Unit2IconicAttractions读后续写作业设计-高中英语人教版选择性

人教版选必四Unit2IconicAttractions读后续写作业设计I课文素材库微技能语料出处过去分词/现在分词做状语Locatedtothesouthoftheequator,belowmanyothercountriesontheglobe,it’softeninformallyreferredtoas“downunder”.Consistingof77provincesthatstretchallthewaydowntoMalaysiainthesouth,thecountryhasalottoofferandisagreatgetaway.Describedas“thehomeofgolf”,Scotlandisaperfectdestinationforarelaxingholiday.Page14Para1Line3Page16Activity3Line1Page17Activity2Line1场景描写Tosurviveinthisvastlandontheocean,theAborigineshadtobeinclosecontactwithnature.AmajorattractionofThailandisitsamazingselectionofislands,eachwithlongsandybeachesandclearbluewater.Page14Para5Line1Page16Activity3Line3动作描写Toplaythedidgeridoo,youputyourmouthononeendandblowwhilevibratingyourlips.Also,itcannotwalkbackwards,soitisalwaysmovingforward.So,ifyouseeoneinthewild,youshouldn’tapproachittopickituporeventouchit.Itseggshatchafterabouttendays,andthenthebabyplatypusnursesfromitsmotherlikeallothermammals.1.Page15Para6Line22.Page19Activity1Line33.Page20Question2Line84.Page21Question4Line2心理描写Theyhaveastraightforwardandfreeandeasyattitudetowardslife,andtheirfriendlinessandwarmthmademefeelathomewhereverIwent.Page15Para8Line1外貌描写Theyareaboutthesizeofsmalldogsandlooklikeratherlargeblackrats.Itsnoselookslikeaduck’sbill,andithasfeetlikeaduck’ssoitcandriveunderthewater,butit’scoveredinhair.Page20Question3Line6Page21Question4Line4修辞手法Thenoisetheymakecouldwakethedead.(Exaggeration夸张)IfyouvisitDujiangyan,youwillseeanunusualconstructionthatresemblesafish’smouth.(Simile明喻)Page20Question3Line5Page23Activity4Line10II语言训练场汉译英中国因悠久的历史而闻名，吸引了许多世界各地的游客。(know)_____________________________________________________________2.夜幕降临，幽兰的天空中点缀着无数的小星星。(dot)_____________________________________________________________乘车旅行，我们欣赏了很多优美的地方。(Travel)_____________________________________________________________4.她用枕头捂住她的头，捶打着床，发出了委屈的哭声。(bury)_____________________________________________________________她沉浸在喜悦之中。(immerse)_____________________________________________________________她的头发在春风中像波浪般飘动。(ripple)___________________________________________________________他们抱怨着住宿环境，就像嗡嗡的苍蝇。(明喻Simile)___________________________________________________________8.我遇见了形形色色的人。(提喻:face)___________________________________________________________III美文体验馆ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ltoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意：1续写词数应为150个左右；2请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________________________________________________________________主题语境人与社会文章出处2024全国新课标I卷词数正文英文词数331，续写第一段首句11个单词，续写第二段首句14个单词。What故事脉络(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.1)Buildup(Para.23)Climax(Para.45)Resolution(续写第一段)IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.……Ending(续写第二段)Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.……Why故事主题互帮互助，乐于助人，诚实守信，和谐美好How写作手法第一人称、描写、叙述人物分析Gunter“我”Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Irancrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.场景机场→公交车站语言风格□平实质朴□含蓄隽永☑幽默风趣Para3:Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.为什么要描写Gunter的表情和语言？Para4:Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”一系列的动作描写有什么目的？谋篇布局续写第一段Q1:WhatmaybeGunter’sattitudetowardsmytrouble?Q2:HowwouldIfeelaboutGunter’sreaction?问题回答功能Q1Q2谋篇布局续写第二段Q3:WhatwouldIdowhenIcamebacktoVienna?Q4:WhatwouldhappenafterIgavebackthefaretoGunter?问题回答功能Q3Q4【素材积累】Para.1:1.touchdown降落，着陆2.Themoment...一...就...3.withasecondthought毫不犹豫Para.2:1.fishout拿出，取出Para.4:1.Afeelingofhelplessnesswashedoverme.(心理描写:无助)2.thinout变少Para.5:1.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”(动作描写&onlytodo作结果状语)IV技能锻造营Synecdoche(提喻)1.定义提喻是以部分代替整体或以整体代替部分；以类属代替其中一种或以一种代替其所在的类属；以原料代替用该原料制成的东西。该辞格中的两事物只是相关，并没有相似之处。2.用法（1)部分和全体互代Hedesertedtosave hisskin. 他当了逃兵以苟全性命。（2）用抽象代替具体或具体代替抽象Ihavehis ear,ofcourse. 当然，他听我的话。这里用ear来暗示他听我的话，具体代抽象，既形象，又生动。Hehasasmoothtongue. 他有流利的口才。以具体的舌头代替抽象的口才，其义若汉语的“巧舌如簧”。（3）单数代替复数Thereisa mixtureofthetigerandtheapeinthecharacterofaFrenchman.这里的tiger和ape是单数代复数，指代虎类动物和猿猴类动物，这句话中的tiger和ape指的是法国人残暴和狡猾的性格特征。（4）用某个人代替与其相似的一类人But therearefewincipientLambsandBeerbohmsincollegepositioncourse. 句中作者以Lamb和Beerbohm代表象他们那样文思敏捷、才华横溢的青年。HeistheNewtonofthis century. 他是本世纪的牛顿。（5）种类互代用种代表类：用vessel 代表ship，用weapon代表sword，用creature代表man，用arms代表rifles，用vehicle代表bicycle。用类代表种：用bread代表food，用cutthroat代表assassin。（6）用构成某东西的材料代表那样东西用silver代表money，用canvas代表sail，用steel代表sword。答案解析I课文素材库微技能语料出处过去分词/现在分词做状语Locatedtothesouthoftheequator,belowmanyothercountriesontheglobe,it’softeninformallyreferredtoas“downunder”.Consistingof77provincesthatstretchallthewaydowntoMalaysiainthesouth,thecountryhasalottoofferandisagreatgetaway.Describedas“thehomeofgolf”,Scotlandisaperfectdestinationforarelaxingholiday.Page14Para1Line3Page16Activity3Line1Page17Activity2Line1场景描写Tosurviveinthisvastlandontheocean,theAborigineshadtobeinclosecontactwithnature.AmajorattractionofThailandisitsamazingselectionofislands,eachwithlongsandybeachesandclearbluewater.Page14Para5Line1Page16Activity3Line3动作描写Toplaythedidgeridoo,youputyourmouthononeendandblowwhilevibratingyourlips.Also,itcannotwalkbackwards,soitisalwaysmovingforward.So,ifyouseeoneinthewild,youshouldn’tapproachittopickituporeventouchit.Itseggshatchafterabouttendays,andthenthebabyplatypusnursesfromitsmotherlikeallothermammals.1.Page15Para6Line22.Page19Activity1Line33.Page20Question2Line84.Page21Question4Line2心理描写Theyhaveastraightforwardandfreeandeasyattitudetowardslife,andtheirfriendlinessandwarmthmademefeelathomewhereverIwent.Page15Para8Line1外貌描写Theyareaboutthesizeofsmalldogsandlooklikeratherlargeblackrats.Itsnoselookslikeaduck’sbill,andithasfeetlikeaduck’ssoitcandriveunderthewater,butit’scoveredinhair.Page20Question3Line6Page21Question4Line4修辞手法Thenoisetheymakecouldwakethedead.(Exaggeration夸张)IfyouvisitDujiangyan,youwillseeanunusualconstructionthatresemblesafish’smouth.(Simile明喻)Page20Question3Line5Page23Activity4Line10II语言训练场汉译英1.中国因悠久的历史而闻名，吸引了许多世界各地的游客。(know)Knownforitslonghistory,Chinahasattractsthetouristsallaroundtheworld.2.夜幕降临，幽兰的天空中点缀着无数的小星星。(dot)Whennightsfall,theblueskyisdottedwithcountlesssmallstars.3.乘车旅行，我们欣赏了很多优美的地方。(Travel)Travellingbycar,weenjoyedmanybeautifulplaces.4.她用枕头捂住她的头，捶打着床，发出了委屈的哭声。(bury)Sheburiedherheadinthepillow,beatthebedandletourabittercry.5.她沉浸在喜悦之中。(immerse)Shewasimmersedinthedelight.6.她的头发在春风中像波浪般飘动。(ripple)Herhairripplesinthespringbreeze.7.他们抱怨着住宿环境，就像嗡嗡的苍蝇。(明喻Simile)Theykeptplainingabouttheacmodationlikebuzzingflies.8.我遇见了形形色色的人。(提喻:face)Differentkindsoffacesslippedinfrontofme.III美文体验馆ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ltoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意：1续写词数应为150个左右；2请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________________________________________________________________主题语境人与社会文章出处2024全国新课标I卷词数正文英文词数331，续写第一段首句11个单词，续写第二段首句14个单词。What故事脉络(Useonesentencetosummarizethemainideaofeachparagraph)Opening(Para.1)IjumpedintoataxiinahurryandmetthedriverGunter.Buildup(Para.23)WiththehelpofGunter’sfriend,Isuccessfullyarrivedatthebusstation.Climax(Para.45)Icouldn’tpaythetaxifareasthebusqueuewasthinningout.Resolution(续写第一段)IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.……Ending(续写第二段)Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.……Why故事主题互帮互助，乐于助人，诚实守信，和谐美好How写作手法第一人称、描写、叙述人物分析Gunter“我”Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Gunter不急躁，有耐心ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Irancrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.“我”有时间意识，守时守信Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.Gunter友好和善Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.“我”不想拖欠他人场景机场→公交车站语言风格□平实质朴□含蓄隽永☑幽默风趣Para3:Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.为什么要描写Gunter的表情和语言？为后文Gunter没收钱让“我”离开做铺垫。Para4:Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”一系列的动作描写有什么目的？这里体现了“我”付钱心切的情绪，并且为后文我回来付钱做铺垫。谋篇布局续写第一段Q1:WhatmaybeGunter’sattitudetowardsmytrouble?Q2:HowwouldIfeelaboutGunter’sreaction?问题素材功能Q1Suddenly,hiswarmhandreachedouttomine.“Justgo,”hesaidandflashedmeafortingsmile.动作描写表现Gunter的友好善良Q2Warmthfillingmyheartlikeneverbefore,Ifishedoutmyphoneandsaid,“Pleasegivemeyourphonenumber.I’llpayyouwhenIeback.”独立主格使文章句式更丰富，心理描写体现美好社会谋篇布局续写第二段Q3:WhatwouldIdowhenIcamebacktoVienna?Q4:WhatwouldhappenafterIgavebackthefaretoGunter?问题素材功能Q3Uponarrival,Ihuggedhimasifhewereanoldfriend.Ipaidhimthetaxifares,alongwithageneroustipwhichherefusedtoaccept.虚拟语气的使用突出我对Gunter的感谢Q4Fromthatdayon,webecamegoodfriendsandIwouldtreathimtoamealwheneverIcametoVienna.动作描写的使用突出人与人之间的友爱【素材积累】Para.1:1.touchdown降落，着陆2.Themoment...一...就...3.withasecondthought毫不犹豫Para.2:1.fishout拿出，取出Para.4:1.Afeelingofhelplessnesswashedoverme.(心理描写:无助)2.thinout变少Para.5:1.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”(动作描写&onlytodo作结果状语)【参考范文】IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Hejuststaredatme,bringingawarmflushtomyface.Butthethinningqueueseemedtourgeme,leavingnotimetoexplainfurther.Suddenly,hiswarmhandreachedouttomine.“Justgo,”hesaidandflashedmeaforti