高考英语复习读后续写练习：改造破旧老屋：从自卑到自信的转变

高考英语读后续写语篇练习改造破旧老屋：从自卑到自信的转变1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Atthefarendoftown,nexttoadarkforest,satanoldwhitehouse.ItlookedlikeaSpookHousefromastory,whichmightsoundinterestingifitweren’twhereIlivedwithmymomandlittlebrother,Andy.Thehousewasn’tsohorrible,buttheoutsidemightmakeyouthinktwiceaboutentering.Peeling(脱落的)paintrevealedblackimagesunderneaththatlookedlikebats.Andweedsandlonggrasswrappedthehouse.WhenMomrentedit,Ithoughtshewascrazy.“Areyoukidding,Mom?Youreallywanttoliveinthisplace?It’sugly.”Momlookedhurt,andIregrettedmywords.Iknewshewasdoingthebestshecould.Obviously,thishousewouldn’tbeherfirstchoiceifmoneywerenoobject.4续写原文Momcleanedeveryroomandpaintedtheinside.Imustadmitthefreshpaintmadeadifference.“CanIpainttheoutside?”Iaskedher.“I’llaskMr.Dudleytopaintit,”Momreplied.Ourlandlord,Mr.Dudleyagreed,buthealwayshadthousandsofexcuses.Momdidn’tseemconcerned.Shewasbusyplanningformygrandmatolivewithus.HavingmygrandmawatchAndywhileMomworkedwouldsaveondaycareexpenses.OnemorningItoldmygrandmathatIwasjoiningahistorystudygroupatJustine’shouseafterschoolandwouldbelategettinghome.“Justbehomebeforedark,”shesaid.5续写原文ThatafternoonIwalkedwithagirlandaboytoJustine’shouse—abig,beautifulhousewithcolumns.Theinsidewasfurnishedlikeadecoratormagazine,withelegantfurniture.“Iloveyourhouse,Justine,”Isaid,tryingnottoscream.Shesmiled,“Thanks.You’llhavetocomeoveragain.”IwasdelightedandsurprisedthatJustinewantedmetocomeback.Iwoulddefinitelytakeheruponheroffer.Ijustcouldn’tinvitehertomyhouse.NowaydidIwantanyonetoseemyhouse.6段首句Paragraph1：Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.Paragraph2：Finallytheyunderstoodwhatwemeant.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9“我”和妈妈、弟弟安迪住在镇边一座破旧的白房子里，房子外观破旧，让“我”感到自卑。妈妈租下后打扫并粉刷了屋内，还打算请房东粉刷外墙，但房东一直推脱。“我”参加贾斯汀家的学习小组，她家房子漂亮，“我”很羡慕且不敢邀请她来自己家。一天学习结束，贾斯汀妈妈要开车送大家回家，“我”担心房子被看到，后来房子还是被看到，可贾斯汀的话让“我”稍感欣慰。之后，我们开始粉刷房子。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.当太阳快要落山时，贾斯汀的妈妈说要开车送我们回家。我心里顿时“咯噔”一下，慌乱不已。一路上，我绞尽脑汁，想着怎么能不让大家看到我那破旧的家。车越来越近，我的心跳也越来越快。当车缓缓停在我家门前时，我恨不得找个地缝钻进去。贾斯汀和同学们都望向窗外，我低着头，不敢看他们的表情。就在这时，贾斯汀突然说道：“哇，你家房子看起来好特别呀，有一种神秘的感觉，就像童话里的房子一样！”其他同学也纷纷点头表示赞同。我抬起头，惊讶地看着他们，心中的羞愧感也减轻了不少。11续写思路分析Para2：Thefollowingweek,westartedthepaintjob.接下来的一周，我们开始了刷漆工作。妈妈早早地买好了油漆和工具，弟弟也自告奋勇地要帮忙。周末的时候，贾斯汀和几个同学也赶来帮忙。大家分工明确，有的负责刷墙，有的负责清理杂草。我站在梯子上，认真地刷着外墙，虽然有些累，但心里却充满了期待。在大家的共同努力下，房子渐渐变了模样。原本剥落的油漆被崭新的色彩覆盖，杂草也被清理得干干净净。看着焕然一新的房子，我心里别提有多高兴了，也开始期待着贾斯汀能再次来我家做客。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Whenthesunwasnearsetting,Justine’smomsaidshewoulddriveushome.Panicimmediatelyfilledmyheart.Alltheway,Irackedmybrains,tryingtofigureouthowtopreventthemfromseeingmyshabbyhome.Asthecargotcloser,myheartwaspoundingfasterandfaster.Whenthecarslowlypulledupinfrontofmyhouse,IwishedIcoulddisappear.Justineandmyclassmatesalllookedoutofthewindow.Iloweredmyhead,tooashamedtolookattheirexpressions.Justthen,Justinesuddenlysaid,"Wow,yourhouselookssospecial!Ithasamysteriousfeeling,justlikeahouseinafairytale!"Theotherclassmatesalsonoddedinagreement.Ilookedup,surprised,andtheshameinmyheartwasreducedalot.14范文呈现Thefollowingweek,westartedthepaintjob.Momboughtthepaintandtoolsearly.Mylittlebrotheralsovolunteeredtohelp.Ontheweekend,Justineandseveralclassmatescametolendahand.Wedividedtheworkclearly.Somewereinchargeofpaintingthewalls,andsomewereresponsibleforclearingtheweeds.Istoodontheladder,paintingtheouterwallcarefully.AlthoughIwasabittired,myheartwasfullofanticipation.Withthejointeffortsofeveryone,thehousegraduallytookonanewlook.Theoriginallypeelingpaintwascoveredwithabrand-newcolor,andtheweedswerecleanedupcompletely.Lookingattherenovatedhouse,IwasextremelyhappyandbegantolookforwardtoJustine'snextvisittomyhome.15升级版范文呈现Asthesunhoveredonthevergeofsetting,Justine’smomannouncedherintentiontodriveushome.Instantaneously,panicwelledupwithinme.Throughoutthejourney,Istrainedmybrain,desperatelyseekingawaytoshieldthemfromthesightofmydilapidatedabode.Withthecaredgingnearer,myheartthumpedevermoreviolently.Whenthevehiclefinallyrolledtoastopbeforemyhouse,Iyearnedtovanishintothinair.Justineandmyclassmatesalldirectedtheirgazesoutofthewindow.Ihungmyhead,toomortifiedtomeettheireyes.Atthatprecisemoment,Justineexclaimed,"Wow,yourhouseexudessuchuniqueness!Itpossessesanairofmystery,muchlikeadwellingstraightoutofafairytale!"Theotherclassmatesconcurredwithnods.Iliftedmyheadinsurprise,andtheweightofshameinmyheartliftedsomewhat.16升级版范文呈现Intheensuingweek,weembarkedonthepaintproject.Momprocuredthepaintandtoolsinadvance.Myyoungerbrothereagerlyvolunteeredhisassistance.Ontheweekend,Justineandseveralclassmatesarrivedtooffertheirhelp.Wemeticulouslyassignedtasks;someweretaskedwithpaintingthewalls,whileo