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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。MyfriendAveryandItriedoutforAliceinWonderlandseveralweeksago.AveryreallyhopedshecouldgetpickedtobeAlice.Isaid,“You’dmakeagreatAlice!Idon’tcarewhatpartIgetaslongasI’minit.”Thensheasked,“Soyou’dbehappytohaveasmallpartliketheDormouse?”Ireplied,“Exactly!”Afewdayslater,AveryandIracedovertothetheatreoffice,wherethedirectorhadpostedthecastlist.“Wow!”saidAvery.“YougotthepartofAliceandIgotthepartoftheMarchHare.”“Thatcan’tberight,”Isaid.“Theremustbesomemistake!”ButIwasreallygiventhepartofAlice.ThereasonwhyI’ddonewellduringtheaudition(试镜)wasthatIwasnotnervousatall,becauseIhadneverthoughtIcouldgetthemajorrole.Iaskedherifshewantedtopractiseourlinesafterschool.Averyresponded,“Youmeanpractiseyourlines?No,thanks.I’mbusythisweek.”“OK.Howaboutsomedaynextweek?”Iasked.“Sorry,”shewhispered,“I’msureI’mbusyforever.”Thatnightatdinner,aftermyparentscongratulatedmeongettingtheleadrole,theyaskedhowIfeltaboutit.“Well,I’mconfused,”Isaid.“AverywassoupsetthatIwaspickedtobeAlice.Shethrewawayourfriendship.”“Arizona,don’tyouthinkthismightbeanopportunityforyoutobeanextra-goodfriend?”saidmydad.“Sometimeswhenourfriendsdowell,wefeelenvious(嫉妒的)anddon’tknowhowtoact.Trygivingheralittletimeandunderstanding.Iguessshe’llcomearoundbeforelong.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Overthenextweek,IdidmybesttogiveAverysomespace._________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ourplayendedupgoinggreat._________________________________________________________________________________________________________《爱丽丝梦游仙境》演出与友情续写续写要点第一段:着重描绘“我”给予Avery空间的具体行为,除了留便签,还可包括在学校的日常互动中保持适当距离,给她时间调整心态。同时,细腻刻画Avery的心理变化,从最初的嫉妒、排斥,到看到便签后的触动,最终主动向“我”道歉求和,以及两人重归于好后共同努力排练的场景。第二段:详细叙述演出的精彩过程,比如观众的反应细节,Avery和“我”在舞台上的出色表现,动作、表情、台词等方面的呈现。演出结束后,突出两人之间深厚的友谊以及对这次经历的深刻感悟,将友谊与演出成功紧密联系起来。情感线在得知“我”被选为主角后,Avery因嫉妒而产生不满情绪,对“我”态度冷淡,两人友谊出现裂痕,“我”感到困惑和失落。“我”听从父亲建议,给予Avery空间,通过留便签表达善意,Avery逐渐被打动,内心的嫉妒开始消散,产生愧疚感,主动向“我”道歉,两人重归于好,友谊得以修复,此时“我”感到欣喜和宽慰。演出成功后,两人充满自豪,友谊在共同经历中进一步升华,对彼此的情谊更加深厚,内心满是感动与珍惜。故事线“我”和Avery一起参加《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的试镜,“我”意外获得爱丽丝的角色,Avery成为三月兔,Avery因嫉妒对“我”态度恶劣。“我”听从父亲建议,给Avery空间,不在排练上勉强她,而是在她的储物柜留下鼓励和表达想念的便签。Avery看到便签后,内心有所触动,开始反思自己的行为,意识到自己的错误。Avery主动找到“我”,为自己之前的行为道歉,两人冰释前嫌,决定一起认真排练。演出当天,Avery和“我”在舞台上完美演绎各自角色,将《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的奇妙世界生动呈现给观众。演出大获成功,Avery和“我”收获了观众的热烈掌声,两人的友谊也在这次经历中变得更加坚不可摧。主旨升华句Truefriendshiphasthepowertoweatherthestormofenvyandemergeevenstronger,teachingusthevalueofpatienceandunderstanding.Inthejourneyoffriendship,momentsofjealousycanbetransformedintoopportunitiesforgrowth,strengtheningthebondbetweenfriends.Themagicoffriendshipliesinitsabilitytoovercomethemostchallengingemotions,suchasenvy,andcreatelastingmemories.Astrongfriendshipisnotdefinedbytheabsenceofenvy,butbythewillingnesstoforgiveandworkthroughittogether.Throughtheexperienceofenvyandreconciliation,welearnthattruefriendsarethosewhocanturnadifficultsituationintoachancetodeepentheirconnection.写作示范一Overthenextweek,IdidmybesttogiveAverysomespace.Irefrainedfromaskingheraboutrehearsalsandsimplysmiledatherinthehallway.Everymorning,Iplacedahandwrittennoteinherlocker.Onenoteread,“YourenergywillmaketheMarchHareunforgettable.”Asdayspassed,Inoticedachangeinher.Oneafternoon,shestoppedmeinthecorridor.Hereyeswerefilledwithremorseasshesaid,“Iwassowrong.Iletjealousygetthebetterofme.Canwestartoverandpractice?”Inoddedeagerly.Fromthatdayon,wespenthoursafterschool,perfectingourlinesandactingskills,supportingeachothereverystepoftheway.Ourplayendedupgoinggreat.Assoonasthecurtainrose,theaudiencewasspellbound.Avery'sportrayaloftheMarchHarewasfullofenergy,andIdidmybesttobringAlicetolife.Wesynchronizedourmovementsanddeliveredourlineswithprecision.Whenthefinalsceneended,theapplausewasdeafening.Wetookourbows,lookingateachotherwithtearsofjoy.Thisplaynotonlyshowcasedouractingtalentsbutalsomendedourbrokenfriendship,provingthattruefriendscanovercomeanyobstacle.写作示范二Overthenextweek,IdidmybesttogiveAverysomespace.Ididn'tbringuptheplayaroundherandfocusedonmyownpreparations.Ialsomadesuretocomplimentheronotherthings,likehernewhaircut.Alongwiththelockernotes,Ionceleftasmallflowerbyherdesk.Oneday,Ifoundherwaitingformeafterclass.Shefidgetednervouslyandthensaid,“I'mreallysorryforbeingsodistant.Iwasjealous,butIrealizenowhowsillythatwas.Let'spracticetogether.”Iwasthrilled.Weimmediatelystartedplanningourrehearsalscheduleandhelpedeachotherwiththetrickypartsofourroles.Ourplayendedupgoinggreat.Theaudiencewascaptivatedfromthefirstscene.Avery'sperformanceastheMarchHarewasbothhilariousandendearing,andIfeltasenseofconfidenceonstage.Wecouldfeeltheenergyfromtheaudienceasweperformed.Whenthecurtainclosed,thecheerswereoverwhelming.Wehuggedeachothertightly,knowingthatourfriendshiphadnotonlysurvivedbutthrived.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatfriendshipismorepreciousthananyroleandthatunderstandingcanhealeventhedeepestrifts.【答案】Overthenextweek,IdidmybesttogiveAverysomespace.Thenoneday,Iapproachedher.“Iknowyoudidn’texactlylovetheideaofbeingtheMarchHare,butyou’resuchatalentedactress,andthewayyousayyourlinesisgreat.”“Thanks,”saidAveryhappily,withabigsmileonherface.“Well,”
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