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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,ItwasacoldDecember.Mumhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherown.MyfatherhaddrownedinPittLakefiveyearsearlier.BecauseDadhadnopensionorbenefits,therewasnotmuchmoney;wewentonsocialassistance.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughasendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldtuckanewpieceofcardboardinourshoesbecauseoursoles(鞋底)werewornout.Whenwegothome,MumwouldhaveFrenchtoastreadyforus.Thiswasbreaddeep-friedinlard(猪油).Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosedays,anditdidn’tlooklikewe’dbeinourcurrenthousemuchlonger.Rentwas$25amonth,butMumcouldn’tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeforcedoutafterChristmas.Theholidayswerefastapproaching,andwewereentitledto$25forChristmasfromsocialservices.Aninspectorcametoourhouseandsearcheditthoroughlytobesurewedidn’thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn’tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewasgoingtousethemoneytopayourrent.Thatwaywe’dhavearoofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ThenshetoldustherewouldbenoChristmasgifts.UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastrees,shovelingsnowanddoingoddjobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots—bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.Theywereten-inch,Top-Genuine,andcost$23.ThebigdayforgettingmybootscameonChristmasEveafternoon.IwasveryexcitedasIhurrieduptheroadtocatchthebusintotown.ButonthewaytothebusstopInoticeddahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedthatwehadnolights,nodecorationsandnoChristmasgoodies.IalsoknewwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmasdinner.ButatleasttherewouldbeFrenchtoast.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodaloncinadaxe,feelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.《艰难岁月的圣诞抉择》续写续写要点(两段)第一段:着重刻画“我”内心的激烈冲突。一方面,对新靴子的渴望十分强烈,那是自己辛苦工作许久的目标,穿上新靴子能摆脱窘迫的穿着现状。另一方面,看到家里的寒酸景象,想象着家人过一个没有任何节日氛围的圣诞节,亲情的责任感涌上心头。此时可以通过回忆家庭过往的温暖时刻,或者对比其他家庭的热闹,来强化这种内心的纠结,最终促使“我”做出决定。第二段:详细描述“我”改变计划后的行动。先写“我”如何用买靴子的钱购买圣诞所需物品,比如在商店里挑选时的仔细考量,因为钱有限,要平衡各种物品的花费。接着描写回家后布置房子、准备食物的过程,可能会遇到一些小困难,但都努力克服。最后写家人回家后的反应,通过家人的表情、语言和动作,展现出他们的惊喜与感动,以及家庭氛围的转变。情感线(150字)起初,“我”满心期待着买新靴子,兴奋之情溢于言表。可当看到别人家的圣诞装饰,想到自家的凄凉,兴奋瞬间被失落和愧疚取代。内心开始在个人渴望与家庭责任间挣扎,痛苦又纠结。做出放弃买靴子的决定时,虽有不舍,但更多的是为家人付出的坚定。在购买圣诞物品和布置家的过程中,心中满是对家人即将收获惊喜的期待。当家人回家,看到他们的喜悦,“我”收获了满满的幸福与满足,深刻体会到亲情的珍贵。故事线(6条)“我”在去买靴子的路上,看到别人家的圣诞装饰,内心开始动摇,思考家庭的困境。“我”经过激烈的思想斗争,决定放弃买靴子,用这笔钱给家人过一个像样的圣诞节。“我”走进商店,精打细算地挑选圣诞装饰品、食物和给家人的小礼物。“我”带着购买的物品匆忙回家,开始布置屋子,摆放装饰品,准备烹饪火鸡。家人在不知情的情况下回家,看到焕然一新的家,感到无比惊讶和惊喜。一家人围坐在一起,享受着温馨的圣诞晚餐,彼此分享着喜悦,家庭氛围变得格外温暖。主旨升华句5句英文ThisChristmasexperiencetaughtmethatthejoyofgivingtofamilyfaroutweighsthepursuitofpersonaldesires.Inthatmomentofdecision,Irealizedthattruehappinessliesnotinmaterialpossessionsbutinbringingwarmthandlovetothosewecherish.Throughthisselflessact,Ilearnedthatfamilyunityandthespiritofsacrificecanturneventhetoughesttimesintounforgettablememories.TheChristmasIspent,forgoingmyboots,mademeunderstandthatthevalueoffamilybondsisimmeasurableandworthanysacrifice.ThisChristmas,Idiscoveredthatalittlethoughtfulnessandsacrificecancreateaworldofdifference,fillingourhomewiththemostpreciousgiftofall-love.两篇写作示范示范一AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Thethoughtoffinallyowningthosenewboots,whichIhaddreamedofforsolong,wassoalluring.Butthen,Ipicturedourcold,unadornedhouseandmyfamily'sforlornfaces.IrememberedthetimeswhenMumhadsacrificedsomuchforus.Theexcitementforthebootsgraduallyfaded,replacedbyastrongsenseofduty.IknewthatmyfamilyneededthisChristmastobespecialmorethanIneededanewpairofshoes.Afteralongmomentofhesitation,Imadeupmymind.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodaloneinthesnow,feelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.Iheadedstraighttothegrocerystore.Withmymoney,Iboughtasmallbutplumpturkey,somecolorfuldecorations,andafewinexpensivegifts.WhenIgothome,Iquicklygottowork.Ihungupthelights,setupthetree,andstartedcookingtheturkey.Justasthedelicioussmellfilledthehouse,Mumandmysiblingswalkedin.Theireyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenhugesmilesspreadacrosstheirfaces.Mumhuggedmetightly,andforthefirsttimeinalongwhile,ourhomewasfilledwithgenuinelaughterandthewarmthofChristmas.示范二AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantofeelconfused.Theshinynewbootsinmyimaginationclashedwiththerealityofourempty-handedChristmas.IthoughtabouthowMumstruggleddayinanddayouttotakecareofus.HowcouldIbesoselfishtothinkonlyaboutmyownwants?ThemoreIthought,themoreashamedIfelt.Thecoldwindseemedtopiercemyheart,makingmerealizethetruemeaningoftheseason.Finally,Iturnedaround,awayfromthebusstop.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andI
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