专题07 书面表达题型【考题猜想】-九年级英语上学期期末考点大串讲（北师大版）（解析版）

2024-2025学年九年级上期期末考点大串讲（北师大版）专题07书面表达题型（解析版）1．

成长是生命的主旋律。生命中总有一些对我们帮助很大、影响至深的人。最近，我校电视台将举办主题为“ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMost”的英语演讲比赛。谁是对你影响最大的人？请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意：1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚，书写规范；2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数100个左右，演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMostGoodafternoon,everyone!It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【优秀满分范文】

ThePersonWhoHasInfluencedMeMost

Goodafternoon,everyone!It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Inmyjuniorschoollife,manypeoplehavehelpedme.Ithankthemverymuch.ButthepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyEnglishteacherMissLee.MissLeeisbeautifulwithlonghair.Andsheiskind.Shehelpsmealot.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameinterestedinit.I’mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.

That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时态”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，根据所给流程图及提示，注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。突出重点，合理作答。【写作步骤】第一门，开门见山，介绍对你影响最大的人。第二步，介绍所感谢的人的外貌、性格及品质；第三步，介绍与所感谢的人之间的经历或故事；第四步，阐述他/她对你的影响并书写结语。【亮点词汇】①helpsbwithsth在某方面帮助某人②cheersbup使某人振作起来③makegreatprogress取得很大进步④becomeinterestedin对……感兴趣【高分句型】①WhenIamintrouble,shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.（when引导时间状语从句）②IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.（that引导宾语从句）③Shehasagreatinfluenceonme,andherhelpisveryusefulformyfuturedevelopment.（and连接并列句）2．在成长过程中，我们每个人都会面临压力，请以“Howtodealwithstress”为题，写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿。主要内容如下：1.作为九年级的学生你主要有哪些压力？（至少2种）2.如何面对这些压力？3.怎样解决这些压力问题？要求：1.所写内容必须包含以上3个要点，可适当发挥；2.词数：不少于90词，开头已写好，不计入总词数；3.段落分明，语意通顺，书写规范；4.不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。HowtodealwithstressEveryoneespeciallyweteenagersmayface____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀满分范文】HowtodealwithstressEveryoneespeciallyweteenagersmayfacedifferentkindsofstresses.Asaninthgradestudents,it’sabigchallengeformetogetonwellwithclassmatesatschoolandthehomeworkissohardformetoo.AlthoughIfeelstressfulduringmyschoollife,Ikeeppositiveandtrytofigureitout.Herearesomesuggestionsaboutit.Firstly,wecantakeexercisewithourclassmatesafterschoolsuchlikeplayingbasketballorfootball.What’smore,weshouldhaveenoughsleep.Itcanhelpusstudybettersothatwewillhavelessstressinstudy.Lastbutnotleast,whenwehaveanyproblems,wecantellourparents,teachersorfriends.Theycanhelpusout.Ihopeallofyouwillhaveagoodtimeduringyourschoollife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；②第二步，具体阐述如何面对这些压力和解决办法；③第三步，表达期望。[亮点词汇]①getonwellwith和……相处融洽②figureitout解决问题[高分句型]①Asaninthgradestudents,it’sabigchallengeformetogetonwellwithclassmatesatschoolandthehomeworkissohardformetoo.(it的固定句型)3．成长像是一场旅行，成长的过程中有烦恼，也有收获。假如你是李华，你的同龄朋友Simon写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信，谈谈你在成长过程中的经历和感受。要求：（1）必须包含所有提示，并作适当发挥；（2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；（3）词数不少于90；开头已给出，不计入总词数。HiSimon,Growingupislikeajourney.I’velearnedalotontheway._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyexperiencesingrowingupcanbehelpfultoyou.LiHua【优秀满分范文】范文：HiSimon,Growingupislikeajourney.I’velearnedalotontheway.I’velearnedabouttheworldindifferentways.Ilikereadingalltypesofbookswhichcanhelpmelearnmoreabouttheworld.Also,I’velearnedalotfrommyparentsandteachers.Myparentstaughtmehowtobeakindperson.Myteachershavehelpedmeimprovedmyknowledge.Besides,IhavelearnedalotthroughtheInternet.Onthewayofgrowingup,Ihavemyproblems.Forexample,Icouldn’tachieveabalancebetweenmyhobbiesandmyschoolwork.Thenmyfriendstoldmetomakeastudyplanandchoosehobbiesaccordingtomysparetime.Isolvedtheprobleminthisway.Ithinkwhenwefacedifficulties,weshouldnevergiveupeasily.IhopetobecomeanengineerwhenIgrowup.AndIwilltrymybesttoachievemydream.Ihopemyexperiencesingrowingupcanbehelpfultoyou.LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己了解这个世界的方法；第二步，介绍自己在成长过程中遇到的问题及解决方式；第三步，介绍自己对于成长的感悟。[亮点词汇]①makeastudyplan制定学习计划②giveup放弃③tryone’sbesttodo尽力做某事[高分句型]①Ilikereadingalltypesofbookswhichcanhelpmelearnmoreabouttheworld.（which引导的定语从句）②IhopetobecomeanengineerwhenIgrowup.（when引导的时间状语从句）4．假如你校正在举行“校园之星(SchoolStar)”评选活动，请你以Amy的名义，用英语写一封信，推荐同班同学Linda参加评选。要求：1.所写内容必须包括题目要求的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。DearSir,I’mwritingtorecommendLindaasthisyear’sSchoolStar.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Amy【优秀满分范文】DearSir,I’mwritingtorecommendLindaasthisyear’sSchoolStar.Sheisahard-working,confidentandcaringgirl.Shelikesdifferentkindsofcolors.Sheisgoodatusingdifferentcolorstochangehermood.Forexample,whitemakesherfeelcalm.ShelovesbasketballandshelearnedperseverancefromSpudWebb.Shehopestobeabasketballplayerinthefuture.Sheisinterestedinclassicalmusicbecauseitmakesherfeelrelaxed.Sheusedtospendalotoftimeplayingballanddidn’tdowellinherexams.Sheintendstostudyhardinordertogetgoodgrades.Sheknowshowtokeepabalancebetweenherhobbiesandherstudiesnow.IthinksheisqualifiedtobeselectedastheSchoolStar. Yourssincerely,Amy【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：主要是一般现在时；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Linda的品质；第二步，阐述Linda的爱好和变化；第三步，谈谈你的看法。[亮点词汇]①confident自信的②perseverance不屈不挠的精神③beinterestedin对……感兴趣④keepabalance保持平衡[高分句型]①Sheisinterestedinclassicalmusicbecauseitmakesherfeelrelaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）②IthinksheisqualifiedtobeselectedastheSchoolStar.（省略that的宾语从句）5．初中生活绚丽多彩，在近三年的磨砺中，你们都变得越来越优秀，学习更加勤奋，与人相处更加和谐。请为校广播台写一篇以Tobeabetterself为题的英文演讲稿，和同学们分享你的经验或感受，谈一谈如何做更好的自己。注意事项：1.围绕要点，合理展开，适当补充；2.不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名；3.词数不少于100词。TobeabetterselfDearall,IamreallyproudthatIhavegrownupandachievedalotinthepastthreeyears.Asateenager,Ithinkthemostimportantthingthatweshoulddoistomakeourselvesbetterpersons.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourlistening!【优秀满分范文】

TobeabetterselfDearall,

IamreallyproudthatIhavegrownupandachievedalotinthepastthreeyears.Asateenager,Ithinkthemostimportantthingthatweshoulddoistomakeourselvesbetterpersons.Inordertobeabetterone,thefollowingthreeaspectsshouldbetakenintoconsideration.

Firstofall,Idomybesttoimprovemystudy.Imanagemytimereasonably.IgooverwhatIhavelearnedintimeafterclass.Moreover,Ialwayslistentotheteachersandtakenotescarefullyinclass.Secondly,goodinterpersonalrelationshipisalsoveryimportantforus.Itrytocommunicatewithmyclassmatesandteacherssincerely.Iusuallylistentomyfriendspatientlyandsharemyfeelingsandthoughtswiththem.Inaddition,Ialsoencourageandhelpmyfriendswhentheymeetdifficulties.Lastbutnottheleast,Iamwillingtotakepartinvoluntaryactivities.Inotonlyplanttreeseveryyeartomakemycontributiontobringingpreentoourenvironmentbutalsogototheoldpeople’shometovisitandchatwiththeelderly.

Ihopemyexperiencesareofsomevaluetoyou.AndIdobelieveyoucanbecomebetterandhaveapromisingfuture.

Thankyouforyourlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，为应用文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：注意不要遗漏，并适当补充要点和自行发挥，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和连贯性。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，以“为了成为更好的自己，以下三个方面应该要考虑”引出下文；第二步，按照要点提示展开阐述，注意多使用表示逻辑的词语，如Firstofall，Moreover，Secondly，Inaddition等，使文章连贯性更强，同时注意适当发挥；第三步，总结并祝愿可以成为更好的人以及拥有更好的未来。[亮点词汇]①domybesttodosth尽我最大能力做某事②goodinterpersonalrelationship好的人际关系③lastbutnottheleast最后④chatwithsb和某人聊天[高分句型]①IgooverwhatIhavelearnedintimeafterclass.(what引导的宾语从句)②Ialsoencourageandhelpmyfriendswhentheymeetdifficulties.(when引导的时间状语从句)6．实行“双减”政策以来，同学们的作业减少，睡眠充足，生活更加丰富多彩。青少年杂志社邀请你撰稿，请根据所给提示，以“MyColourfulLife”为题写一篇英语作文，分享你的感受。注意事项：1.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。Thisterm,therearemanychangestomylife.I’mhappytoliveamorecolourfullifenow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀满分范文】Thisterm,therearemanychangestomylife.I’mhappytoliveamorecolourfullifenow.Ihavedifferentkindsofhomework,likelistening,writingandreading.NowIspendlesstimeonhomework,soIcanhaveenoughtimeformyhobbiesafterschool.Therearealotofinterestingclubstochoose.IliketheSingingClub.AllthememberpracticingsingingforaboutanhouronFriday.Intheafternoon,weusuallydosportstogether.Therearefootballandbasketballmatcheseveryyear.It’sgreatformetohavemoretimetoread.Ithinkit’sgoodforourmindandhelpsmestudywellinclass.Ireallyenjoymycolourfullife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作主旨；第二步，从作业、时间、活动等方面介绍自己多彩的生活；第三步，总结全文，并表达感想。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof不同种类的②practicedoingsth.练习做某事③begoodfor对……有好处[高分句型]①Therearealotofinterestingclubstochoose.（therebe句型）②Ithinkit’sgoodforourmindandhelpsmestudywellinclass.（宾语从句）7．作为中学生，我们在校学习、生活中不可避免地会有很多问题，应该如何面对并解决这些问题呢？假设你校英文报Growth专栏近期举行了“成长的烦恼(Growingpains)”征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语文章投稿。写作要点：1.What’syourmainteenageproblemnow?2.Canyoushareanexperienceabouthowtodealwithit?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?写作要求：1.词数100词左右，（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。2.文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称。3.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。Recentlyourclasshastalkedabout“Growingpains”ofteenagers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀满分范文】Recentlyourclasshastalkedabout“Growingpains”ofteenagers.IhaveaproblemthatI’malittleshyandhavetroublemakingfriends.Once,therewasagroupprojectinclass.Iwasreallynervousaboutworkingwithothers.ButIknewIhadtofaceit.Itookadeepbreathandstartedtocommunicatewithmyclassmates.Ilistenedcarefullytotheirideasandsharedmyownthoughtstoo.Slowly,Ibecamemoreconfidentandwecompletedtheprojectsuccessfully.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatweshouldbebravetostepoutofourcomfortzone.Whenwefacedifficulties,weshouldtrytoovercometheminsteadofavoidingthem.Onlyinthiswaycanwegrowupandbecomebetter.【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文。②时态：主要为“一般过去时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图。开头提及班级讨论“成长的烦恼”，引出自己的烦恼。第二步，具体阐述。描述在小组项目中的经历，包括最初的紧张、采取的行动及最终的成功，详细说明自己如何克服困难。第三步，书写结语。总结从经历中学到的道理，升华主题，强调面对困难应有的态度。［亮点词汇］①havetrouble(in)doingsth.做某事有困难②takeadeepbreath深呼吸③communicatewith与……交流［高分句型］①IhaveaproblemthatI’malittleshyandhavetroublemakingfriends.（同位语从句）②Onlyinthiswaycanwegrowupandbecomebetter.（部分倒装句）8．学校英语俱乐部正在选举新一届主席。假如你是李华，请根据以下文字提示，用英语写一封推荐信给校英语俱乐部负责人Mr.Wu，推荐你的同学Simon成为新一届的俱乐部主席。注意：（1）文章必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；（2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；（3）词数为90词左右，文章的开头结尾不计入总词数；DearMr.Wu,IamwritingtorecommendSimonasthenewchairpersonofourEnglishClub.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【优秀满分范文】DearMr.Wu,IamwritingtorecommendSimonasthenewchairpersonofourEnglishClub.Simonisaconfidentandhelpfulperson.Healwaysoffersassistancetoclubmembersandencourageseveryonetotakepartinactivities.Simonhasauniquehobbyofusingcolorstochangemoods,whichhesuccessfullyincorporatesintoourmeetingstocreateapositiveatmosphere.Inaddition,hehassomechangesnow.Inthepast,Simonfocusedmainlyonplayingfootball,butnowhehaslearnedtoachieveabalancebetweenacademicsandclubactivities.IbelieveSimon’squalitiesanddedicationmakehimanidealcandidatefortheposition.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Simon的性格和爱好；第二步，具体描述他的变化；第三步，最后表示自己相信Simon的品质和奉献精神使他成为这个职位的理想人选。[亮点词汇]①encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事②createapositiveatmosphere创造积极的氛围③idealcandidate理想人选[高分句型]Simonhasauniquehobbyofusingcolorstochangemoods,whichhesuccessfullyincorporatesintoourmeetingstocreateapositiveatmosphere（定语从句）9．九年级是初中阶段非常重要的一年，机遇与挑战并存，欢笑与泪水相伴。班会课上，王老师要求以“HowtoFaceGradeNine”为题展开讨论并发言。请你根据提示的内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。HowtoFaceGradeNineHealthylifestyleEnoughsleep;avoidstayingup;...ExcellentqualitiesFullofconfidence;nevergiveup;Hard-workingandcareful;payattentiontoeverydetailAbilitiesMakealistofhomework;Usingorangewhilelosingheart;Goingoverbeforeexams;………注意：1.短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.不得出现真实姓名，校名等；省略号处作适当发挥；3.90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HowtoFaceGradeNineWehavebeenhereinGradeNine.Someofusfeelgood,whilesomedonot.Howshouldwefacethisyear?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Facetheyearbravely.Itisyouwhoshapeyourlifeandfuture!【优秀满分范文】HowtoFaceGradeNineWehavebeenhereinGradeNine.Someofusfeelgood,whilesomedonot.Howshouldwefacethisyear?Firstofall,weneedtodevelophealthylivinghabits.Getenoughsleepandavoidstayinguplate.Getupearlyandexerciseeveryday.Secondly,weshouldcultivateexcellentpersonalqualities,fullofconfidenceinthefuture,nevergiveup,diligentandcareful,andpayattentiontothedetailsofdailylife.Finally,weshouldpayattentiontoimprovingourabilitytosolveproblems.Whenwehavetoomuchhomework,weshouldpayattentiontomakinglists.Whenwearefacingexams,weshouldreviewthemcarefully.Whenwearediscouraged,wecanuseorangecolor,becauseitcanmotivateus.Facetheyearbravely.Itisyouwhoshapeyourlifeandfuture!【详解】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，按照要求添加细节，并突出写作重点。［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出问题，升入九年级，我们应该做什么；第二步，具体按照表格提示要求，从三方面描述我们要做的具体事项；第三步，书写结语，勇敢面对并创造自己的新生活。［亮点词汇］①stayup熬夜②payattentionto注意③giveup放弃［高分句型］Whenwehavetoomuchhomework,weshouldpayattentiontomakinglists.（when引导的时间状语从句）10．

成长是一场美丽的蜕变。它让我们从青涩走向成熟，从无知走向智慧，从弱小走向强大。勇敢面对成长道路上的挫折和挑战，成为更好的自己。请以“TheJourneyofGrowth”为题，联系自身，写一篇英语交流稿，从以下至少三方面进行分享。要求：1.词数：90词左右（开头、结尾己给出，不计入总词数）;2.不得使用真实校名和姓名。3.参考词汇：growth成长；solution解决方法TheJourneyofGrowthGrowingupisaprocessthateveryonegoesthrough.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Growthislikeapathwithupsanddowns,butI’mreadyforit.【优秀满分范文】TheJourneyofGrowthGrowingupisaprocessthateveryonegoesthrough.Inmyjourneyofgrowth,Ihavelearntagreatdeal.WhenIwasyoung,IwassoshythatIcouldn’ttalkwithothersfreelyandloudly.ButasIgrow,Ilearntofacefearbravelyandamwillingtomakesomenewfriends.(InGrade7,Iwasafraidoftryingsomethingnew.However,withmyfriends’encouragement,Ihavebecomemoreandmoreconfident.AndI’mgladtotakeonnewchallengesanytime.)WhenIhavedifficultyachievingthebalancebetweenhobbiesandschoolwork.Ioftenaskmyteachersforhelp.First,ImakealistofthingsIneedtodoandworkouthowmuchfreetimeIhave.ThenIchoosemyhobbiesaccordingtothetime.Icanmanagetimebetterandgetmoreorganized.Lookingback,Irealizethatgrowthisnotjustaboutgettingtallerandolder.It’saboutgettingoverdifficultiesbravelyandlearningtobeindependent.Also,ithelpsuslearntotakemoreresponsibilitiesandbeabetterperson.

Growthislikeapathwithupsanddowns,butI’mreadyforit.【总体分析】①题材：本文属于议论文写作，为材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据图片提示完成写作，介绍你成长过程中遇到的问题和解决办法，你发生的巨大的变化和你认识到的成长的意义。注意要点齐全，无单词和语法错误。【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；第二步，具体阐述你在成长过程中遇到的困难和问题是什么，以及怎样克服和解决的；第三步，总结你从问题中学到了什么和你认为的成长的意义。【亮点词汇】①bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事②withone’sencouragement在某人的鼓励下③havedifficultydoingsth.做某事遇到困难④asksb.forhelp寻求某人的帮助【高分句型】①WhenIwasyoung,IwassoshythatIcouldn’ttalkwithothersfreelyandloudly.（when引导时间状语从句）②Lookingback,Irealizethatgrowthisnotjustaboutgettingtallerandolder.（that引导宾语从句）11．请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下对你影响最大的人——你的叔叔。要点如下：基本信息三十几岁，数学教师，在当地中学教书性格1.谦虚，严肃，总是高标准工作；2.足够有耐心解答学生们的问题；3.充满爱心，把剩余的钱捐给有需要的人；（再举一例）爱好喜欢红色，因为……

喜欢运动，因为……对我的影响1.每当遇到问题，向他求助；2.帮助我制定学习计划，建议我……，帮助我平衡了……；3.教我成为善良的人，永不言弃；要求：1.所写内容必须包括上表所有信息提示，可适当发挥；2.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。MyUncleThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【优秀满分范文】MyUncleThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle.Heisinhisthirtiesandisamathteacherinalocalmiddleschool.Myuncleisaverymodestandseriousperson.Healwaysworkstohighstandards.Heispatientenoughtoanswerhisstudents’questions.Nomatterhowdiffcultthequestionsare,hewilltryhisbesttomakethemunderstood.Heisalsoamanfulloflove.Whenhehassomemoneyleft,hedonatesittosomeoneinneed.Forexample,heoftengivesclothesandbookstothepoorchildreninthevillage.Myunclelikesredbecausehethinksredrepresentspowerandstrongfeelings.Healsolikessportsbecausehebelievesthatsportscankeephimhealthyandenergetic.WheneverIhaveproblems,Iwillturntohimforhelp.Hehasagreatinfluenceonme.HehelpsmemakeastudyplanandsuggeststhatIcanchoosemyhobbiesaccordingtomyfreetime.Thishelpsmeachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandhobbies.Moreover,heteachesmetobeakindpersonandnevergiveup.Inaword,myuncleisthepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost.IhopeIcanbelikehiminthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍叔叔的基本信息、性格、爱好以及对我的影响等方面的具体详情。第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟与希望。[亮点词汇]①inhisthirties在他三十几岁②worktohighstandards高标准工作③turntosbforhelp向某人求助④haveaninfluenceon对……有影响[高分句型]①Nomatterhowdiffcultthequestionsare,hewilltryhisbesttomakethemunderstood.(Nomatterhow引导的让步状语从句)②Myunclelikesredbecausehethinksredrepresentspowerandstrongfeelings.(because引导的原因状语从句)12．假设你是Roger的笔友Rossie，你们都是刚刚进入初三的学生，最近你收到了Roger的来信，请你根据来信内容给好朋友Roger写一封回信。内容包括：1.对Roger的遭遇表示安慰。2.对他是否应该继续街舞课表明你的态度（赞成或反对）并说明你的理由。3.对Roger接下来应该怎么做提出两个建议。4.提出适当的鼓励或祝愿。DearRossie,Recently,anunhappythinghappenedtomeandIreallyhopeyoucanhelpme.AfterenteringGrade9,mymumstoppedmystreetdancinglessons(街舞课).Thisismyfavouritehobbyanditcanletmefeelrelaxedafterstudyingforalongtime.What’smore,mygrades(成绩)havebeenverygoodinthepast2years.Ireallywanttocontinuemydancinglessons.Mymumdoesn’tseemtounderstandme.Isitrighttocontinuemydancinglessons?WhatshouldIdo?Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Thankyou!Yours,Roger注意：1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（信件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearRoger,I’vejustreadyourletterand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetoreceiveyourletteragainsoon.Yours,Rossie【优秀满分范文】DearRoger,

I’vejustreadyourletterandI’msorrytohearthatyou’reinsuchatoughsituation.Itmustbereallyhardforyouwhenyourmomstoppedyourstreetdancinglessons.Ithinkyoushouldcontinueyourstreetdancinglessons.Asyousaid,it’syourfavoritehobby.Hobbyisanimportantpartofourlives,especiallyduringthestressfultime.Besides,youhavemanagedtokeepgoodgradesinthepasttwoyears,whichshowsthatdancingdoesn’tinfluenceyourstudy.Herearetwosuggestionsforyou.Fir