高考英语写作专题：慰问信

应用文写作慰问高考英语写作系列信目录必备表达（词汇）必备表达（句型）范文实战练习PART1必备表达（词汇）必备表达-词汇1.很抱歉听到这个消息2.重大的地震3.好好照顾4.出院5.得重感冒6.缺席besorrytohearthenewsaheavyearthquaketakegoodcareofyourselfoutofthehospitalhaveabadcoldbeabsent必备表达-词汇7.废墟8.乐意提供帮助9.充满了悲伤10.捐赠11.克服困难12.在某人的帮助下inruinsbewillingtodosthbefilledwithdeepsorrowmakeadonationof(money)gothroughthedifficultywiththehelpofsb必备表达-词汇13.在某方面做得不好14.失去兴趣15.没必要做某事16.重建自信17.赠与某人某物18.表示同情dobadlyinloseinterestinsththereisnoneedtodosthrebuildyourself-confidencepresentsbwithsthofferone’ssympathy必备表达-词汇19.发生车祸20.经济损失21.受灾地区22.重建家园23.敬老院24.做义工25.到达的时候beinvolvedinacaraccidentfinanciallossstrickenarearebuildthecitynursinghomedosomevoluntaryworkuponone’sarrivalPART2必备表达（句型）必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情知道您受到意外伤害时，简直难以形容我心中是多么难过Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyouraccident.Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsorryIwasto…必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情我在刘易斯先生那里获悉你入学考试落榜，深感惋惜。WhatshockingnewstomewhenIwastoldbyMr.Lewisthatyoucouldnotpasstheentranceexamination.Whatshockingnewstomewhen…必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情从电视上得知你最近发生了车祸，我很担心你。IwasworriedwhenIlearnedfromTVthatyouwererecentlyinvolvedinacaraccident.youwererecentlyinvolvedin…必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情我知道你现在正处于痛苦的状态和巨大的压力之下，我写信给你，向你表示极大的安慰。HavingknownthatyouareunderpainfulstateandgreatpressureHavingknownthatyouareunderpainfulstateandgreatpressurenow,I’mwritingtoexpressmygreatcomforttoyou.必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情听到这个坏消息时，我突然感到一阵悲伤/忧虑/悲伤/悲伤。Upon/Onhearingthebadnewsthat...,Ifeltseizedbyaburstofsadness/worry/sorrow/grief.Upon/Onhearingthebadnewsthat...必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情听说你和同学相处不好，我的悲伤无法用言语表达。Mysorrowisbeyondwordsforhearingyouhavetroublegettingalongwithyourclassmates.Mysorrowisbeyondwordsforhearing…必备表达-对于别人遭受的不幸表示同情听说你的左腿在车祸中受了重伤，我无法用言语表达我的忧虑。WordsfailmetoconveymyworrywhenIheardthatyourleftleggotbadlyinjuredinacaraccident.Wordsfailmetoconveymyworry…必备表达-理解别人的感受，鼓励别人克服困难并且表示提供一些帮助由于文化差异和新环境，你觉得适应新学校很有挑战性，这很正常。It’snormalthatyoufeelitchallengingtofitinwiththenewschoolduetoculturaldifferenceandnewsurroundings.It’snormalthat…必备表达-理解别人的感受，鼓励别人克服困难并且表示提供一些帮助如果你能和别人分享你的经历，从而帮助他们在短时间内熟悉你，那再好不过了。Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanshareyourexperienceswithothers,thushelpingthembecomefamiliarwithyouinashortperiodoftime.Itcan’tbebetterifyoucanshareyourexperienceswith…必备表达-理解别人的感受，鼓励别人克服困难并且表示提供一些帮助无论如何希望你能重建自己的信心。AnywayIhopeyoucanrebuildyourself-confidencesoon!rebuildyourself-confidence必备表达-表达希望和感谢如果我能帮你什么忙，我希望你能立即通知我。IfIcanbeofanyassistancetoyou,Ihopeyou’llletmeknowimmediately/instantly.IfIcanbeofanyassistancetoyou…PART3范文实战练习范文实战练习一实战练习一假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说他现在心情很不好，因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中，他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：表示安慰；2.提出建议。实战练习一听说你们队上周末的篮球赛输了，我很遗憾。losethebasketballmatchI’mverysorrytohearthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend.实战练习一你心情不好是可以理解的。beinabadmoodIt’sunderstandableforyoutobeinabadmood.实战练习一然而，如果你能采取不同的观点，失去可能是一件幸事。adoptdifferentperspectivesHowever,ifyoucanadoptdifferentperspectives,thelossmaybeablessing.实战练习一首先，在篮球比赛中输是很正常的，因为你可以赢也可以输。First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,for

youcaneitherwinorlose.youcaneitherwinorlose.实战练习一如果你已经尽力了，为什么不振作起来面对结果呢？Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritstofaceuptotheresult?liftyourspiritstofaceuptotheresult实战练习一总之，竞争的本质不在于胜利，而在于参与。Anyway,theessenceofcompetitionliesnotinvictorybutinparticipation.theessenceofcompetitionNot…but实战练习一此外，你还可以通过找出自己的长处和短处，从中获益。Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses.strengthsandweaknessesbenefitfrom实战练习一我希望你能发现我的鼓励对你有帮助。最美好的祝福。Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.encouragement范文赏析DearMike,I’mverysorrytohearthatyourteamlostthebasketballmatchlastweekend.It’sunderstandableforyoutobeinabadmood.However,ifyoucanadoptdifferentperspectives,thelossmaybeablessing.First,it’snormaltoloseinabasketballmatch,foryoucaneitherwinorlose.Ifyou’vetriedyourbest,whynotliftyourspiritstofaceuptotheresult?Anyway,theessenceofcompetitionliesnotinvictorybutinparticipation.Besides,youcanalsobenefitfromyourlossbyfiguringoutyourstrengthsandweaknesses.Ihopeyoucanfindmyencouragementhelpful.Bestwishes.范文实战练习二实战练习二假设你是李华，你的美国好朋友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学的情绪。请你给她发一封电子邮件开导她。要点如下：

1.没有必要伤心

2.要振作起来

3.和老师交流有助于你改善

4.探索适合自己的有效的学习方式实战练习二我很遗憾地知道你数学不好，对功课失去了兴趣。dowellinmathIamsosorrytoknowthatyoudidn’tdowellinmathandhaveloseinterestinschoolwork.loseinterestinschoolwork实战练习二通常情况下，数学对大多数学生来说很难，所以没有必要感到太糟糕。Asisoftenthecase,mathisdifficultformoststudents,sothereisnoneedtofeeltoobad.thereisnoneedtofeeltoobad.Asisoftenthecase实战练习二此时此刻，你应该做的是振作起来，找到减轻焦虑的方法。Atthismoment,whatyoushoulddoistocheerupandfindwaystoreduceyouranxiety.whatyoushoulddois…reduceanxiety实战练习二为什么不和你的朋友去郊游或者抽时间听你最喜欢的音乐呢？Whynotgoonanoutingwithyourfriendsorfindtimetolistentoyourfavoritemusic?goonanouting实战练习二如果你能和你最尊敬的老师谈谈，他们可能会给你一些实用的建议，帮助你。Ifyoucantalktotheteacherswhoyourespectmost,theymaygiveyousomepracticaladvicethathelpsyou.giveyousomepracticaladvice实战练习二也许现在是你探索一种更好更适合你的新的学习方法的时候了。Probablyit’stimeforyoutoexploreanewlearningmethodwhichisbetterandmoresuitableforyou.Probablyexploreanewlearningmethod实战练习二不管怎样，如果你还有什么困难，请及时告诉我们，希望你早日重建自信！Anyway,ifyouhaveanyotherdifficulties,pleasetellusintimeandIhopeyoucanrebuildyourself-confidencesoon!canrebuildyourself-confidence范文赏析DearMike，

Iamsosorrytoknowthatyoudidn’tdowellinmathandhaveloseinterestinschoolwork.Asisoftenthecase,mathisdifficultformoststudents,sothereisnoneedtofeeltoobad.Atthismoment,whatyoushoulddoistocheerupandfindwaystoreduceyouranxiety.Whynotgoonanoutingwithyourfriendsorfindtimetolistentoyourfavoritemusic?Ifyoucantalktotheteacherswhoyourespectmost,theymaygiveyousomepracticaladvicethathelpsyou.Probablyit’stimeforyoutoexploreanewlearningmethodwhichisbetterandmoresuitableforyou.Anyway,ifyouhaveanyotherdifficulties,pleasetellusintimeandIhopeyoucanrebuildyourself-confidencesoon!SincerelyYours,其他典型例题学古诗遇到困难，心情不好（1）假定你是李华，你校留学生Jacky在学习中国古诗的过程中有困难，心情很沮丧，发来邮件向你求助。请给他回一封信，内容如下：表示安慰；2.提出建议；范文赏析DearJacky,I’msorrytolearnyou’rehavingdifficultylearningancientChinesepoems.However,there’snoneedtofeelupsetaboutit.I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.Tobeginwith,readanancientChinesepoemoverandoveragain,whichcanmakeiteasyforyoutounderstandit.Besides,you’dbetterlearnsomebackgroundinformationaboutpoem,thushelpingyoudiscoverthehiddenmeaningthepoemconveys.

Moreimportantly,

it’sbeneficialtowatchaTVprogramcalledChinesePoetryConference,wherepoemloversexchangetheirexperienceoflearningancientChinesepoems.Hopefully,you’llhavefunlearningancientChinesepoems.Yours,我很抱歉得知你学古诗词有困难。你最好了解一些有关诗歌的背景信息，从而帮助你发现诗歌所传达的隐含意义。同学遇到台风（2）假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(TyphoonMujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：表示安慰和关心；2.提供帮助。范文赏析DearWangGang,We’reawfullysorrytohearthatahorribleandsevereTyphoonMujigaehityourhometownandyourhouseisinruins.I,onbehalfofourclass,expressourmostsincerepityandcareforyou.Thinkingaboutyourpresentsituation,wecan’twaittomakeeverybitofourefforttohelpyou.We’vemadeadonationofsomemoney,expectingitcanhelpyougothroughthedifficulty.Asforthelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup.Hopefully,you’llbebacksoon.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua我们非常遗憾地听到一个可怕和严重的台风穆吉加袭击了你的家乡，你的房子成了废墟。我们捐了一些钱，希望能帮助你渡过难关。美国交换生生病了（3）假定你是李华，你班来自美国的交换生Peter生病住院了。请给他发封邮件，内容包括：1.表示关心2.提供帮助3.祝愿康复。范文赏析DearPeter,Knowingthatyouhadyourlegseverelyinjuredaccidentallyinthefootballmatch,Iamwritingtoextendsincerepityandcareforyou.Howisyourleg?Youmusthavesufferedfromtheunbearablepainwhentheaccidenthappened.Butyouwerebraveenoughnottoletoutacry,whichisadmirable.Toourrelief,youhavebeendischargedfrom（dischargev.通知出院）thehospitalandarerecoveringwellathome.Asforthelessonsyouhavemissed,Iamwillingtohelpyoumakethemup.Iwishyouaspeedyrecovery.Best,LiHua我知道你的腿在足球比赛中不慎受了重伤，特写信向你致以诚挚的同情和关怀。但你很勇敢，没有哭出来，这是令人钦佩的。澳洲男友汉语水平未通过（4）假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过。请你写一封信给他，内容包括:表示安慰；2.提出建议。范文赏析DearDavid,I’msorrytohearthatyoufailedtopassHSK.Ihopethattheunexpectedfailurewon’tletyoudown,forIhavestillbeenamazedbytheexcellentChineseyouspokewhenwefirstmet.Asweknow,languagelearningisneveraneasytask,butneedspainstakingeffortsandpatience.Personally,Ithinkyou’dbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressions,whichreallycount.Meanwhile,youmayaswellwatchmoreChinesematerialsasmuchasyoucanafford.Moreimportantly,youshouldlearnfromthemistakesthatyouhavemade.Anyhow,you’vealreadymadegreatprogressinyourlearningofChinese.Goodlucknexttime.就我个人而言，我认为你最好密切注意汉语词语的正式使用，这很重要。我希望意外的失败不会让你失望，众所周知，语言学习从来不是一件容易的事，而是需要刻苦的努力和耐心。好友出车祸（5）假设你是李华，你得从电视上得知你的好朋友Frank发生了车祸，现在在医院。请你给他发一封电子邮件表示慰问。

1.很担心对方，欣慰的是对方没有受伤。

2.由于出差，没时间看望。

3.提醒:现在路上的车越来越多了，开车的时候要尽可能小心。范文赏析DearFrank，

IwasworriedwhenIlearnedfromTVthatyouwererecentlyinvolvedinacaraccident.Itisareliefthatyouwerenothurt.Youmustbefrightened,areyoufeelingbetternow?IamsosorrythatIcan’tgotoseeyoubecauseIamonabusinesstrip.IpromiseIwillcometoseeyouassoonasIamback.Bytheway,withmoreandmorecarsontheroads,youshoulddrivethecarascarefullyaspossibleanddon'tdrinkbeforedriving,forthelifeisonlyonce.Safeisbetterthansorry.Bestwishestoyou!SincerelyYours,Lihua路上的车越来越多，你应该尽量小心开车，开车前不要喝酒，因为生命只有一次。朋友重感冒住院（6）假设你是李华，你的好朋友John得了重感冒请假住院了。请你写一封电子邮件给他。

1.从他妈妈得到了消息说感冒了表示同情

2.提出一些帮助和建议。范文赏析DearMike，

Iamsoshockingtohearthatyouhavebadcoldandnowareinhospital.Igetthisnewsfromyourmotherandknowyoumustbeabsentforhalfamonthattheclasses.Don’tworryaboutyourlessonsandIamwillingtohelpyoufromthenwhenyoureturn.WearebestfriendssoIwillneverallowyoutofallbeh