读后续写+小狗+Spider+归家记+讲义 高三下学期2月联考英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。IwaseightyearsoldwhenmyfamilymovedfromTowoombatoEnglandin1950.MymotherwassufferingfromararediseaseandhadtotaketreatmentinLondon.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fathersenthisfive-year-oldredheeler(Australiancattledog),Spider,whowaslovedbyusall,tohisfriendSandy,asSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas.Wedidn’tknowhowlongmymother’streatmentwouldtakeorhowlongwewouldbeaway.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.Iwillalwaysremembermyfather’sfaceashereadthisnews.MymotherandItriedtocomforthim,knowinginourheartshowuselessthiswas.Sandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany“sightings”,thedogwasneverfound.ItseemedSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Myfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecrethopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandmyfatherimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Herepeatedcallstothepeoplewhohadsaidtheyhadseenhisdog,butitturnedouttobeclueless.Onecoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning,eightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromGinGin,375kilometersfromToowoomba.Anelderlyladylivingonherownwasputtingfoodout“foraveryoldyellowdog”.Thishadbeengoingonforafewweeks.Immediatelywesetoff.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtheoldhousebesidethebush(灌木丛).Sadly,theladytoldmyfatherthatthedoghadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadanupsetlookinhiseyes.HeputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意1950年，作者8岁时全家从澳大利亚的图文巴搬去英国，因母亲要在伦敦接受罕见病治疗。出发前，父亲把心爱的5岁红色牧牛犬Spider交给朋友Sandy照顾。六周后，Sandy来信告知Spider在他们乘船离开两周后跑丢了。尽管多方寻找，一直无果。两年后全家回到澳大利亚，父亲立刻开始寻找Spider。八个月后的一个寒冷冬日，父亲接到375公里外金金镇一位老妇人的电话，说有只很老的黄狗来吃食已有几周。全家立刻前往，可惜到达时老妇人说狗已经几天没来了。父亲吹起为Spider特制的口哨。故事山分析开端：全家因母亲治病搬去英国，Spider被托付给朋友。发展：Spider跑丢，多方寻找无果。高潮：全家回国后父亲继续寻找，接到老妇人电话前往却得知狗已几天未出现，父亲吹口哨。结局（待续写）：期待小狗Spider出现，与家人团聚。五处伏笔以及在续写中的回应“Spider,whowaslovedbyusall”——回应：续写中家人对Spider的关爱体现在找到它后的精心照顾，如为它清理、陪伴它恢复。“Sandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonthemedia.Despitemany‘sightings’,thedogwasneverfound.”——回应：暗示小狗一直在流浪寻找主人，续写中可体现小狗历经艰难最终找到主人。“Myfatherworriedhewouldbeshotordeadfromstarvation.”——回应：找到小狗时它可能又瘦又虚弱，体现父亲之前担忧的合理性。“Onecoldwinter’sSaturdaymorning”——回应：可描述小狗在寒冷环境下的状态，如瑟瑟发抖，更凸显找到它后的温暖。“HeputtwofingerstohismouthanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.”——回应：续写中小狗听到口哨声有反应，如从灌木丛中跑出来。续写要点（两段）第一段：重点描写小狗听到口哨声后的反应，从灌木丛中出现的样子，如身体状况、动作等，以及家人看到小狗时的激动表现。第二段：描述带小狗回家后的情景，如为它清理、喂食，小狗逐渐恢复精神，家人与小狗相处的温馨画面，体现团聚的喜悦。情感线（150字）开始时家人因可能找不到Spider而失落、担忧。当听到灌木丛中的声音，希望瞬间燃起。看到Spider出现，激动与喜悦涌上心头。带它回家后，满心都是对它的心疼与关爱，在照顾过程中，家庭的温暖和对Spider失而复得的珍惜之情愈发浓烈，最终洋溢着幸福与满足。故事线（6条）小狗听到口哨声从灌木丛中出现。家人看到小狗，父亲冲过去抱住它。家人发现小狗的身体状况很差。带小狗回家，为它清理身体。给小狗喂食，小狗逐渐恢复精神。小狗与家人重新建立亲密关系，快乐生活。主旨升华句5句英文Thisreunionofthedogandourfamilyshowsthatthepowerofloveandloyaltycanovercomeanydistanceandhardship.（小狗与我们家庭的团聚表明，爱与忠诚的力量能够战胜任何距离和艰难。）Thelong-awaitedreturnofSpiderremindsusthathopeneverfades,nomatterhowdesperatethesituationmayseem.（Spider的迟迟归来提醒我们，无论情况看起来多么绝望，希望永不消逝。）Throughthisexperience,weunderstandthatthebondsbetweenhumansandanimalsaredeep-rootedandcanwithstandthetestoftime.（通过这次经历，我们明白人类与动物之间的纽带是根深蒂固的，能够经受住时间的考验。）Spider'sjourneybackhomeisabeautifulstoryofperseveranceandtheunbreakableconnectionbetweenfamilymembers,evenifoneofthemisapet.（Spider回家的旅程是一个关于坚持不懈以及家庭成员之间牢不可破联系的美好故事，即使其中一员是宠物。）ThereunionofSpiderandourfamilywarmsourheartsandteachesusthevalueofnevergivinguponthosewelove.（Spider与我们家庭的团聚温暖了我们的心，教会我们永远不要放弃我们所爱的人的价值。）写作示范范文一

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Askinny,dirtyfigureemergedslowly.ItwasSpider!Hisfurwasmatted,andhisbodywasshaking,butassoonashesawmyfather,histailbegantowagfeebly.Myfatherrushedtowardshim,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Hekneltdownandopenedhisarmswide.Spiderlimpedintohisembrace,whiningsoftly.Wewerealloverjoyed,huggingeachotherandcryingwithhappiness.

Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Wefilledatubwithwarmwaterandcarefullywashedawaythedirt.Fatherfedhimsmallamountsofsoftfood,andSpidergobbledituphungrily.Overthenextfewdays,Spiderregainedhisstrength.Hefollowedmyfathereverywhere,andourhomewasfilledwithhischeerfulbarksagain.Thisreunionwasatruemiracle,atestamenttotheunbreakablebondbetweenusandourbelovedpet.范文二

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Aweakandragged-lookingSpiderstumbledout.Hiseyeslitupwhenheheardthewhistleandsawmyfather.Hetriedtorunbuthislegsweretooweak.MymotherandIrushedtohim,gentlyliftinghimup.Myfather'shandstrembledashestrokedSpider'shead.Wecouldseethescarsofhislongjourneyonhisbody.

Oncehomewegentlycleanedhimup.Weusedasoftbrushtountanglehismattedfurandappliedointmenttohiswounds.Spideratethefoodweofferedwithgusto.Daybyday,hegrewstronger.Heplayedwithusintheyard,andthelovethathadbeenmissingforsolongwasbackinourhome.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatloveandpatiencecanbringbackwhatseemslostforever.【答案】Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush