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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Wecantotallydothis!”myfriendSarahshoutedexcitedly,thesmileonherfaceshininglikeadiamondaswesteppedoutoftheartstudio.“Definitely,we’vegotthisinthebag!”Irepliedenthusiastically,jumpinghappilyonthepavementasthedoorswungshutbehindus.BothofushadjustsubmittedourworksfortheAnnualArtShowcase,animportanteventthateveryartistdreamedofbeingpartof.ThatSaturdayevening,SarahandIstayedinmylivingroom,refiningoursubmissions.Weaimedtodemonstrateourcreativity,techniqueandpassionforart.Ifocusedonmylatestpainting—acolorfullandscapewhileSarahshowcasedhervividsculptures.Weweredeterminedtoimpressthejudges,ourconfidencerisinghigh.Afterafewdaysofanxiouswaiting,aletterarrivedinthemail.Heartracing,Itoreitopen.ButasIscannedthepage,desperationcrashedovermelikeahugewave.Mynamewasn’tonthelistofselectedartists.Momentslater,IspottedSarahapproaching,laughingandwavingabrightlycoloredenvelope.Ifeltaburstofpainatthesight.Shewasclearlythrilledandreadytosharehergoodnews.Unabletofaceherjoy,Iturnedawaysharply.Ijustcouldn’tbearit:shemadeit,andIdidn’t.Whywaslifesounfair?Angeranddisappointmentcloudedmyvision.Thatafternoon,onthebusridehome,Isatalone,staringoutofthewindowandignoringSarah’sattemptstochat.Whenthebusfinallypulleduptomystop,Ijumpedoffwithoutaword,myheartheavy.Uponreachinghome,Ithrewtheawfulletterintomymom’shands,unabletocontrolmydisappointment.Ifellontothesofa,buryingmyfaceinthepillows,allowingtearstoflowfreely.Thesweetnessofthemomenthadsoured,andIwaslostinastormofsorrow,thinkingwhatthismeantformyfutureinart.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,IdecidedtoavoidseeingSarah.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atlast,mymomcametocomfortme,sayingitwasnotSarah’sfault.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意作者和朋友莎拉一同参加年度艺术展。她们精心准备作品,满怀信心。然而,几天后信件寄来,作者发现自己未入选,而莎拉入选了。作者看到莎拉开心的样子,内心充满愤怒、失望与嫉妒,在回家的公交上不理会莎拉,回家后对着妈妈痛哭,陷入对自己艺术未来的迷茫。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔:莎拉和作者提交作品时兴奋且自信,“Wecantotallydothis!”“Definitely,we’vegotthisinthebag!”

回应:与作者落选后的失落形成强烈反差,凸显其情绪的巨大落差,也为后文她难以接受莎拉入选的事实埋下伏笔。伏笔:作者专注于绘画,莎拉展示雕塑,体现她们对此次艺术展的重视和投入。

回应:在续写中,作者会反思自己的投入与结果的落差,促使她重新审视自己的艺术之路。伏笔:作者看到莎拉拿着信封开心的样子,选择转身离开,“Unabletofaceherjoy,Iturnedawaysharply.”

回应:在续写第一段中,作者决定避开莎拉,延续了她因嫉妒而逃避的情绪。伏笔:作者回家后将信扔给妈妈,“Ithrewtheawfulletterintomymom’shands”,并痛哭。

回应:引出第二段妈妈对她的安慰,推动故事进一步发展。伏笔:作者最后陷入对自己艺术未来的思考,“thinkingwhatthismeantformyfutureinart”

回应:在后续的故事中,作者会在妈妈的引导下,重新找回对艺术的信心,明确未来方向。续写要点第一段:详细描述作者避开莎拉的行为,如找借口不接电话、不回信息,不去常去的地方。同时,描述作者在这期间内心的挣扎,嫉妒与自我怀疑交织,也可提及莎拉尝试联系她的细节。第二段:重点描写妈妈的安慰内容,比如讲述失败是成功之母,鼓励作者从失败中学习。接着描述作者听了妈妈的话后的心理变化,开始反思自己,决定重新振作,最后可以提及作者对未来艺术创作的新规划。情感线从最初的自信期待,到落选后的愤怒、嫉妒、失望,再到避开莎拉时的纠结挣扎,最后在妈妈的安慰下,转变为重新振作、充满希望。故事线作者和莎拉参加艺术展,作者落选而莎拉入选,作者因嫉妒避开莎拉,妈妈对作者进行安慰,作者在妈妈的开导下重新审视自己,决定继续追求艺术梦想。主旨升华句Thisexperiencetaughtmethatsetbacksarenottheendbutstepping-stonestosuccess,urgingmetokeepmovingforwardinmyartisticjourney.这次经历教会我,挫折并非终点,而是通往成功的垫脚石,激励我在艺术之路上继续前行。Truefriendshipcanwithstandthetestofjealousyanddisappointment,andIshouldhavebeenhappierforSarah'ssuccess.真正的友谊能够经受住嫉妒和失望的考验,我本应该为莎拉的成功感到更开心。Failureintheartshowcaseisnotajudgmentofmytalentbutacallforgrowth,inspiringmetoexplorenewcreativehorizons.艺术展的失败并非对我才华的否定,而是成长的呼唤,激励我探索新的创作领域。Throughthisdifficulttime,Ilearnedtheimportanceofresilienceandthepowerofapositivemindsetinthefaceofadversity.通过这段艰难的时光,我学会了在逆境中保持韧性和积极心态的重要性。Insteadofbeingdefeatedbydisappointment,Ichosetoembraceitasacatalystforchange,fuelingmypassionforartevenmore.我没有被失望打败,而是选择将其视为改变的催化剂,让我对艺术的热情更加高涨。写作示范一Thenextday,IdecidedtoavoidseeingSarah.Iignoredhercallsandmessages,makingupexcuseswhenevershetriedtomeet.Everytimehernamepoppeduponmyphone,amixofenvyandself-doubtfloodedme.Oneday,sheevencametomyhouse,butIhidinmyroom,tooashamedtofaceher.Iwasstuckinaloopofresentment,constantlyquestioningmyworthasanartist.Atlast,mymomcametocomfortme,sayingitwasnotSarah’sfault.Sheremindedmethatfailurewasapartoflifeandanopportunitytolearn.Herwordshithome,andIbegantoreflect.Irealizedthatmyjealousyhadblindedme.IdecidedtoreachouttoSarah,congratulateher,andaskforadvice.Fromthenon,Ithrewmyselfintomyart,determinedtoimproveandprovemyselfinthenextshowcase.写作示范二Thenextday,IdecidedtoavoidseeingSarah.Ichangedmyroutetoschool,skippedourusualhang-outspots,andpretendedtobebusywhenevershewasaround.IwasconsumedbytheunfairnessIfelt,andmyartsufferedasaresult.Icouldn'tfocus,andeveryattemptatpaintingseemedlackluster.Meanwhile,Sarahwaspersistentintryingtotalktome,butIjustcouldn'tbringmyselftorespond.Atlast,mymomcametocomfortme,sayingitwasnotSarah’sfault.Shetoldmestoriesoffamousartistswhohadfacednumerousrejectionsbeforeachievingsuccess.Herwordswerelikealightinthedark.Istartedtoseemyfailureasachancetogrow.IapologizedtoSarah,andwereconnected.Together,weplannednewartprojects,andIwasreadytofacethenextchallengewithrenewedenthusiasm.【答案】Thenextday,IdecidedtoavoidseeingSarah.Itookadifferentroutetoschoolandcanceledourusualcoffeedate.IknewSarahwouldwanttocelebratehersuccesswithme,butIcouldn’tstandseeinghersuccesswhenIfeltlikesuc

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