2025届新高考英语冲刺复习读后续写+双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈做早餐

2025届新高考英语冲刺复习读后续写双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈做早餐01原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯语言表达风格一致。02曲折性原则凡是故事都应有一定的跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。03正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。三大原则RevisionMainideaofthetext

ElementsContentswhowhenwherewhatwhythetwins,JeffandJanna,Dad,MomonMother’sDayathome,inthekitchenThetwinswerepreparingthebreakfastbuttheymesseditupandJeffburnedthefinger.Theywantedtosurprisetheirmom.Underlineusefulinformation.Step1:Analysisofthetext

Para1、2Step2:续写分析

描述首句引发的反应或动作(movement)增加心理感受描写(emotion)增加场景描写(scene)延续首句主语，复现首句关键词。延迟符Rivision1234衔接首句的方法

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whatwasfather’sreaction?Didthetwinsmakethebreakfastsuccessfully?Whatdidfathersaytothetwins?Didfathermakethebreakfastwiththetwinstogether?Whatwasmother’sreaction?Whatwouldmothersayanddo?Step3:续写情节展开Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.1.(爸爸的反应)看到厨房里乱糟糟的，父亲惊呆了。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.但在双胞胎解释了他们的计划后，他笑着安慰他们：“别担心。我会帮你的。”Butafterthetwinsexplainedwhattheyplanned,he___________________________,“Don’tworry.I’llhelpyou.”3.(父子/女合作)他把一锅粥放在炉子上,调到小火,让Jeff看火15分钟。Heputthepotofporridgeoverthestove,_______________________________,andaskedJeffto_______________for15minutes.Seeingthemessinthekitchen,thefatherwasshockwithhismouthwideopen.Atthesightofthemessinthekitchen,thefatherwasnumbwithshock.smiledandcomfortedthemadjustedthefiretothegentleheatwatchoutforit4.然后他让Jenna再打两个鸡蛋，把它们和牛奶一起搅拌。Andthenhe______Jennatobreakanothertwoeggsand____________________________.5.一切准备就绪后，他们开始一起煎面包。________________________,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.6.（成果）不一会儿，厨房里充满了香味。______________________________________________________.askedmixthemwithmilkAftermakingallpreparationsWithallpreparationsmade/doneInaflash,(a)sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Afterawhile,thekitchenwasfilledwith(a)sweetsmell.Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.7.（妈妈醒来）妈妈一睁开眼睛，就听到双胞胎孩子们和谐的“母亲节快乐”，摆在面前是一顿热腾腾、甜甜的早餐。___________Motherotheropenedhereyes,shehearda____________“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkids______________________________________.8.孩子们的父亲站在他们的身后，告诉了她整个故事。（倒装句）______________________________________,whotoldherthewholestory.ThemonentharmoniouswithahotsweetbreakfastbeforeherBehindthechildrenstoodtheirfatherPara2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.9.（妈妈的反应）在得知发生的事情后，她迅速站起来检查男孩的手。Afterlearningabout______________,she____________tochecktheboy’shand.10.（妈妈的感想）确保儿子的手没大碍后，母亲紧紧地拥抱着他们，泪水顺着脸颊滚落下来。“谢谢你，”妈妈说，“这是我收到过的最好的礼物。”After___________thathisson’shandwasokay,Mother___________________.“Thankyou,”saidthemother,________________________________.whathappenedrosequicklymakingsurehuggedthemtightlywithtearsrollingdownhercheeks

Sample1：基础版

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasavior(救星)tothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingtheporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasallrightthistime.Withtheirefforts,deliciousbreakfastwasfinallyready.Howhappytheywere!

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawtheperfectly-madeandlovingbreakfastinfrontofher,shewassosurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,butalsotheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn'texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother'sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.Step4:范文赏析

Sample2Sample3：

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Atthesightofthemessinthekitchen,thefatherwasnumbwithshock.Butafterthetwinsexplainedwhattheyplanned,hesmiledandcomfortedthem,“Don’tworry.I’llhelpyou.”

Whatarelieftohearthat!Theytookactionimmediately.Thetwinscleanedupthespilled(溢出的)porridgeonthestovewhiletheirfatherwasfryingthebread.Soonthebreakfastwasready.Thetwinshuggedtheirfatherexcitedlyforhistimelyhelp.Sample3：

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay!”Theysaidtogetherloudly.Themotherjustcouldn’tbelievewhatshesawwhenthebreakfastwasservedalongwithacard.Deeplymoved,sheheldthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.“Mum,haveatasteofit,”thetwinsasked.Themotherbitintothetoastandsaid,“ItisdefinitelythemostdeliciousbreakfastIhaveeverhad.Iamalsoproudtobeyourmother.”Sample4：

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.ThemomenthesawJeff’shandwasburned,hewentandfetchedthefirst-aidkitandtreateditinstantly.“Whydidyoucookbyyourselves?Don'tyouknowit'sdangerous?”shoutedthefatherwithanger.“TodayisMother'sDay.WewanttopreparebreakfastandgiveMotherabigsurprise.”Hearingthis,thefathersmiledandwhispered,“HowIamproudofyou!Let'sdoittogether!”Itwasnotlongbeforeaper