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读后续写:小男孩从从无望到坚强的转变讲义读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thelittlecountryschoolhousewasheatedbyanold-fashionedcoalstove.Alittleboyhadthejobofcomingtoschoolearlyeachdaytostartthefireandwarmtheroombeforehisteacherandclassmatesarrived.Onemorningtheyarrivedtofindtheschoolhouseinflames.Theydraggedtheunconsciouslittleboyoutoftheburningbuildingmoredeadthanalive.Hehadmajorburnsoverthelowerhalfofhisbodyandwastakentothenearbycountyhospital.Fromhisbed,theterriblyburned,semi-consciouslittleboyfaintlyheardthedoctortalkingtohismother.Thedoctortoldhismotherthathersonwouldpossiblydie,fortheterriblefirehaddamagedthelowerhalfofhisbody.Butthebraveboydidn’twanttodie.Hemadeuphismindthathewouldsurvive.Somehow,totheamazementofthephysician,hedidsurvive.Whenthemortaldangerwaspast,heagainheardthedoctorandhismotherspeakingquietly.Themotherwastoldthatsincethefirehaddestroyedsomuchfleshinhislegs,hewasdoomedtobeunabletowalkproperly,withnouseatallofhislowerlimbs.Oncemorethebraveboymadeuphismind.Hewouldwalk.Butunfortunately,fromthewaistdown,hehadnomotorability.Histhinlegsjustdangledthere,allbutlifeless.Ultimately,hewasreleasedfromthehospital.Everydayhismotherwouldmassagehislittlelegs,buttherewasnofeeling,nocontrol,nothing.Yethisdeterminationthathewouldwalkwasasstrongasever.Whenhewasn’tinbed,hewasconfinedtoawheelchair.Onesunnyday,hismotherwheeledhimoutintotheyardwithafencearounditsedgetogetsomefreshair.从读后续写题目中,我们看到了一位小男孩在生命的边缘顽强挣扎,从极度的身体创伤中寻找希望。他没有选择放弃,而是坚定地做出决定,决心活下去并重拾行走的能力。这篇故事展现了从无望到坚强的转变,如何通过勇气和决心克服极限。续写部分第一段:开头句:
Thisday,insteadofsittingstill,hethrewhimselffromthechair.
1.固定句(情感描写):
Asurgeofdefiancewelledupinhisheartashedecidedthatnomatterhowdifficultitwas,hewouldmakehislegsmove.
解释:展现男孩内心不屈的情感,决定挑战自己,突破身体的限制。2.不固定句(细节描写):Hishandsgrippedtheedgeofthewheelchair,andhepushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight,feelingtheroughtextureofthegroundbeneathhim.解释:细节描写加强男孩的行动感与挣扎,突显他努力的过程。3.固定句(动作链推进):
Uponlandingontheground,hesteadiedhimself,usingthefenceashissupport,andbegantopushagainsthislifelesslegs.解释:动作链推进,展示男孩如何一步一步走向突破,增强情节的紧张感。4.不固定句(冲突铺垫):
Hislegsfeltheavy,asthoughtheyweremadeofstone,buthisheartpushedhimtotryagain,neverallowinghimtogiveup.解释:冲突铺垫,男孩面对沉重的挑战,表现出他的顽强和不屈。5.固定句(情节转折):Nosoonerhadheliftedhimselfupwiththefencethanhefelthisbodytremblewithexhaustion,butthefeelingofstandingonhisownfeetwasbeyondwords.解释:情节转折,通过男孩克服体力上的疲惫,展现他战胜恐惧的成就感。第二段:开头句:Usingthefenceashissupport,heraisedhimselfupslowly.6.固定句(情感转变):
Havingsteadiedhimselfforamoment,hefeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride,realizingthathewasdefyingallodds.解释:展示男孩从绝望到希望的转变,内心感受到成长与成就的喜悦。7.不固定句(背景渲染):
Thesuncastitswarmlightoverhim,andtheairaroundhimseemedtobefilledwithpossibilities,asifthewholeworldwascheeringhimon.解释:通过环境描写渲染男孩此刻的坚定与平静,增强情感的温暖感。8.不固定句(具体行动描写):
Hetookadeepbreathandtriedtomoveoneofhislegsforward.Slowly,hemanagedtodragitacrosstheground,inchbyinch.解释:通过具体的行动描写展现男孩如何一步步迈向目标,体现他的坚持与努力。9.固定句(结局升华):
Havingmovedonestepforward,hefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofvictory,realizingthathisdeterminationhadturnedtheimpossibleintothepossible.解释:结局升华,展现男孩通过坚定不移的决心战胜了极限,体验到生命的无限可能。10.固定句(主题点睛):
Thisexperiencehasleftanindeliblemarkonhislife,teachinghimthattruecourageisnottheabsenceoffear,buttheabilitytoovercomeit.解释:通过总结性的句子,点明主题,强调真正的勇气源于挑战自我并克服恐惧。完整续写第一段Thisday,insteadofsittingstill,hethrewhimselffromthechair.Asurgeofdefiancewelledupinhisheartashedecidedthatnomatterhowdifficultitwas,hewouldmakehislegsmove.Hishandsgrippedtheedgeofthewheelchair,andhepushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight,feelingtheroughtextureofthegroundbeneathhim.Uponlandingontheground,hesteadiedhimself,usingthefenceashissupport,andbegantopushagainsthislifelesslegs.Hislegsfeltheavy,asthoughtheyweremadeofstone,buthisheartpushedhimtotryagain,neverallowinghimtogiveup.Nosoonerhadheliftedhimselfupwiththefencethanhefelthisbodytremblewithexhaustion,butthefeelingofstandingonhisownfeetwasbeyondwords.
第二段Usingthefenceashissupport,heraisedhimselfupslowly.Havingsteadiedhimselfforamoment,hefeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride,realizingthathewasdefyingallodds.Thesuncastitswarmlightoverhim,andtheairaroundhimseemedtobefilledwithpossibilities,asifthewholeworldwascheeringhimon.Hetookadeepbreathandtriedtomoveoneofhislegsforward.Slowly,hemanagedtodragitacrosstheground,inchbyinch.Havingmovedonestepforward,hefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofvictory,realizingthathisdeterminationhadturnedtheimpossibleintothepossible.Thise
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