高考英语复习读后续写练习：社区暖心行动：帮残疾老人寻丢失爱犬

高考英语读后续写语篇练习社区暖心行动：帮残疾老人寻丢失爱犬1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文InthecommunityofBelfast,Mainelivedanoldlady,MarinaDelune,67,whohadacutedognamedRuth.Thebright-eyedWestHighlandWhiteTerrier(梗犬)jumpedoutofherowner’scaronTuesdayandranofffromherBelfasthome.Asapersonwithmultipledisabilities,Marinacouldn’tdomuchsearchingherself.SoshepostedapieceofinformationonaBelfastFacebookpagethatsheneededhelplookingforherlostdog.Sheexpectedonlyafewpeoplewouldrespond.However,theresponsethatshegotwasbeyondherexpectation.“Itwasextraordinary.Icouldn’tevenkeepupwithalltheresponses.I’mnotverygoodatusingFacebook,soIcouldn’trespondtoallthecomments,”saidMarina.WhatactuallyhappenedwasthathalfofBelfastwereoutlookingforherdoginthewoods.4续写原文ThepeopleinthecommunityknewwhatRuthmeanttoMarina.Ruthwasherbestcompanion.Always,theysawMarinawalkingandshoppingwithRuthfollowingbehind.Fortwodays,thepeopleinthecommunityofBelfasttogethersearchedyardsandwoodsforthelostdog,putuppostersaroundthetownandmonitoredsocialmediafortipsandsightings.AsthehoursandthendayswentbywithnosightofRuth,Marinagrewmoreandmorefearfulthatherdogwouldnevercomehome.Butthesearchersdidn’tgiveup,notevenduringThursday’sicyrain.KimberlyMitchell,53,isananimallover,whoalsohasdisabilities.Shewalkswithacane(拐杖)andhasherownchallenges.SuchasituationmadeheracutelyawareofhowMarinacouldbefeeling.ShegotintouchwithMarinaandheadedtoherhomelateThursdayafternoontohelp.Whenshepulledintothedrive,shehadastrongfeelingthatthedogwasnearby.5段首句Paragraph1：Despitethecoldrain,Kimberlycheckedtheyard.Paragraph2：ThedogwaslookingatKimberly.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8在缅因州贝尔法斯特社区，67岁的残疾老人玛丽娜・德卢恩养了一只可爱的西高地白梗犬露丝。周二，露丝从主人车上跳下后跑丢了。由于自身残疾，玛丽娜无法亲自寻找，便在脸书求助。没想到半个贝尔法斯特的人都行动起来，帮忙寻找。人们在院子、树林里搜寻，张贴海报，关注社交媒体上的线索。找了两天都没找到，玛丽娜很担心，但搜寻者们没有放弃。53岁同样残疾的动物爱好者金伯利・米切尔也赶来帮忙。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Despitethecoldrain,Kimberlycheckedtheyard.尽管下着冰冷的雨，金伯利还是仔细地检查着院子。她拄着拐杖，在湿滑的地面上艰难地挪动着脚步，每一步都走得小心翼翼。雨水打湿了她的头发和衣服，可她全然不顾。她认真地查看院子里的每一个角落，不放过任何一个可能藏着狗狗的地方。她一边查看，一边轻声呼唤着露丝的名字，希望能得到一丝回应。雨水顺着她的脸颊滑落，模糊了她的视线，但她依然没有停下寻找的脚步。此时，她心里只有一个念头，就是帮玛丽娜找到她的爱犬。10续写思路分析Para2：ThedogwaslookingatKimberly.突然，金伯利看到一个小身影在不远处的灌木丛中动了一下。她的心猛地一紧，缓缓走近，发现那正是大家苦苦寻找的露丝。狗狗看起来有些疲惫和害怕，正躲在灌木丛里瑟瑟发抖。金伯利激动地蹲下身，轻声呼唤着露丝。露丝抬起头，用湿漉漉的眼睛看着金伯利，仿佛在诉说着自己的委屈。金伯利慢慢地伸出手，轻轻地抚摸着露丝的头，然后小心翼翼地把它抱了起来。她顾不上自己湿透的衣服，立刻朝着玛丽娜的家走去。当玛丽娜看到失而复得的露丝时，激动得热泪盈眶，不停地向金伯利道谢。社区的人们得知这个消息后，也都为她们感到高兴。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Despitethecoldrain,Kimberlycheckedtheyard.Shewalkedslowlywiththehelpofhercane,herstepscautiousontheslipperyground.Thecoldrainsoakedherhairandclothes,butshepaidnoattention.Sheexaminedeverycorneroftheyardcarefully,leavingnopossiblehidingplaceforthedogunnoticed.Asshemovedaround,shecalledRuth'snamesoftly,hopingforaresponse.Therainblurredhervisionasitstreameddownherface,yetshedidn'tstopsearching.Atthatmoment,heronlythoughtwastohelpMarinafindherbeloveddog.Shewasdeterminedtonotlettherainorherownphysicaldifficultiesstopher.13范文呈现Suddenly,Kimberlysawasmallfiguremovinginthebushesnotfaraway.Herheartskippedabeat.ShewalkedcloserslowlyandfoundthatitwasexactlyRuth,thedogtheyhadbeensearchingforsohard.Thedoglookedtiredandscared,shiveringinthebushes.KimberlysquatteddownexcitedlyandcalledRuthsoftly.RuthraiseditsheadandlookedatKimberlywithitsweteyes,asiftellingitsgrievances.Kimberlygentlyreachedoutherhand,strokedRuth'shead,andthencarefullypickeditup.Ignoringherwetclothes,sheimmediatelywalkedtowardsMarina'shome.WhenMarinasawherlostRuth,shewassoexcitedthattearsfilledhereyes.ShethankedKimberlyagainandagain.Whenthepeopleinthecommunityheardthenews,theywereallhappyforthem.14升级版范文呈现Despitethecoldrain,Kimberlycheckedtheyard.Withtheaidofhercane,sheshuffledalong,hereverystepmeasuredandcarefulontherain-slickedground.Thefrigidrainlasheddown,drenchinghertothebone,yetsheremainedundeterred.Methodically,shescouredeverynookandcrannyoftheyard,leavingnostoneunturnedinherquesttofindthemissingdog.Allthewhile,shecroonedRuth'snameinasoft,coaxingtone,yearningforasignofthebelovedpet.Therain,whichstreameddownherface,blurredhervision,butitdidnothingtodampenherresolve.Atthatmoment,hersolefocuswasonbringingcomforttoMarinabyreunitingherwithherfurrycompanion.Nothing,notevenherownphysicallimitationsortheinclementweather,couldswayherfromhermission.15升级版范文呈现Suddenly,Kimberlycaughtsightofasmall,furtivemovementinthebushesnearby.Herheartleapedwithanticipation.Approachingslowlyandsteadily,shebeheldnoneotherthanRuth,thedogtheyhadbeentirelesslysearchingfor.Thepoorcreaturelookedbedraggledandfrightened,itsbodytremblingintheshelterofthefoliage.Kimberlydroppedtoherknees,hervoiceagentlemurmurasshecalledouttothedog.Ruthlifteditshead,itseyesbrimmingwithamixtureoffearandhope,meetingKimberly'sgaze.W