高考英语复习读后续写练习：塔米的心意：送小男孩消防车之爱

高考英语读后续写语篇练习塔米的心意：送小男孩消防车之爱1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文TheFireTruckSomepeoplegivetime,somemoney,sometheirskillsandconnections;someliterallygavetheirblood...buteveryonehassomethingtogive.That’swhatTamilearnedthroughherownexperience.Afterherparentsbrokeup,thingsatTami’shousechanged.Hermomstartedworking,andTamibecameresponsibleforcaringforthehouseandmakingmealsforherselfandheryoungersister.Thoughmoneywastight,theyneverwentwithout.Theyhadanicehomeinamodestneighborhood,andthegirlsneverwantedforthenecessities—food,clothingandshelter.WhatTamimissedmostofall,though,wasfamily.4续写原文Tamispentthesummerduringherninth-gradeyearworkingataparktoearnextraspendingmoney.Herjobwastoruntheballshedandorganizeactivitiesforthekidswhospenttheirsummerdaysatthepark.ThekidsabsolutelylikedTamiverymuchbecauseshewasconstantlygoingoutofherwaytodothingsforthem.Shewouldplanpicnics,organizefieldtripsandevenbuyicecreamforallofthem,usingherownmoney.Shegottoknowonelittleboywholivedinanapartmentacrossthestreetfromthepark.Hisparentsbothworkedatfast-foodrestaurants,andsheknewthattheydidn’thavemuchmoney.Theboytalkedabouthisupcomingbirthdayandthefiretruckhewantedsobadly.Hesaidhewasgoingtobeafiremansomedayandneededthetrucktopractice.HetoldTamimoredetailsaboutthetruckthansheknewatoytruckcouldhave.5续写原文Theboy’sbirthdaycameandwent.ThenextdaywhenTamisawtheboy,sheexpectedtoseeashinyredtruckinhisarms.Whenhearrivedempty-handed,sheaskedabouthisbirthday—didhegethistruck?Theboysaidno,hisparentsweregoingtohavetowaitandgetitforhimlater,whenthingswerebetter.Heseemedalittlesadbutkepthischinupasbestashecould.6段首句Paragraph1：Afterworkthatday,Tamicashedherpaycheckandheadedforthetoystore.Paragraph2：Mydadwasverymuchagainstmeplaying,butwhenheheardthatsong,somethinginsidehimchanged.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9父母分手后，塔米承担起照顾家庭的责任。九年级暑假，她在公园工作，结识了一个家庭经济拮据的小男孩。小男孩渴望一辆消防车玩具作为生日礼物，生日过后却未得到。塔米得知后，决定用自己的工资为他实现愿望。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Afterworkthatday,Tamicashedherpaycheckandheadedforthetoystore.那天下班后，塔米领了工资，径直前往玩具店。她怀揣着辛苦挣来的钱，心中满是对小男孩的牵挂。一进玩具店，琳琅满目的玩具让她眼花缭乱，但她的目光迅速锁定在玩具车区域。她在货架间穿梭，仔细比较每一辆消防车。想起小男孩描述的细节，她认真查看车的颜色、大小、云梯的设计等。终于，她找到了一辆几乎和小男孩描述一模一样的红色消防车，车身锃亮，云梯可以伸缩。塔米满心欢喜地付了钱，抱着玩具，想象着小男孩看到礼物时的惊喜表情，脚步轻快地离开了玩具店。11续写思路分析Para2：OnSaturday,Tamiwalkedovertotheboy’shousefordinneroninvitation.周六，塔米应小男孩邀请去他家吃晚餐。她带着精心包装的消防车来到小男孩家。小男孩一开门，看到塔米手中的礼物，眼睛瞬间亮了起来。塔米笑着把礼物递给他，说：“生日快乐，小家伙！”小男孩激动地接过，迫不及待地打开包装。当看到梦寐以求的消防车时，他高兴得跳了起来，紧紧抱住塔米。晚餐时，小男孩一直兴奋地谈论着消防车，他的父母也对塔米表达了深深的感激。塔米看着开心的小男孩，心中充满温暖，她知道，自己的一点付出能给别人带来这么多快乐，是无比值得的。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Afterworkthatday,Tamicashedherpaycheckandheadedforthetoystore.Holdingthemoneysheearnedthroughhardwork,shewasfilledwiththoughtsofthelittleboy.Assoonassheenteredthetoystore,thedazzlingarrayoftoysgreetedher,buthereyeswerequicklydrawntotheareaoftoytrucks.Shewalkedamongtheshelves,carefullycomparingeachfiretruck.Rememberingthedetailstheboyhaddescribed,sheexaminedthecolor,size,andthedesignoftheladder.Finally,shefoundashinyredfiretruckthatwasalmostidenticaltowhattheboyhaddreamedof.Itsbodywasbright,andtheladdercouldbeextended.Tamipaidforitwithjoy,heldthetoy,andleftthestorewithlightsteps,imaginingtheboy'ssurprisedexpressionwhenhesawthegift.14范文呈现OnSaturday,Tamiwalkedovertotheboy’shousefordinneroninvitation.Shecarriedthecarefully-wrappedfiretrucktotheboy'shome.AssoonastheboyopenedthedoorandsawthegiftinTami'shand,hiseyeslitupinstantly.Tamismiledandhandedthegifttohim,saying,"Happybirthday,littleguy!"Theboytookitexcitedlyandcouldn'twaittoopenthepackage.Whenhesawthelong-desiredfiretruck,hejumpedupwithjoyandhuggedTamitightly.Duringdinner,theboykepttalkingaboutthefiretruckwithexcitement.HisparentsalsoexpressedtheirdeepgratitudetoTami.Lookingatthehappyboy,Tamifeltawarmfeelinginherheart.Sheknewthatherlittleeffortwasextremelyworthwhileasitcouldbringsomuchhappinesstoothers.15升级版范文呈现Afterworkthatday,Tamicashedherpaycheckandmadeherwaystraighttothetoystore.Withthehard-earnedmoneyclaspedfirmlyinherhand,hermindwasfilledwiththoughtsofthelittleboy.Themomentshesteppedintothetoystore,adazzlingdisplayoftoysmethereyes,yethergazewasimmediatelydrawntothesectionoftoytrucks.Sheweavedthroughtheshelves,meticulouslycomparingeachfiretruck.Recallingthevividdetailstheboyhadshared,shescrutinizedthecolor,size,andtheintricatedesignoftheladder.Atlast,shelaidhereyesonashinyredfiretruck,whichwasalmostacarbon-copyofwhattheboyhadenvisioned.Itsbodyglistened,andtheladderwasextendable.Tamipaidforitwithaheartfullofjoy,clutchedthetoy,andleftthestorewithbrisksteps,envisioningthelookofsheersurpriseontheboy'sfaceuponseeingthegift.16升级版范文呈现OnSaturday,inresponsetotheboy'sinvitation,Tamimadeherwaytohishousefordinner,carryingthecarefully-wrappedfiretruck.TheinstanttheboyopenedthedoorandcaughtsightofthegiftinTami'shands,hiseyessparkledwithexcitement.Tami,wearingawarmsmile,presentedthegifttohim,saying,"Happ