读后续写+社区花园保护的故事+讲义 高三下学期3月一模英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AftergettinguplateonasleepySunday,IsawmydadatthekitchentablereadingtheSundayeditionofthelocalnewspaper.Imadeaquicksandwichandsatdownnexttohim,askinghimwhatwasnew.Heturnedtomeinlowspiritsandsaidthecouncilwasplanningtoteardownthecommunitygardennearby.Hementionedthatheusedtoworkonitwithhisdad,sotheplacehadsomechildhoodmemoriesforhim.Hethenputdownthepaper,walkedovertotheclosetandafterabitofhunting,pulledoutathick,blackbookInside,therewereseveraloldphotos.Afterthumbingthroughafewpages,mydadfoundtheoneofhimandhisdadtogetheratthecommunitygarden,justashehadsaid“Wow,yourcheeksweresuperrosybackthen!”Isaid,astonished.Withnothingplannedfortheafternoon,mydadandIdecidedtotakeatripovertothecommunitygardentoseehowitwasdoingthesedays.Notgood,asitturnedout.Sodacans,cigaretteendsandothergarbagespreadeverywhere.Potsofsoilwerestillthere,butthefewplantsthatremainedwereeitherdeadordying.Welookedateachotherandknewwhatwehadtodo.Aftergatheringsometoolsandgarbagebags,wewentstraighttocleanuptheplace.Iphonedsomeofmyschoolfriends,andsoonahalf-dozenpeoplewerecollectinggarbageandsweepingpaths.Someonehadevenbroughtbagsoffreshseedsandsoilalongwithnewflowers,soweuprootedtheolddeadplantsandflowersandplantednewones.Afterafewhours,thecommunitygardenlookedtotallytransformed.Despiteourhardwork,therewasstillthematterofthecomingcouncilvote.Wecreatedaplan:totakephotosofthegardenandspreadthenewsaboutthevote.Usingthephotos,wewouldthencollectsignatures(签名)toshowcontinuedlocalinterestandthenpresentthemtothecouncil.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________社区花园保护故事续写续写要点（两段）​第一段续写要点：​前往委员会：详细描绘前往委员会时的情景，如天气状况、同行人员的神态和交谈内容，体现大家紧张又满怀期待的心情。描述进入委员会会议室时的环境，灯光的亮度、桌椅的摆放，以及会议室里的氛围。​展示过程：着重刻画向委员会成员展示签名和照片的动作，双手递上的姿态、成员们接过时的表情。描述成员们查看照片时的细节，如仔细端详照片的神情、相互交流的低语。对于提问环节，具体阐述成员们提出的问题，如花园维护的具体计划、资金来源等，以及主角等人的回答，展现大家对花园的深入思考和规划。​第二段续写要点：​努力成功：生动描写得知委员会决定保留花园时，主角和同伴们的反应，欢呼、拥抱、激动流泪等动作和表情。阐述委员会决定拨款进一步改善花园的具体措施，如修建新的小径、增设休息长椅等。​社区影响：详细描述消息在社区传播的方式，如社区公告栏张贴、居民间口口相传。刻画更多居民自愿参与维护花园的场景，大家分工合作、共同劳动的画面。突出花园在社区中的新变化，成为居民休闲娱乐、增进感情的场所，展现社区凝聚力的提升。​情感线​第一段情感线：前往委员会时，主角和同伴们内心充满紧张，担心努力得不到认可。进入会议室后，紧张感加剧，同时又怀揣着一丝期待。在展示签名和照片过程中，随着委员会成员的反应，情绪逐渐波动，看到成员们惊讶和认可的表情时，燃起希望，面对问题时又保持冷静和坚定。​第二段情感线：得知花园得以保留时，主角和同伴们的情感瞬间爆发，从紧张担忧转变为极度喜悦和自豪。看到社区居民积极参与维护花园，感受到社区的温暖和团结，内心充满成就感，对花园的未来和社区的发展充满希望，对自己在保护花园过程中所扮演的角色感到无比骄傲。​故事线​主角在周日起床后，从父亲口中得知委员会计划拆除社区花园，父亲提及花园承载着他的童年回忆。​父亲拿出一本旧相册，里面有他和祖父在社区花园的照片，主角和父亲决定前往花园查看，发现花园破败不堪，垃圾遍地。​主角和父亲决定清理花园，主角打电话召集学校朋友帮忙，大家一起清理垃圾、种植新植物，使花园焕然一新。​为阻止花园被拆除，主角等人制定计划，拍摄花园照片，收集签名，准备向委员会展示，以表明社区对花园的关注和保护意愿。​主角和同伴们带着签名来到委员会，向成员们展示照片并回答问题，努力争取保留花园。​委员会决定保留花园并拨款改善，消息在社区传播，更多居民自愿参与维护，花园成为社区居民交流和增进感情的重要场所。​主旨升华句​Thisheart-warmingstoryofthecommunitygardenvividlydemonstratesthatwithdeterminationandcollectiveaction,wecanpreservenotonlyaphysicalspacebutalsothepreciousmemoriesandcommunityspirititembodies.（这个关于社区花园的温馨故事生动地表明，凭借决心和集体行动，我们不仅能够保护一个物理空间，还能守护它所承载的珍贵记忆和社区精神。）​Throughtheirunwaveringeffortstosavethecommunitygarden,thecharactersinthisstoryshowthatthepowerofloveforone'scommunityandthecouragetofightforwhatisrightcanovercomeanyobstacle.（通过故事中人物坚定不移地拯救社区花园的努力，展示了对社区的热爱以及为正义而战的勇气能够克服任何障碍的力量。）​Thesuccessfulpreservationofthecommunitygardenservesasapowerfulreminderthateverysmallstepwetaketowardsprotectingourenvironmentandheritagecanleadtosignificantpositivechangesinourlivesandcommunities.（社区花园的成功保留有力地提醒我们，我们为保护环境和遗产所迈出的每一小步都能给我们的生活和社区带来重大的积极变化。）​Thisnarrativeaboutthecommunitygardenhighlightstheimportanceofintergenerationalconnectionsandhowtheycaninspireustotakeactiontosafeguardtheplacesthatholdmeaningforourfamiliesandcommunities.（这个关于社区花园的故事突出了代际联系的重要性，以及它们如何激励我们采取行动，保护对我们的家庭和社区具有重要意义的地方。）​Thetransformationofthecommunitygardenfromaneglectedspacetoathrivingcenterofcommunitylifeshowsthatwhenacommunitycomestogetherwithasharedvision,theycancreateabrighterandmoreharmoniousfutureforall.（社区花园从一个被忽视的空间转变为一个繁荣的社区生活中心，表明当一个社区怀着共同的愿景团结起来时，他们能够为所有人创造一个更光明、更和谐的未来。）​写作示范一​第一段续写​Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,butanervousshiverrandownmyspineasweapproachedthecouncilbuilding.MyfriendsandIexchangednervousglances,ourhandstightlyclutchingthestackofsignaturesandthecarefullyselectedphotos.Asweenteredthecouncilchamber,theairwasthickwithanticipation.Westeppedforward,ourheartspounding,andpresentedthematerialstothecouncilmembers.Theireyesscannedthephotos,andsomeofthemletoutsoftgaspsofsurpriseattheremarkabletransformationofthegarden.Onememberraisedaneyebrowandasked,"Howdoyouplantoensurethelong-termmaintenanceofthegarden?"Wequicklylaunchedintoourwell-thought-outplans,emphasizingourcommitmenttothecommunityandthegarden.​第二段续写​Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.Thecouncilannouncedthattheyhaddecidedtosparethecommunitygardenfromdemolitionandwouldallocateagenerousamountoffundsforitsfurtherdevelopment.Thenewsspreadlikewildfireintheneighborhood.Peoplewereoverjoyed,andmanymorevolunteeredtojointhegarden-maintenanceteam.Theonce-desolategardennowbustledwithactivity.Neighborsofallagesgathered,sharinglaughterandgardeningknowledge.Webuiltnewflowerbeds,installedbeautifulbenches,andplantedmoretrees.Lookingback,Ifeltadeepsenseofpride.Wehadnotonlysavedthegardenbutalsostrengthenedthebondswithinourcommunity,creatingaplacethatwouldbecherishedforgenerationstocome.​写作示范二​第一段续写​Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Darkcloudsloomedinthesky,mirroringournervousmoodaswemadeourwaytothecouncil.Insidethechamber,thefluorescentlightsflickered,addingtothetenseatmosphere.Wewalkeduptothecouncilmembers,ourhandsshakingslightlyaswehandedoverthephotosandsignatures.Themembersleanedforward,theirexpressionsamixofcuriosityandsurprise.Onecouncilorfrownedandquestioned,"Whatiftherearedisputesamongthevolunteersregardingthegarden'smanagement?"Wecalmlyexplainedourproposedsystemofcommunicationandcooperation.Theirnodsofunderstandinggaveusaglimmerofhope.​第二段续写​Ultimately,wewerepleasedtoseeoureffortspaidoff.Thecouncil'sdecisiontosavethegardenandinvestinitsimprovementwasmetwithcheersfromthecommunity.Wordspreadrapidlythroughsocialmediaandlocalnewsletters.Moreandmoreresidentsjoinedthecause,andweekendswerefilledwiththesoundofgardeningtoolsandfriendlyconversations.Thegardenunderwentacompletemakeover,withcolorfulflower-filledpathsandacommunity-builtgreenhouse.Itbecameasymbolofunityandresilience.Reflectingonourjourney,Irealizedthatouractionshadnotonlysavedaphysicalspacebutalsokindledaspiritofcommunitypridethatwouldcontinuetogrowandthrive.​参考答案Later,wecametothecouncilwiththesignatures.Inthemeetingroom,wemetseveralcouncilmemberswhocaredaboutthecommunitygarden.Wepresentedourcaseforthegarden,alongwiththesignatures,andshowedthephotosofthegardenbeforeandafterourclean-up,highlightingthepositivechangeswe’dmade.The