上海教育版九年级英语下册Module3 Unit6第5课时教学课件

Module3SportandhealthUnit6Caringforyourhealth第5课时Writing·下册·目录02课堂练习01写作乐园话题十四给朋友的一封邮件【短文写作】假设你是Joe，你的朋友Simon最近因九年级功课压力大而变得少言寡语，与同学沟通困难。他在英语学习方面也有困难，而且考前紧张失眠。此外，他因父母让他放弃他喜爱的篮球活动而与父母吵架。请你根据下面的内容要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，帮他找到解决方案。80词左右。写作乐园DearSimon,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Joe【写作指导】在写作过程中要明确以下几点：1.作文要求是写一封电子邮件，要注意电子邮件的格式；2.作文开篇要简洁阐述写这封电子邮件的目的——帮朋友Simon找到解决方案，所以重点应该是写解决方案，不要过多地写问题，导致作文头重脚轻；3.朋友Simon遇到的问题有：与同学沟通困难、英语学习、紧张失眠、与父母吵架。写作过程中提出的解决方案要合理，能够相应地解决这些问题。同时要给予鼓励和支持。【范文赏析】DearSimon,I'msorrytohearthatyouhavehadsomuchtroublesinceyougotintoGrade9.I'mwritingtogiveyousomehelp.Youusedtobeoutgoingandnowyoudon'twanttoexpressyourselfbecauseofthestressfromstudy.Andyoudon'tgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.Ithinkyoushouldcommunicatewithyourclassmatesoften.AsforyourEnglishstudy,whynottakenotesinclassandpractisemoreafterclass?Learntorelax！Takealongwalkbeforetheexam.Youlovebasketballbutyourparentsaskedyoutostopitbecausetheywantyoutopaymoreattentiontoyourstudy.IfIwereyou,I'dtalkwiththeminsteadofarguingwiththem.IhopewhatIsaidcouldhelpyoudealwithyourworries.Bestwishes!Yours,Joe课堂练习一、写作能力提升(一)请使用所给的短语造句。1.bebusywith忙于做……________________________________________________________________________________________________

TheSmithshavebeenbusywithhouseworksincemorning.2.takeup学着做；开始做________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)请找出句子中错误的部分，并将正确的句子写在横线上。3.Isawsheistalkingwithhermother.________________________________________________Weshouldtakeupahobbybecausehobbiesareenjoyableandrelaxing.Isawshewastalkingwithhermother.4.Dosportsisagoodwaytogetrelaxed.________________________________________________(三)请根据括号内的扩写要求，将短句扩写。5.Weshouldformahabitofmakingplansforourstudy.(扩写原因)________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingsportsisagoodwaytogetrelaxed.Weshouldformahabitofmakingplansforourstudybecauseitcanhelpuslearnmoreefficiently.6.Weshouldlearntorelaxourselves.(扩写方式)________________________________________________________________________________________________

Weshouldlearntorelaxourselvesbydoingsportsoftenorwatchingamovie.二、读写综合A.回答问题请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题，并把答案写在横线上。

WhenIwasinprimaryschool,Iwasveryfatanddidn'tlikedoingexercise.Ifelttiredandboredwhendoinganykindofexercise.BecauseIhardlydidanyexercise,Ioftenfeltsickandwenttoseethedoctor.What'sworse,Iwasabsent（缺席的）fromschoolfromtimetotime,soIcouldn'tcatchupwithothers.Andmypoorhealthmadeitevenmoredifficultformetokeeponexercising.Myparentswerereallyworriedaboutme.

Oneafternoon,myfatheraskedmetohaveawalkwithhiminthepark.Hesaiditwasdifficultforpeoplewithverypoorhealthtotakeuprunningandothersportsatthebeginning,buttheycouldstartfromwalkingandincreaseendurance(耐力)littlebylittle.Withhisencouragement,Iagreedandwewentouttogether.Itwashardformetowalkforhalfanhour.Iwantedtogiveup,butmyfatherencouragedmetokeeponwalking.

Fromthenon,Ioftenwalkedwithmyparents.Tomysurprise,Icouldwalkforanhourinthefourthmonth.HowproudIfelt!NowIamaperfectrunnerinmymiddleschool.IlostallthefatandIamahealthygirlnow.1.Howdidthewriterfeelwhendoinganykindofexerciseinprimaryschool?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thewriter/Shefelttiredandbored(whendoinganykindofexerciseinprimaryschool).2.Whydidthewriterfallbehindothersatschool?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Becausethewriter/shewasabsentfromschoolfromtimetotime.3.Whoencouragedthewritertotakeupdoingsports?________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thewriter's/Herfatherencouragedhertotakeupdoingsports./Thewriter's/Herfather.4.Howlongcouldthewriterkeepwalkinginthefourthmonth?________________________________________________________________________________________________5.Howisthewriternow,healthyorunhealthy?________________________________________________

Thewriter/Shecouldkeepwalkingforanhourinthefourthmonth./Foranhour.Thewriter/Sheishealthynow.B.书面表达健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们来说是非常重要的。你认为我们应该如何养成健康的生活习惯?请你根据下面的内容要点，写一篇短文来给出你的建议。内容包括：(1)关于作息的建议；(2)关于饮食的建议；(3)关于运动的建议；(4)补充其他建议。作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Ithinkhealthyhabitsareveryimportanttous.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Herearesomewaystobehealthy.First,weshouldgetenoughsleepduringthenight.Wecangotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Second,wemu