Unit5 解透单元写作

2/2Unit5解透单元写作主题写作——诗1.写作任务假定你是李华，想参加你校下个月举办的英语诗歌朗诵比赛，已写好初稿。请你给外教MrHopkins写封邮件，请他帮你修改所附稿件的内容。主要内容包括：（1）修改文稿；（2）朗诵建议；（3）表达感谢。注意：（1）词数80左右；（2）开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。DearMrHopkins,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2.写作思路（1）一审：体裁、结构与主题体裁：应用文——求助信第一段：自我介绍+写信目的结构：三段第二段：具体请求第三段：表达感谢主题：请求修改文稿（2）二定：时态与人称时态：现在时态人称：以第一人称为主（3）三明确：写作要点第一段：自我介绍、写信目的第二段：文稿情况、修改请求、朗诵建议（用关联词however、inaddition等连接）第二段：表达感谢3.素材整理（1）关键词语dosb.afavour帮某人个忙anamateurpoetrywriter业余诗歌创作者participatein参加，参与anEnglishpoetryrecitationcontest英文诗歌朗诵比赛asdelicateaspossible尽可能精致correctformatsofrhymesandrhythms正确的韵律和节拍polishone’sverses润色某人的诗（2）完成句子①我写信是想请你帮我一个忙。I’mwritingtoaskyou________________________________________.②作为一个业余诗歌创作者，我计划参加下个月举行的英语诗歌朗诵比赛。Asan________________________,I’mplanningto________________theEnglishpoetryrecitationcontestnextmonth.③我已经努力写了一首十四行诗，我想使这首诗歌尽可能精致一些。I’vemanagedtowritea________andIwanttomakeit________________________________.④我不确信是否这首诗歌遵循了正确的韵律和节拍格式。Iamnotquitesure________it________________________ofrhymesandrhythms.⑤我不知道你是否可以抽出时间做一些必要的修改并润色我的诗歌。I________________youcouldspareyourtimeto________________________________and________________________.⑥如果你能给我一些如何朗诵的建议，我将不胜感激。________________________________________youcouldgivemesomeadviceonhowtoreciteit.答案：①todomeafavour②amateurpoetrywriter,participatein③sonnet，asdelicateaspossible④whether,followscorrectformats⑤wonderif,makesomenecessarychanges,polishmyverses⑥Iwouldbegratefulif4.高分作文DearMrHopkins,I’mastudentfromyourEnglishliteraryclass.I’mwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavour.Asanamateurpoetrywriter,I’mplanningtoparticipateintheEnglishpoetryrecitationcontestnextmonth.I’vemanagedtowriteasonnetandithasbeenmythirdversionasIwanttomakeitasdelicateaspossible.However,Iamnotquitesurewhetheritfollowscorrectformatsofrhymesandrhythms.So,Iwonderifyoucouldspareyourtimetomakesomenecessarychangesandpolishmyverses.Inaddition,Iwouldbegratefuljfyoucouldgivemesomeadviceonhowtoreciteit.Thankyouverymuchforyourtimeandeffort.Yours,LiHua5.佳作背诵（1）佳作一（2017·全国I卷）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：①时间和地点；②内容：学习唐诗；③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：①词数100左右；②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearLeslie，I’mwritingtotellyouthelessonplannexttime.Thelessonisplannedtostartat10aminClassroom8nextFriday.We’lllearnTangPoetry,whichhasbeautifulanddelicatepatternsandrhythms.It’sagreatwaytolearnChineseandChineseculture.Inordertogainabettercomprehension,youshouldlearnaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance,whichwillmaketheclassgosmoothly.I’llawaityouintheclassroom.Seeyouthen.Yours,LiHua（2）佳作二假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom在邮件中提到对中国古诗歌很感兴趣，请用英语写一封电子邮件介绍中国古诗歌。主要内容包括：①古诗歌代表人物；②古诗歌介绍。注意：①词数80左右；②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearTom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearTom,Learningyou’reinterestedinclassicalChinesepoetry,I’dliketointroducesomerelevantinformation.TheearliestclassicalChinesepoetrybeganfromTheBookofSongs,whichhasdelicatewordsandperfectrhythms.Sincethen,ithasdevelopedquicklyandreacheditsheydayintheTangDynasty.Meanwhile,famouspoetslikeLiBai,BaiJuyicameonstagerespectively.Now,they’restillconsideredthegreatestpoetsinhistory.Somuchforthistime.I’lltellyoumorenexttime.Yours,LiHua【附】话题写作常用表达和句型1.Asapoetrylover,IamplanningtoparticipateinanEnglishpoetrycontestduetobeheldnextmonth.作为一名诗歌爱好者，我计划参加下个月举办的一个英语诗歌比赛。2.Couldyoupleasesparemesometimetomakesomenecessarychangesandpolishmyarticle?你可以花费一些时间做些必要修改和润色我的文章吗？3.InordertohelptheexchangeforeignstudentslearnmoreaboutChineseculture,ourschoolisscheduledtoholdaculturalfestivalnextweek.为了帮助外国交换生多了解中国文化，我们学校计划在下周举办一个文化节。4.1wouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldinstructmetocomposepoems.如果你能教我创作诗，我将不胜感激。5.Asyouknow，TangPoetryhasthemostbeautifulanddelicatepatternsandrhythms.正如你知道的，唐诗有最美丽和最精美的格式与韵律。6.TheBookofSongs，theearliestclassicalChinesepoetrycollection，datesfromover2，000yearsago.《诗经》，最早的中国古诗集，可以追溯到2000多年前。7.ManyfamouspoetsfromQuYuantoLiBaiandBaiJuyicameonstagerespectivelyinhistory,whichbroughtprosperitytoclassicalChinesepoetry.从屈原到李白和白居易这样的许多著名诗人相继走上历史舞台，给中国古诗歌带来了繁荣。8.Itwasthroughsuc