专题10-应用文写作(10)-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考

研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1应用文写作文（十）1．（2014·安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Jamie【答案】HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobewrong,soyoudon’thavetoworrysomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends，asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours，Jamie【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。【详解】内容是用英文写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示：为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的宾语从句I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.定语从句so…that引导的目的状语从句Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2．（2014·重庆卷）青少年研究专家SusanBeacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏，邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为，礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华，请用英文发帖，内容应包括：*赞同Susan的看法*你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么*该礼物的意义*期待大家回复注意：1.词数不少于80；2.符合语言规范；3.在答题卡上作答；4.开头已给出（不计入总词数）。IamahighschoolstudentfromChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】IamahighschoolstudentfromChinaandIamquiteforyouropinionaboutbestgifts:thevalueofgiftsliesinitsintensionsoweshoulddevotemoretothem.ThebestgiftI’veeverreceivedisabookfrommyEnglishteacher,Debbie,whichshebroughttomewhenshereturnedfromherholidayinUSA.Thebook’snameisChickenSoupfortheTeenageSoul:TheRealDeal:Friends.Ivaluethisbookbecauseitshowsmehowtokeepthebalanceoffriendshipinapositiveway.AndImustthankmyfavoriteteacherforhercareaboutmebecauseshefoundmeatlossdealingwithfriendsatonetime.Readingit,Ihavebeeninspiredandbalancedmyselfinlifeandstudy.Istronglyrecommendyoutoreaditandsharewhatyougainwithmeinyourreply.Yoursever,LiHua【详解】审题：该题也具有较大的开放度。但按要求一定要写出Susan的看法，而这个看法就在试题的写作说明里：礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。而选择什么样的角度来写一定要根据自己的生活和切身感受，且要量力而行。写作技巧：一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务：1阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。2收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点，应多费笔墨完成。3表期待应另外起段完成，以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型，如状语从句，定语从句，倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调：一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。3．（2014·浙江卷）学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popularsciencebooks）和文学类图书（literarybooks）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。DearMr.Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiYue【答案】DearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Classicliteraryworks,writtenbymasters,presentgreatthoughtsthroughfascinatingstoriesandlanguage.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.I’llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校图书馆需要购置的新书提供建议。【详解】1.词汇积累购买：buy→purchase建议：suggestion→advice有趣的：interesting→amusing推荐：recommend→propose2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Usuallypopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnatureinasimpleandinterestingway.拓展句：Itisinasimpleandinterestingwaythatpopularsciencebooksexplainbasicprinciplesofnature.【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I’dliketogivesomesuggestions.(由that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.(由what引导的主语从句)4.（2014·北京卷）你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意：1.词数不少于50.2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearChris,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Joe【答案】DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Doyourememberourplan?WeplannedtovisitYunnaninJuly.Butnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.I’msorryaboutit.CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?Iwishyoucouldunderstand.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,Joe【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。【详解】1.词汇积累游览：visit→travelaround因为：because→since受伤了：beinjured→getinjured建议：suggest→advise2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Doyourememberourplan?WeplannedtovisitYunnaninJuly.拓展句：DoyourememberourplanthatwewillvisitYunnaninJuly?【点睛】[高分句型1]Butnowbecausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2]CanIsuggestthatweputitoffuntilearlyAugust?(运用了that引导的宾语从句)5．（2014·全国I卷）假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。参考词汇：住宿—accommodation________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’veseenyourad,andI’dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。一则广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。【详解】1.词汇积累计划：plan→mapout此外：besides→what’smore为……付款：pay…for→spend…on回复：reply→response2.句式拓展并列句变主从复合句原句：IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.拓展句：IamastudentinChina,whoplanstogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.（运用了虚拟语气）【高分句型2】I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.（运用了howmuch和whether引导的宾语从句）6．（2014·全国II卷）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭：2．工作：3.业余生活。注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.开头语已为你写好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewouldbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelychild.IhopeIwillworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.I’lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmyfreetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Onmyholidays,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.【导语】本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题，写一篇征文。【详解】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。【点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语Inmyfreetime,Inaword,suchas等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了较多的高级语法表达，如IhopeI'llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.（省略that的宾语从句）I'lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.（whatever引导的宾语从句）Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.（比较级+and+比较级连用）等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。7．（2014·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：(1)表示欢迎(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如天气，饮食等）(3)介绍本班情况(4)希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊注意：(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。(1)参考词汇：交换生exchangestudentDearChris,I’mLiJin,monitorofClassOne,GradeEleven.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris，I'mLiJin,monitorofClassOne,GradeEleven.WelcometoourclassinChina.I'mgladyoucanjoinourclass,whichisawonderfulgroup.Everystudentnotonlyenjoysstudying,butisreadytohelpeachother.Soifyoujoinus,I'msureyoucangetalongwellwiththemandquicklymakefriendswiththem,too.Theclimatehereischangeable.Now,itisverycoolinautumnandcoldinwinter,sodon'tforgettobringdifferentkindsofclotheswithyou.Inyoursparetime,youcanvisitsomefamousplacesofinterestinourcity,aswellastastingallkindsofdelicioustraditionalChineselocalfoods.WeChineseusechopstickstohaveChinesefoodinsteadofforksandknives.AndIcanbeyourtourguideifyoulike.AsanAmerican,thereisnodoubtthatyouarefamiliarwithyourcountry.Soifitisconvenienttoyou,pleasebringamapofAmericaandsomephotosofyourfamilies，friends,andsomefamousbuildingswithyou,andgiveussomespeechestointroduceyourschoollifeanddifferentcultureofAmerica.Andwe’llexchangeourdifferentlivesandculturestogetherthen.lookingforwardtoyourcoming!YoursLiJin【导语】本文是一封书信。假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请根据提示，给他写封邮件。【详解】本文要求写一封Email。本文包括了四个要点。1.表示欢迎。2.介绍班级情况。3.注意事项。4.希望Chris做的事。应该用一般现在时。【点睛】范文要点齐全，全文连贯。运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；notonly…butalso连接词；用了getalongwellwith，makefriendswith，aswellas，insteadof，itisconvenienttoyou等短语和固定句型。8．（2014·福建卷）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Successistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.（热情）”－SirWinston,Churchill内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词数：120左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthatweshouldn'tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhen