undersuchcircumstances,thestudents

simplycannotspareenoughtimeforfunthings,thuslosingtheprimetimetocultivatetheirsports,culturaland

spiritualhobbies,nottosayanythingoftheirartisticdevelopment.Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,

canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?

Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.

【导语】本文是图表作文。要求考生对中学生课余活动进行的调查结果谈谈个人的观点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

据显示：Asisshown—>Itisshownthat

令人担心、的：worrying一worrisome

占据：takeup一occupy

有趣的：fim一interesting

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.

拓展句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforthefactthattherewillbelessacademicloadandmore

leisureactivities

【点睛】【高分句型1]AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudents

devotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,

usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.（由

as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I'vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.（由that引

导的宾语从句）

【高分句型3]InChart2,1findthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren'soff-schooltime.（由

that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型4]Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyand

physicallyhealthy?（由When引导的时间状语从句）

6.（2022•上海嘉定•统考一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是光明中学的学生张华。你们学校拟开设劳动课程，现给出如下方案，学校委托学生会征询大家

的意见。

内容高一：电器使用和维护高二：植物种植与养护高三：物品整理和收纳

时间每学期最后两周，每周2整天

地点理科实验专用教室

给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括:

1）你认为该方案中存在的问题;

2）你的建议和理由。

【答案】DearStudents9Union,

Fmwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.Itisofgreatbenefitforus

studentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbodyandlearningmorelifeskills.

However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthe

senior1students,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifeso

thattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollifequickly.

Furthermore,asfarasthetimegiventhelaborcourseisconcerned,itisnotenoughatall.Inordertopay

moreattentiontothelaborcourse,studentsshouldbeofferedmoretimetoexperiencemoreactivitiesrelatedto

thelaborcourse.

I5mdeeplyconvincedthataslongasyoutakemyadviceintoaccount,thislaborcoursewillbeinteresting

andrewarding.

Yourssincerely,

ZhangHua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校学生会写一封邮件，就学校拟开设劳动课程的方案

提出问题，并给出建议和理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提出：putforward一comeupwith

方案：schedule一plan

止匕夕卜：furthermorewhafsmore

考虑：take...intoaccount—take...intoconsideration

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I'mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.

拓展句：I'mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcoursewhichisplannedbyyou.

【点目青】【高分句S1]Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingup

ourbody,learningmorelifeskills.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语）

【高分句型2】However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnot

appropriateforthesenior1,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsof

schoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollife.

（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,because引导的原因状语从句以及sothat引导的目的状语从句）

7.（2023•上海•上海市建平中学校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccording

totheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

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最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学

生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：

教师是否会被人工智能取代

1.简要描述图表；

2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;

3.你的理由。

【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificial

intelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificial

intelligence,while56%saidno.

Personallyspeaking,teacherswon'tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteaching

studentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducating

people,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelings

andwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.

Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers9labor,andcannotreplacetheroleof

teachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyare

farfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.

Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobs

thatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,

调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章

内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

取代：replace—supersede

拥有：possess—>takepossessionof

重要的：important—•significant

也就是说：thatistosay=inotherwords

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityof

education.

拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityof

education.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportant

mission,whichistoeducatepeople.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentquality

ofeducation.（运用了现在分词作状语）

8.（2023•上海•模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

国际经合组织（OECD）对600,000名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查，结果如下图。请

联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。

【答案】TheORGANISATIONforEconomicCo-operationandDevelopment（OECD）asked600,000teenagers

whatworriedthemmostabouttheirlives.

Itturnsoutthatfortypercentofthestudentsintheiracademicassignmentsfeelpressure;thirtypercentofthe

studentsontheirrelationshipwiththeirparentsfeelalittlenervous;twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheir

ownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.Theremainingfivepercentofthestudentsfeelanxious

andconcernedaboutotherthings.

AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.Itmakesmefeel

anxiousandconfusedandsometimeshelpless.Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.To

improvetheirpsychologicalquality,Ithinkwestudentsshouldbebetterimproved.Ithinkweshouldgetmore

helpfromparentsandteachers.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对国际经合组织（OECD）对600,000名青少年就生

活中最令他们担忧的事情进行调查的结果，联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。

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【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：pressure一stress

担心：beconcernedabout一beworriedabout

就我而言：asfarasIamconcerned一personallyspeaking

无助的：helpless一unassisted

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.

拓展句：Itismaybebecauseofafailureinanexamthatlwillbeinabadmood.

【点睛】【高分句型11twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsome

confusion.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语。）

【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.（运用

了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。）

9.（2021秋•上海•高三华师大二附中校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150words

accordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩。

假如你是该校学生，请你以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：

1.简要描述图中信息；

2.谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。

10%

30%

20%①

④

20%20%

③②

图表说明：①testresults

②notes

(3)homework

④classperformances

⑤teamwork

【答案］TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool

Inordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomake

somechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.

Students9testresults,whichusedtobetheonlywaytoevaluateastudentinschool,makeuponly30%ofhis

finalscore.Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretaken

intoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigher

score,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.

I'mallforthenewgradingsystem,whichevaluatesstudentsinallfields.Onlybyputtingthesysteminto

practice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymake

preparationsforourfuturelife.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题写一篇短文,

内容包括：简要描述图表信息以及谈谈对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

评估：evaluate一assess

考虑：takeintoaccount一consider

重要的：important一ofimportance

擅长：begoodat一dowellin

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworking

togetherwithyourclassmates.

拓展句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant,whichmeansifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbe

goodat