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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Oneweek,weparticipatedinaprogramthataimedtobringstudentsfunandalsostrengthentheircourage.Onthethirdmorning,weleftourcampforahike.Wepicked
ourwayalongastreaminapark.Thereweresixofus.Tallandstrong,Samledtheway.Afterawhile,wefoundasmallwaterfallandsomesmallerkidsplayinginthepoolbelowtogetherwiththeircampleaders.Forkedribbonsofwater(分叉的带状水流)leaptaboutthreemetersintothepool.Wesettledourselvesonalargestoneabovethewaterfall.Weunpackedourbagsandspreadoutfood,eatingandlaughing.Minuteslater,theotherscarriedallthefoodand
attemptedtojumpacrossthestreamabovethewaterfall.Soon,theycrossedthefirstnarrow
ribbonofwaterandwerenowstandingontherocksthatborderedthesecondchannel.Tome,thesecondchannellookedsowide!Scared,IdecidedtostayrightwhereIwas.Buttheyyelledback,“Comeonoverhere!Ifyouwantanyjuice,thatis!”Iwasthirsty.Slowly,IpickedmywayacrossagroupofrockstillIreachedaflatstoneoppositewheretheyweregrouped.Allhadtheirbackstome;theywerenowbusyaimingsmallstonesat
afallentreeonthebank.Iglanceddown.Theverycoldwaterwasrunningpastthestone,inchesawayfrommyfeet.Ilookedacrossthebeltofwatertowardsthetemptingfruitjuice!Thissightinspiredmetotakeaction.Ibentdown,tensedmyselftoleap,andthenglancedtowardstheleftside.Barelytwometersawaywasthewaterfall.Althoughitwassmallandtherewereadultsbelow,Istillfeared.Mykneestrembled;Idrewbackacoupleofpaces,staringatthe
runningwater.“Comealong,Jimmy!”Samsaidinagentlevoice.Ilookedup.Samstoodontheotherside,barelyfourfeetawayfromme.Hemusthaveseenmehesitatingontheedgeof
thestoneandsensedmyterroratjumpingacrossthislittlestream!Embarrassed,Itookoff
myglasses.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iwipedthem,searchingforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.ThenIgatheredmycourage,tookastepforward,andjumpedlightlyacrossthechannel.营地徒步故事写作写作提纲第一段:内心挣扎描述“我”擦拭眼镜时的内心状态,如思绪混乱,拼命找借口逃避跨越水流,“Iwipedthem,mymindracingasIsearchedforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.”。刻画Sam鼓励“我”的场景,包括他的表情、话语,“ButSam,withhispatientsmile,didn'tgiveup.‘Youcandoit,Jimmy.Justasmalljump,andyou'llbeherewithus,’heencouraged.”。展现“我”环顾四周,试图寻找帮助或借口的举动,以及对水流声音的感受,“Ilookedaround,hopingforamiracle.Thesoundoftherushingwaterseemedtomockmyfear.”。第二段:勇敢跨越详细描述“我”鼓起勇气准备跳跃的动作,如深呼吸、迈出脚步,“ThenIgatheredmycourage,tookadeepbreath,andtookastepforward.”。刻画跳跃过程中的身体感受和心理状态,如失重感、心跳加速,“Forasplitsecond,Ifeltweightless,suspendedinmid-air.Myheartpoundedwildly.”。描写成功跨越后的情景,包括看到Sam和同伴的反应,“Andthen,withathud,Ilandedontheotherside.IopenedmyeyestoseeSam'sbeamingfaceandtherestofthegroupcheering.”。第三段:感悟升华表达“我”对自己成功跨越的难以置信,“Icouldn'tbelieveIhadmadeit.”。阐述内心恐惧被成就感取代的感受,“Thefearthatoncegrippedmewasreplacedbyasenseofaccomplishment.”。总结从这次经历中获得的感悟,如勇气的重要性,“Irealizedthatsometimes,allittakesisalittlecouragetoovercomeourfearsandembracenewexperiences.”。语言积累短语searchfor寻找avoiddoingsth.避免做某事raceone'smind思绪混乱giveup放弃encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事lookaround环顾四周hopefor希望得到gatherone'scourage鼓起勇气takeastepforward向前迈出一步bereplacedby被……取代佳句AsIwipedmyglasses,athousandthoughtsswirledinmymind,eachoneafeebleattempttofindanexcusetoshyawayfromthedauntingtaskofcrossingthewater.当我擦拭眼镜时,无数想法在我脑海中盘旋,每一个都是试图找到一个借口,逃避跨越水流这一艰巨任务的无力尝试。Sam,withhisever-presentpatienceandwarmsmile,refusedtoletmyfearwin.Hiswords,likeagentlebreezeinthestormofmyanxiety,offeredaglimmerofhope.山姆,带着他一贯的耐心和温暖的笑容,拒绝让我的恐惧获胜。他的话,就像我焦虑风暴中的一缕微风,带来了一丝希望。Thesoundoftherushingwater,likeamenacingroar,seemedtotauntmytimidity,makingmyheartpoundevenfasterinmychest.湍急水流的声音,如同威胁的咆哮,似乎在嘲笑我的胆怯,让我的心在胸腔里跳得更快了。Summoningeveryounceofcouragewithinme,Itookadeep,steadyingbreathandtookthatdecisivestepforward,readytofacemyfearhead-on.我鼓起内心的每一丝勇气,深吸一口气让自己镇定下来,迈出了那决定性的一步,准备直面我的恐惧。ThemomentIlandedsafelyontheotherside,awaveofelationwashedoverme,replacingtheparalyzingfearthathadheldmehostageforsolong.当我安全地落在另一边的那一刻,一股喜悦之情涌上心头,取代了长久以来束缚着我的那种令人瘫痪的恐惧。写作示范示范一Iwipedthem,mymindinacompleteturmoilasIdesperatelysearchedforanout.EveryexcuseIcouldthinkofseemedvalid,yetSam'sencouragingvoicekeptbreakingthrough.“Jimmy,you'vegotthis.It'sjustashortleap,”hesaid,hiseyesfilledwithconfidence.Iscannedthearea,prayingforawayout,buttherushingwateronlyseemedtolaughatmyfear.However,IknewIcouldn'tkeepcowering.Takingadeepbreath,Isteeledmyself.ThenIgatheredmycourage,mylegsshakingslightlyasItookastepforward.Withaquickjump,Ifeltthegrounddisappearbeneathme.Forthatbriefmomentinmid-air,myheartwasinmythroat.Andthen,Ilandedontheothersidewithathud.Sam'sfacelitupwithahugesmile,andthegrouperuptedincheers.“Welldone,Jimmy!”theyexclaimed.Iwasindisbelief.Thefearwasgone,replacedbyastrongsenseofachievement.Ilearnedthatwithabitofcourage,wecanovercomeevenourgreatestfears.示范二Iwipedthem,mythoughtsjumbledasIhuntedforareasonnottocross.Sam,undeterred,kepttryingtocoaxme.“Comeon,Jimmy.It'snotasbadasitlooks,”heurged.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnoeasywayout.Thesoundofthewaterwasdeafening,fuelingmyanxiety.ButSam'swordsechoedinmyears.IknewIhadtofacethis.Iinhaleddeeply,tryingtocalmmynerves.ThenIgatheredmycourageandtookahesitantstepforward.Ipushedofftheground,andforasplitsecond,Iwasflying.Myheartraced,andIfeltarushofadrenaline.Amomentlater,Itoucheddownontheotherside.Samandthegroupwereclappingandcheering.“Youdidit!”theyshouted.Icouldn'tbelieveIhadactuallymadeit.Thefearthathadplaguedmewasreplacedbyafeelingofpride.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatsometimes,allittakesisalittlepushtoovercomeourfears.示范三Iwipedthem,mymindracingasIdesperatelysoughtanexcusetoavoidtheleap.Sam,withhispatientdemeanor,continuedtoencourageme.“You'recapableofthis,Jimmy.Justasmalljump,”hesaid.Ilookedaround,butthewaterseemedtobeclosingin.Itssoundwasintimidating,butSam'swordsgavemeaglimmerofhope.Itookadeepbreath,tryingtosteadymyself.ThenIgatheredmycourageandtookaresolutestepforward.Ijumped,andinthatfleetingmoment,Ifeltweightless.Myheartpounded,andthenIlanded.Sam'sfacewasbeaming,andthegroupwascheering.“Greatjob,Jimmy!”theycried.IwasastoundedthatIhadmadeit.Thefearthatonceheldmebackwasnowreplacedbyasenseofvictory.Irealizedthatwithcourage,wecanconquertheobstaclesthatstandinourway.参考答案Iwipedthem,searchingforareasontoavoidcrossingthewater.Afterputtingthemonagain,Samwasstillthere.“Idon'twantanyjuice!”Isaid.Samnoddedunderstandingly.“Fine!”hespokep
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