高考英语复习读后续写练习：家族教师传承下的医学逐梦之旅：我的抉择+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习家族教师传承下的医学逐梦之旅：我的抉择1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Mygreat-grandmother,mygrandmother,andmymotherareteachers,andsoareallmyfamily.MymotherhadafixedideathatIwouldbecomeateacher,too.AlthoughIrespectedherandwasindeedskilledatteachingsomethingtomylittlecousins,Ididn’tagreethatIshouldnaturallyfollowinmymother’sfootsteps.4续写原文WhenIwasateenager,mymotherhappenedtotakemetoahospitalwhichwasrunbyoneofherfriends.ItwasthefirsttimeIhadseenabusymedicalenvironmentinreallifeinperson.FindingthatIwascuriousabouttreatingpatients,mymother’sfriendDr.Leeofferedmeanopportunitytoshadowhim(跟他实地参观)foraday.Ieagerlyacceptedhisoffer!Observingthedoctorsandnursesinaction,Ifeltamixofanxietyandexcitement.Seeingthehealing(治愈)processandtheimpactofmedicalcareonpatientswasaprofoundlymovingexperience.Ifiguredbeingadoctorwouldbethemostrewardingcareerintheworld.Fromthatday,athoughtformedinmymindthatIwantedtobecomeadoctor,butIdoubtedwhethermymotherwouldsupportme.Afterall,itwasacompletelydifferentpathfromwhatshehadplannedforme.Therefore,Ikeptthethoughttomyself,becauseIknewshewouldstillinsistonholdingontoherpreviousidea.5续写原文Anyway,besidesdiscussingwithmymotheraboutteaching,IwouldoftenvisitDr.Lee’shospital.Gradually,Igotfamiliarwiththemedicalequipmentandprocedures,andIlearnedalotabouthealthcare,suchashowtotakevitalsigns(测生命体征),howtoassistinminorsurgeries,andsoon.ButwhatIhadlearnedinthehospitaljustleftmewantingmore,soIdecidedtogotocollegetobecomeaprofessionaldoctor.6段首句Paragraph1：ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.Paragraph2：Atthegraduationceremony,withmymotherpresent,I,as“ExcellentGraduate”,hadtodeliveraspeech.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9家族中女性长辈皆为教师，母亲也希望“我”从事教师职业，但“我”在参观医院后对医学产生浓厚兴趣，在李医生的帮助下学习了不少医疗知识。尽管深知母亲的期望，“我”仍决定追求医学梦想。瞒着母亲积累经验后，“我”决定向母亲坦白，而后在毕业典礼上感恩母亲的支持。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.这次我不再隐藏自己的渴望。我精心挑选了一个周末的午后，当阳光透过窗户洒在客厅的地板上，我拉着母亲坐在沙发上，鼓起勇气向她倾诉。我详细地描述了在医院里看到的每一个触动我的瞬间，比如患者康复后与家人相拥的喜悦，医生凭借精湛医术拯救生命的场景。我强调这是我内心真正的向往，虽然明白这与家族传统相悖，但希望她能理解我的执着。母亲起初面露惊讶，但很快陷入沉思，我紧张地等待着她的回应，时间仿佛凝固了一般。11续写思路分析Para2：Atthegraduationceremony,withmymotherpresent,I,as“ExcellentGraduate”,hadtodeliveraspeech.在毕业典礼上，母亲坐在前排，目光始终追随着我。我身着学位服，站在舞台中央，心中感慨万千。我先是表达了对母亲的感激，感谢她在了解我的想法后给予的支持，让我能毫无后顾之忧地追逐梦想。接着，我分享了求学过程中的艰辛与收获，讲述那些在实验室里日夜钻研、在病房中积累经验的日子。我向台下的学弟学妹们传递着坚持梦想的力量，也看到母亲眼中闪烁的泪花，那是对我成长的欣慰与骄傲。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.IchoseasunnySundayafternoondeliberately.Whenthewarmsunlightshoneonthelivingroomfloorthroughthewindow,Iaskedmymothertositonthesofawithme.Isummonedupmycourageandtoldhereverything.IdescribedindetaileverytouchingmomentIsawinthehospital,suchasthejoyofpatientsembracingtheirfamiliesafterrecoveryandthescenesofdoctorssavingliveswiththeirexcellentmedicalskills.Iemphasizedthatthiswasmytrueaspirationinmyheart.AlthoughIknewitwascontrarytothefamilytradition,Ihopedshecouldunderstandmypersistence.Mymotherlookedsurprisedatfirst,butsoonfellintodeepthought.Iwaitednervouslyforherresponse,andtimeseemedtostandstill.14范文呈现Atthegraduationceremony,mymothersatinthefrontrow,hereyesfollowingmeallthetime.Istoodinthemiddleofthestageinmygraduationgown,feelingathousandemotionsinmyheart.Ifirstexpressedmygratitudetomymother.Thankstohersupportafterunderstandingmythoughts,Iwasabletopursuemydreamwithoutanyworries.Then,Isharedthehardshipsandgainsduringmystudy.ItoldaboutthedayswhenIstudiedharddayandnightinthelaboratoryandaccumulatedexperienceintheward.Iconveyedthepowerofstickingtothedreamtothejuniorsandsistersunderthestage,andalsosawthetearsinmymother'seyes,whichweretheprideandreliefofmygrowth.15升级版范文呈现ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.SelectingasunnySundaydeliberately,asthewarmsunraysfilteredthroughthewindowontothelivingroomfloor,Iinvitedmothertothesofa.Withbatedbreath,Ipouredoutmyheart.Ivividlyrecountedthehospital'stouchingscenes:patients'jubilantreunionswithfamiliespost-recoveryanddoctors'life-savingfeats.Despitedefyingfamilytradition,Ipleadedforherunderstandingofmypassion.Initiallystartled,mothersoonsankintocontemplation.TimefrozeasIawaitedherreply.16升级版范文呈现Atthegraduationceremony,mothersatfront-row,hergazelockedonme.Standingonstageinmygown,amaelstromofemotionsswirledwithin.Ibeganbythankingher.Hersupport,onceshegraspedmydream,hadbeenmyanchor.Then,Isharedmyacademicodyssey:thearduous