高考英语复习读后续写练习+冰上挫折：从失败迈向希望

高考英语读后续写语篇练习冰上挫折：从失败迈向希望1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thatday,Iwasgoingtoskateacleanfreestyleprogramforthefirsttimeinayear.Ideterminedtolandtheaxel(前外一周半跳)incompetition.“Icanmakeit!”IthoughtasIskatedtothecenterice.Whenmymusicsounded,Istartedmyprogramwithacircularstepandabrightsmile,followedbyabeautifulcombinationspin.Flyingcamel,sitspin,laybackspin.Perfection.Thejump!Theaxel!IcoulddoitwhenIpracticedoff-ice,butI’donlylandediton-iceapproximatelyfourteentimesinmyentirelife.SoIwasalittlenervous.I’dleaveitoutifIcould,butmyOlympicdreamsdependedonit.Mycoach,Geena,putitearlyinmyprogramsoIcoulddoitwhilemylegswerenottired.Takingadeepbreath,“Icansucceed!”Ithought.4续写原文Iwasontherightbackoutsideedgeofmyskateblade(冰刀),readytoturnforwardandlaunchintotheaxel.Mynerveswereback,workingagainstme.“Icandothis!”Ithought.IsteppedintotakeoffandIdid…awaltzjump(半周跳).ItisajumpI’dbeendoingsinceIwasprettyyoung.Itisonlyone-halfarotation(旋转)insteadoftheoneandone-halfthatIneedfortheaxel.IglimpsedCoachGeena’squestioningeyebrowasIglidedpastthedoorandimaginedthedisappointedlooksonmyparents’faces.“It’snotover,”Ireasonedtomyself,glancingintothebleachers(露天座位).“I’djustreplacethenextjumpwiththeaxel.”5续写原文However,itdidn’tworkoutthewayI’dhoped.Ifell,andIkeptfalling.Neveronetogiveup,Ireplacedeveryjumpinmyprogramwiththeaxel,butIdidn’tlandone.Ispentsomuchtimeontheicethatit’slikeIwasmakingsuretheicewascleanforthenextskater.Thetwominutes,fifteensecondsofmyprogramfeltlikeanage.BythetimeIwasdone,mydresswassoakedthroughandIwassevensecondsbehindmymusic,soIfinishedskatingtosilence.6段首句Paragraph1：AsIskatedtowardtheexit,Ifelteveryonewaslookingatmewithpity.Paragraph2：Theperformancegoingon,Iroseupfromthebleachers,determinedtogohomebutmyparentsheldmeup.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了主人公决心在比赛中成功完成前外一周半跳，以实现奥运梦想。比赛时，她开场表现出色，但因紧张，原本计划的前外一周半跳只完成了半周跳。此后，她试图用前外一周半跳替换剩余跳跃，却连连摔倒，比赛表现糟糕。表演结束后，她在众人怜悯的目光中走向出口，满心沮丧。在露天座位上，她想直接回家，却被父母拦住。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：AsIskatedtowardtheexit,Ifelteveryonewaslookingatmewithpity.当我朝着出口滑去时，感觉所有人都在怜悯地看着我。我羞愧得恨不得找个地缝钻进去，每滑一步都如履薄冰。脑海中不断浮现出教练失望的表情，还有父母那饱含期待却又被我辜负的眼神。我想起无数个日夜的艰苦训练，那些洒在冰面上的汗水，如今都化作了苦涩的泪水在眼眶里打转。我脚步沉重，心里想着，这次失败是不是意味着我的滑冰之路就此终结？难道我再也无法实现站在奥运赛场上的梦想了吗？自责和懊悔如潮水般将我淹没，我甚至不敢抬头看周围人的目光。11续写思路分析Para2：Theperformancegoingon,Iroseupfromthebleachers,determinedtogohomebutmyparentsheldmeup.赛场上的表演还在继续，我失落地从露天座位上站起身，一心只想赶快逃离这个令我难堪的地方。就在这时，父母急忙拉住了我。爸爸用坚定有力的声音说：“孩子，一次失败算不了什么，你付出的努力我们都看在眼里，这只是暂时的挫折。”妈妈则温柔地抚摸着我的头，轻声安慰道：“别灰心，我们相信你有重新站起来的勇气。”他们的话语如同一束温暖的光，驱散了我心中的阴霾。我看着他们充满鼓励的眼神，暗暗下定决心，一定要重新振作，不辜负他们的期望。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现AsIskatedtowardtheexit,Ifelteveryonewaslookingatmewithpity.Mycheeksburnedwithshame,andIcouldbarelyholdbackmytears.Everyglideseemedtobeapainfulreminderofmyfailure.Thoughtsofmycoach'sdisappointedfaceandmyparents'unfulfilledexpectationshauntedme.Irecalledthecountlesshoursoftraining,thesacrificesImade,andnowitallseemedtobeinvain.Iwasfilledwithself-doubt,questioningwhetherthisfailuremarkedtheendofmyskatingcareer.IwonderedifIwouldeverbeabletoachievemyOlympicdreams.Withheavysteps,Imademywayofftheice,avoidingeyecontactwiththeaudience.14范文呈现Theperformancegoingon,Iroseupfromthebleachers,determinedtogohomebutmyparentsheldmeup.Myfatherlookedatmefirmlyandsaid,"Son,onefailuredoesn'tdefineyou.We'veseenallthehardworkyou'veputin,andthisisjustatemporarysetback."Mymother,withagentletouchonmyshoulder,added,"Don'tloseheart.Wehavefullfaithinyourabilitytobounceback."Theirwordswerelikearayofhopeinthedarkness.Lookingintotheirencouragingeyes,Ifeltanewfounddeterminationwellingupinsideme.Irealizedthatgivingupwasnotanoption.IdecidedrightthenandtherethatIwouldtrainevenharderandprovemyselfinthefuture.15升级版范文呈现AsIskatedtowardtheexit,Ifeltasifeveryone'seyeswereboringintomewithpity.Myfaceflamedwithhumiliation,andtearsthreatenedtospillover,blurringmyvision.Eachstrokeontheicewasaharshreminderofmydisastrousperformance.Memoriesofmycoach'screstfallenexpressionandmyparents'dashedhopescamefloodingback,torturingmymind.Icouldn'thelpbutthinkoftheinnumerablehoursofarduoustraining,thesacrificesofmyfreetime,allseeminglyfornaught.Doubtsassailedme,makingmequestionwhetherthisfailurewasthedeath-knellformyskatingaspirations.IwasleftwonderingifmyOlympicdreamswerenownothingbutadistantfantasy.Withleadenfeet,Iglidedofftheice,desperatelyavertingmygazefromtheonlookers.16升级版范文呈现Theperformanceongoing,Irosefromthebleachers,resolutetoleavethisplaceofhumiliation,butmyparentsstoppedmeinmytracks.Myfatherfixedhiseyesonmewithunwaveringdeterminationanddeclared,"Son,asinglefailuredoesnotdetermineyourworth.We'vewitnessedeverydropofsweatyou'veshed,andthisismerelyafleetingsetback."