读后续写练习+我与忠犬Billy的温暖过往与思念 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习我与忠犬Billy的温暖过往与思念1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Lately,Iwasdeeplytouchedwithtwomoviesaboutfaithfuldogs：ADog'sPurposeandADog'sWayHome.Adog'slifecycledandcycledonlytomeethisfirstownerwhiletheothercovered400milesoftoilandhungerallthewaybacktoherhome.IhadafaithfuldogtoowhenIwasalittlegirl,butitwasadifferentstory.4续写原文Whenmydadfirsttookhimhomeinacardboardbox,hewassoquietthatIevendoubtedwhethertherewasreallyadoginit.WhenIpeepedthroughtwosmallholesontheside,Ijustsawapatchofgreyfur.MydadassuredmethatitwasjustasmalldogbeforeIdaredtoopenthebox.Therehewas!Whatalovelygreydog!Hewasslimandlookedsmart.IwasonmykneesasIcheerfullyobservedhim.However,hetriedtoavoideyecontactwithme,apparentlyalittlescaredwitheverythingstrangearound.Iwantedtopethisheadbutheonlyturnedhisheadaway.5续写原文Whenhebecamefamiliarwithme,IcalledhimBillyandhewasreallydelighted,zagginghistail.EverytimeIleftforschool,hesawmeoff.WhenIcameback,hewayswaitedonmywayhomeandgreetedmewithhislicksandbrushedhisheadagainstlegs.WhenBillywasinthekitchenwithmyfather,lyingonasmallheapoffirewoodsidethefurnace(灶),hecouldalwaysknowwhichpieceoffirewoodmydadwouldpickandraisedhispawintime.ItalwayssurprisedmehowintelligentandconsiderateBillyIimaginedhimturningintoasmallboycarryingmyschoolbagformeandtalkingmydad.WithBillybrighteningeverydayofmychildhood,Iwasmorethanhappy.6段首句Paragraph1：Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Paragraph2：Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9我”受两部关于忠犬的电影触动，回忆起自己小时候的忠犬Billy。爸爸将Billy带回家时，它十分胆小。但随着时间推移，Billy与“我”熟悉起来，它聪明又贴心，每天接送“我”上学，还能预知爸爸的举动。然而，有一天Billy突然重病，这让“我”无比揪心，也为后续“我”对它的怀念和寻找新的情感寄托埋下伏笔。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.但有一天，Billy病得很重。它不再像往常那样活蹦乱跳，而是虚弱地趴在地上，眼神中满是痛苦。我心急如焚，赶忙叫来爸爸。我们带着Billy四处找兽医，一路上我紧紧抱着它，眼泪止不住地流。兽医给Billy做了检查，开了药，可Billy的病情并没有好转。我日夜守在它身边，给它喂药、陪它说话，希望它能快点好起来。然而，Billy还是没能战胜病魔，它永远地离开了我，那一刻，我感觉自己的心都碎了。11续写思路分析Para2：Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.几年后，我来到一家狗狗收容所碰碰运气。一走进收容所，各种各样的狗狗朝我涌来，它们的眼神里充满了渴望和期待。我在这些狗狗中仔细寻找着，希望能找到一只像Billy一样能触动我心灵的狗狗。突然，一只灰色的小狗吸引了我的注意，它的眼神和Billy有几分相似。我蹲下身子，轻轻抚摸它的头，它没有躲开，反而亲昵地蹭着我的手。我知道，就是它了。我决定带它回家，开启我们新的故事。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Helosthislivelyenergyandlayweaklyontheground,hiseyesfilledwithpain.Iwasextremelyworriedandquicklycalledmydad.WetookBillyaroundtofindavet.Alltheway,Iheldhimtightlyinmyarms,withtearsstreamingdownmyface.ThevetexaminedBillyandprescribedsomemedicine,buthisconditiondidn'timprove.Istayedbyhissidedayandnight,feedinghimmedicineandtalkingtohim,hopinghewouldgetbettersoon.However,Billycouldn'tovercometheillnessandleftmeforever.Atthatmoment,Ifeltasifmyhearthadbeenshatteredintopieces.14范文呈现Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.AssoonasIenteredtheshelter,variousdogsrushedtowardsme,theireyesfullofeagernessandexpectation.Isearchedcarefullyamongthesedogs,hopingtofindonethatcouldtouchmyheartlikeBillydid.Suddenly,agreypuppycaughtmyattention.ItseyesresembledBilly'sinsomeway.Isquatteddownandgentlystrokeditshead.Itdidn'tavoidmebutrubbedagainstmyhandaffectionately.Iknewitwastheone.Idecidedtotakeithomeandstartanewstorywithit.15升级版范文呈现Butoneday,Billywasseriouslyill.Gonewashisusualexuberance;instead,helayprostrate,hisbodywrackedwithweakness,andhiseyes,oncesofulloflife,nowcloudedwithpain.Panic-stricken,Iimmediatelysummonedmyfather,andtogether,weembarkedonafranticsearchforaveterinarian.Duringthejourney,IheldBillyclosetomychest,myarmstrembling,andmytearsflowingunabated,asifmyverysoulwasweepingforhissuffering.Theveterinarian,afterathoroughexamination,prescribedmedication,butalas,itseemedtohavelittleeffect.Iremainedbyhissidearoundtheclock,administeringmedicinewithatremblinghandandwhisperingwordsofcomfort,inavainattempttowillhimbacktohealth.Intheend,despitemydesperateefforts,Billysuccumbedtohisillness,leavingagapingvoidinmyheart,asifapartofmehadbeenrippedawayforever.16升级版范文呈现Afewyearslater,Iwenttoadog'ssheltertotrymyluck.ThemomentIsteppedthroughtheshelter'sdoors,achorusofbarksandexcitedyelpsgreetedme.Dozensofdogs,theirtailswaggingwithanticipation,rushedtowardsme,theireyesshiningwithhope.Ibeganameticuloussearch,myeyesscanningeachandeveryface,yearningtofindaconnection,asparkthatwouldremindmeofBilly.Then,inacorner,asmallgreypuppycaughtmyeye.Asoureyesmet,ajoltofrecognitionsurgedthroughme;therewasanunmistakableresemblancetoBillyinthosesoulfuleyes.Icroucheddownslowly,myhandoutstretched,andasIgentlystrokeditshead,itnuzzledagainstme,asifittoohadrecognizedakindredspirit.Withouthesitation,Ik