考点14 高中英语写作技巧-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1考点14高中英语写作技巧课前热身练（2023春·上海·华师大二附中校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.现在城市里有很多家庭请家政服务(housekeepingservice)，请你对此现象发表你的看法。内容必须包括：◆概述城市里有很多家庭请家政服务现象◆此现象对家庭和社会产生的影响◆你对此现象的看法__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.Thisphenomenonhasvariouseffectsonthefamilyandsociety.First,housekeepingcansavetimetodootherthings.Officeworkersincreasinglyneedthehelpofhousekeepingservicestohelpthemsavefromtedioushouseholdchoresanddevotethemselvestomeaningfulthings.Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.Finally,housekeepingcanalsobringconveniencetoparents.Duetotheparticularityofwork,suchasdoctors,trafficpolicemaynotbeabletogohomeduringtheNewYear.Inthiscase,itisagoodchoicetofindadomestichelperoroccasionallycallanhourlyworker.Therefore,Ithinkthehousekeepingserviceisnecessary.【导语】本文是一篇说明文。要求考生针对城市很多家庭请家政服务现象进行概述，分析这一现象对家庭和社会产生的印象，以及考生对此的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累表明：show→indicate产生影响：haveeffectson→haveinfluenceon由于：dueto→becauseof选择：choice→option2.句式拓展原句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.拓展句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsaftertheyhaveformedanewfamily.【点睛】【高分句型1】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.（运用了that引导同位语从句，运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.（运用了动词不定式作宾语）核心考点梳理想写好作文第一件事是准备一个作文素材积累本！！！把老师平时讲的、阅读翻译中遇到的地道表达都记下来并经常复习。（一）高考作文常考类型书信类：建议信、申请信、投诉信等；议论或夹叙夹议；话题类：说明、议论或夹叙夹议；图表类：说明+议论；漫画类：描写+议论。（二）作文评分标准一）评分标准1、本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。4、词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。档次内容语言组织结构得分A9—109—104—520-25分B7—87—8316-19分C5—65—6212-15分D3—43—417-11分E0—20—200-6分各档次给分要求：内容部分A．内容充实，主题突出，详略得当。B．内容较充实，能表达出作文要求。C．内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求。D．漏掉或未能写清楚主要内容，有些内容与主题无关。E．明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题。语言部分具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构正确或有些小错误，主要因为使用了较复杂结构或词汇所致。具有较强的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，错误主要因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所致。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。语法结构与词汇错误较多，影响了对内容的理解。语法结构与词汇的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解。组织结构部分自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇丰富。能使用语句间连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇较丰富。能使用简单的语句间连接成分，全文内容连贯。句子结构有一定的变化，词汇使用得当。尚能使用语句间连接成分，语言连贯性较差，句子结构单调，词汇贫乏。缺乏语句间的连接成分，语言不连贯。词不达意。二）阅卷评分实例Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.请简要描述图片，并结合图片内容谈谈自己的想法。7+8+5=20Thepictureshowsaboywithaspreadpairofwings,andacoupleofparentswithahugepairofscissors,goingtooperateontheirchild’sbeautifulwings.Whatwecanseeintheparents’eyesisexpectation,insharpcontrastwiththesadnessintheboy’s.Thepicturejustremindsthesimilaroperationofmyown,whenIwasakidwhohadjuststartedprimaryschool.Ialwaysenjoyedmyselfinthenature,whichwaswideenoughtospreadmywingsandflytothefun.However,asmyagesgrew,myparentsstartedtopullthefeatherofffrommywings.Sincethen,Ihadnoalternativebuttoberestrictedintheroom,workinghardontheacademicsubjectsbythewindowinsteadofsettingmyselffreeintheair.Imusthaveargued,criedandshouted,butitwasofnouse.Atthatpoint,IcouldjusttellthatIfeelsobounded.IthoughtIwasnotdoingbadinschoolsoIshouldearnmytimeofplaying.Itdidn’tnecessarilymeanplayinggamesorotherthings,butthefreedomtofollowmyinterestanddevelopthembeforeitwastoolate.SoIcantotallyunderstandtheboyinthepicture,andwishhimabrightfuture.7+6+3=16Thiscriticalpicturedescribesaphenomenonthatparentsarecuttingtheirchild’swings,whichimplysthatnowadaysmoreandmoreparentsarekillingtheirchild’screativityandfreedom,ignoringthattheirchild’sdisappointmentandsadness,inordertomaketheirchildaso-called“great”student.Ihavealsoexperiencedthisbefore,onceIwasinthejuniorhighschool.Oneday,ourteachertoldusthatourschoolisgoingtoorganizesomeclubactivitiesonFridayafternoon,includingsomeacademicclubsandsomeclubswhichaftergreatopportunitiestotakepartinsocialactivities.AsIwasastudentwhowasinteretedinsocialactivities,Iwasdyingfortakingpartinaclublikethelaterone.But,myparentsdon’tagreewithme,theythoughtthatthechieftaskofastudentislearningsotheyforcedmetojoinanacademicclub.Iwassodisappointedatthetime,becauseIfoundthatIdon’thavetherighttomakemyownchoice,nottosaycreatesomethingIlike.ButIdon’thavetheforcetorejectmyparentsdecision,andIfoundmyselfbecomeafollowerofmyparents.Thesethigsarecommoninourreallife,eventoday;manyparentsstillimposetheirownopinionsontheirchild.Thiscanhaveabadinfluenceonoursocietyandourgenerationmaylackofcreativity,sowhydon’twestopit?6+6+2=14Asisvividlyshowedinthepicture,acouplestandsbehindtheirchildandthemencutsoffchild’swingswithhissessioncruelly.However,thiskindofpicturelotsmerecallmypersonalmemory.WhenIwas10yearsold,Iwasaddictedtodancingandwantedtobeadancerinthefuture.Sincemydanceteacherpraisedmeandgavemecouragetoachievemydream.ItoldmyparentsthatIhadapassionondancingandwouldliketotakepartinadancecompetition.Neverthless,myparentrefusedmyrequestanddidn’tallowedmetodanceanymore.Needlesstosay,theythoughtthemostcrucialthingformeistoenteraexcellentcollege.Sotheydisaggreedmyopinion.ButasfarasIamconcerned,parentshouldencourangetheirchildrentocultivatetheirinterestratherthanmerelylearnsomeknowledgefrombooks.5+6+2=13Asisclearlyshowninthepicture,acoupleareshapingtheirson’swingsintotheshapetheywant.Butthelittleboylooksreluctant.Itcanbesimplyinferedfromthepicturethattheartistwantsparentstoallowtheirchildrentogrownaturally.Andthat’swhatIamfor,too.BecauseImyselfgotbenefitsfromthefreegrowthduringmychildhood.WhenIwasabouteight,myparentswantedmetobeapianoist,whichwasthecommonideaofmanyparentsatthattime.However,Ididn’tlikeplayingthepianoatall.WhyshouldIstepintoafieldwhichIwasnotinterestedin?“Interestisthebestdrivingforce.”SoItoldthemaboutmyopinions.Fortunately,myparentsagreedandletmechoosetheskillIwantedtolearn.IsignedupfortheNewConceptEnglish.NeverhasanyonewonmecompletelyinEnglishevenonce!ItmustbethemagicofinterestthatmakeEnglishastrongarmofmine.Whynotletchildrencultivatetheirinterestandstriveforitthemselves?Everyoneisunique.Ifallflowersarethesame,thenaturewon’tbebeautifulanymore.5+5+2=12Asthepictureshows,theboyhasabeautifulwingbuthisfatherisgoingtocutitwithouthesitation.Hismotherfeeldesperatebutcan’tdoanythingwithoutlookherchild.Alltheboycandoisstandthereandwaitingforthefirstbutlastcut.Thepicturetouchedmealot.Itrecalledmydeepmemoizeinmyheart.IstillrememberwhenIwasthenyearsold,Iwaskeenonpainting.Teachersandfriendswereflavouredofmywork.Butwiththestressfulcamefromstudy,Ihadtoputdownmyinterestingthingsbutgotostudy.Likemanyofpeers,wearetheonlychildinourfamily.Parentsholdgiantexpectationsonus.Toliveuptotheirexpectation,wehadtoburyourselvesintothebookandextralessons.WhatIfeltthoseyearswassadnessbutIcouldn'tcompliantevenaword,orIwouldmakethemsad.Ithinkparentsshouldn’tcutthetalentiftherekidsaregoodatsomething.Theyshouldcultivateitnotfocusthemonwhattheypaylessinteresting.That’sallIfeltwiththepicture.2+4+1=7Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,theboy’sfatherwanttocuttheboy’sdreamtomakeboyfollowtheparents’way.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thechildshouldhavetheirowndreamstoliveintheworldandgrewup.Tobeginwith,itisgoodforchildrentohavetheirowndreams.Itistheirlifegoalandtheycansparenoefforttochallengeallthetroublewithoutcomplaintment.What’smore,children’sowndreamscanhelpthemmoveindepenceandtheycanlivehappierwithoutparents.Finally,changechildren’sdreamswillincreasethegenerationalgapbetweenchildrenandparents.Allinall,Ithinkthatasforchildren,theyoughttofollowtheirowndreamsandforparents,theyareessentialtoencouragetheirchildren.Itishightimeforchildrentofollowtheirowndreams.（三）写作步骤一）审题审清题目，注意不要偏题，不要遗漏内容。如下面这道题，很多同学在写的时候写完开头直接开始提建议了，漏掉描述自己的高中学习生活，这样导致分很低，因为内容定档。所以大家一定要注意审题。Direction：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你的表弟Frank即将踏入高中学习，请你写一封信给他，在信中简要描述你自己的高中学习生活，并以此给他的高中学习生活提些建议。（建议可以包括：规划好日常生活、找到适合自己的学习方法、多参加课外活动等）二）分段、列提纲作文一般都分成3段，开头—主体—结尾。分好段后用中文列一个简单的中文提纲，让自己的思路更清晰，也能节省后面的写作时间。如上面这篇作文可作如下提纲：开头（写信背景和目的）：恭喜进入高中，分享经验。1.描述自己高中学习主体1)规划好日常生活2.提建议：2)学习方法3)多参加课外活动结尾（总结）：希望度过充实的3年三）过渡词两个方面：Foronething,Foranother/Ononehand,ontheotherhand三个方面：首先其次最后总结firstandforemostinthefirstplacefirstofalltobeginwithadditionally/inadditioninthesecondplacewhat’smoremoreover/furthermorebesideslastbutnotleasttoputitinanutshelltosumupashasbeenmentionedinconclusiontakingeverythingintoconsideration四）遣词造句1、运用万能单词和万能句型万能单词万能单词不用并不影响句子，但用上确能给句子增添一点色彩。词义万能单词例句毫无疑问undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,extracurricularactivities

(apparently)playasignificantroleinmyphysicalandmentaldevelopment.显然地obviously；apparently不可否认undeniably一定surely/definitely万能句型使用万能句型能让简单句变成复合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。词义万能句型例句毫无疑问Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthatmoreandmorepeoplewillusecomputersatjobinthefuture.不可否认Thereisnodenyingthat...Noonecandenythat...ThereisnodenyingthatourschoolnewspaperinEnglishservesasanexcellentfoodforthoughttargetingusstudents.不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthatonlywithalargeamountofknowledgefromeveryaspectcanwecreatepracticalideasinsteadofavaindream.普遍认为Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountofplayingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren’sgrowth.不用说needlesstosayNeedlesstosay,lessclosecontactwithothersdoeshavebadeffectsonourrelationship.运用以上所学知识写一个段落关于“写信给朋友提建议：如何克服考试焦虑”。句首句已给出。Howtoovercometestanxiety?Howtoovercometestanxiety?Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatitis,toalargeextent,vitalandsignificantforyoutomakeacarefulpreparation,consequently,someeffectivepracticeisbadlyneeded.Additionally,noonecandenyhavingapositiveattitudeisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,whichcanmakeyoudiligentandintelligent.Lastbutnotleast,needlesstosay,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakeadeepbreathbeforewritingthetestpaper,consideringthatitwillhelpusconcentrateonourtestandbemoreconfident.Ifyoucarryoutthesemethods,Iamsureyouwillachieveanamazingsuccessinyourtest.总结书信提建议的句型：①itisbeneficial/advisable/significantforsbtodosth②youaresupposedtodo③doingsthisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,which...④IfIwereyou,Iwould...2、运用高级词汇和词组（详见教案15）高级词汇高级词汇指的是一些实词要用高中词汇书上的词汇，而尽量少用初中词汇。比如我们写某事重要时不用初中学的important，而用高中词汇vital/significant/critical/crucial等。高级词组高级词组指写作能用词组的地方一定要用词组，词组的灵活使用是高分作文的必备条件，所以要多积累和仿写。比如我们写考虑某事时不用单词consider，而用词组takesthintoaccount/consideration。3、运用高级句型（详见教案16）高级句型使用高级句型能让句子多样化，为作文加分的必备项！作文中要多使用从句、非谓语、强调倒装、虚拟语气、被动语态等。比如用定语从句写旅游的益处：Thereisnodenyingthattravelingisasignificantwaytobroadenourhorizons,whichenrichespeople’smindandexperience.写作中常用谚语背诵：1.Missedchanceswillneverreturn.机不可失，失不再来。2.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成.4.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻.5.It’snevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老.6.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功.7.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情.8.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母.9.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言.10.Everymanhashisfaults.金无足赤,人无完人.11.Nopains,nogains.不劳无获。12.Nothingistoodifficulttoawillingheart.俗话说，世上无难事，只怕有心人。五）检查写完之后一定要留时间检查一遍，注意时态、语态、人称等。平时写作时一定要养成检查的习惯。先自己检查，然后可以同学之间相互检查，培养自己的纠错能力，最后拿给老师检查。当堂知识检测1．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累取代：replace→supersede拥有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是说：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(运用了现在分词作状语)2．假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括：1)你印象最深的一件事情；2)此事对你的启发和影响。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DuringthepastthreeyearsintheGuangmingseniorhighschool,Ihavehadmanyunforgettableexperiences.Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.Inordertowinthecompetition,weallwentforit.Duringtheweekbeforethecompetition,wepractisedsinginginourfreetime.Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.Thankstooureffort,wewonthefirstprize.Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.Themovementremindedmeofanoldsaying-Nopains,nogains.Itwashardwork,butduringthecourseofpreparation,wedevelopeddeepfriendship,confidenceaswellasunderstanding!【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对自己的启发和影响。【详解】1.词汇积累难忘的：unforgettable→memorable为了：inorderto→inaneffortto困难的：hard→tough由于：thanksto→owingto2.句式拓展同义句原句：Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.拓展句：Whenweheardtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.【高分句型1】Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.（运用了when引导的表语从句）【高分句型2】Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）3．假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“ClubsinMySchool”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：1.对你校社团进行分类；2.具体描述每一类社团的特色。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ClubsinMySchoolToenrichstudents’life,ourschoolorganizesavarietyofclubsinmyschool.Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.Generallyspeaking,theclubsinmyschoolcanbeclassifiedintotwotypes:sportsclubandartclub.Sportsclubarepopularamongstudents.Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.Sostudentstherecanmakefriends.Besides,theycannotonlyplaysportsinfreetime,butalsotheycanlearnsomesportsskills.Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.Also,itprovidesstudentssomeknowledgeaboutart.Meanwhile,studentstherecanhavetheaccesstotheinstrument,suchaspiano,Erhuandsoon.Allthestudentsinmyschoolliketheclubs.SoIthinktheclubsareverysignificant.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“ClubsinMySchool”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含学生对校社团进行分类，并具体描述每一类社团的特色。【详解】1.词汇积累等等：andsoon→andthelike此外：Besides→Inaddition机会：chance→opportunity同时：Meanwhile→Atthesametime2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.拓展句：Artclubwhichincludesmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.【高分句型1】Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.学校学生会准备为文学社、英语社、体育社、艺术社等各社团招募新成员。假如你是其中一个社团的负责人，请你写一篇宣传稿介绍你们社团的情况。文章必须包括：●简单介绍你们社团的特色或优势●简要描述你们社团的发展规划___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mLiHua,theorganizeroftheEnglishclub.Ifoundedthisclubtoincreasestudents’interestinEnglishandimprovestudents’oralEnglishskills.WehaveEnglishclubgameseveryweekend.Studentscanplayfreely,thusimprovingtheirconfidenceinlearningEnglish.Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.Inaddition,wealsoinvitesometeacherstoguideusonhowtoperformEnglishdramaseverytwoweeks.Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.Lookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为学校其中一个社团的负责人，写一篇宣传稿介绍社团的情况，简单介绍社团的特色或优势，并描述社团的发展规划。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：found→setup有兴趣：showinterestin→beinterestedin此外：inaddition→besides继续：continue→goon2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.拓展句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities,whichwillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.【点睛】【高分句型1】Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）5．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天”的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意见，请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：1）活动线路与内容。2）推荐理由。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madame,

Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.

Itismysuggestionthatallteachersandstudentstakepartinoutdoorhiking.TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.AllstudentsarerequiredtotakeaplasticbagtopickuprubbishthrownbytouristsonthewayandinBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagestudentscanvisitthevillagetobuyhand-madearticlesmadebycraftsmenandenrichthemwithcolorfullocalculture.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,tostartwith,it'sabetterchoicetohelpstudentsdevelopakindofbearinghardshipsspiritwhichishelpfulfortheirfuturelife.Besides,Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.Inaddition,allstudentsneedanoccasiontoescapeforawhilefromtheirhardstudyandhaveagoodrest.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yours,LiMing【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇意见征集，要求考生以李明的身份为学校即将开展的“发现春天”社会实践活动建言献策，并阐述你的设计方案。【详解】1.词汇积累非常：very→morethan参加：takepartin→participatein购买：buy→purchase有益的：behelpful→bebeneficial2.句式拓展并列句变简单句原句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillageanditisthirtykilometerslong.拓展句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.（现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.（被动语态、非谓语动词短语）课后巩固提高6．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括：1)对调查结果的简单描述;2)对数据的原因分析;3)你的看法。1博物馆免费情况下会考虑67.86%2免费才去3.57%3持无所谓态度28.57%___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe"freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums"amongseniorhighschoolstudents.Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.3.57%ofstudentswentforfree.28.57%holdtheindifferentattitude.Butwhataccountsforthehugegapbetweenstudents?Inmyopinion,67.86%ofthestudentsmayliketostudybutthefamilyconditionsarenotgood,thereisnosuchexpenditure,sotheywillconsiderfreeofcharge.3.57%ofstudentsarenotinterestedinmuseumsbecausetheydonotlovestudying,soitisfreeforthemtogo.However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseumstoincreasetheirknowledge.Theywillgothereanyway.Personally,undertheconditionoffree,studentsshouldvisitthereregularlytolearnsomeextracurricularknowledge,whichwillbeofgreathelptoenrichtheirexperience,broadenourknowledgeandmakeusaknowledgeableperson.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括：对调查结果的简单描述；对数据的原因分析；你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累免费：freeofcharge→forfree→fornothing有益的：beofgreathelp→behelpful就个人而言：personally→inone’sopinion拓宽：broaden→widen2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.拓展句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveywhichisonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.（运用了as和which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseum