2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+男孩与爱犬：失而复得的温暖+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习男孩与爱犬：失而复得的温暖1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Tomisaspecialchild.Eversincehewaslittle,dogshavebeenhisgreatestpassion.Heoftengrowled(低吼)andbarkedandsometimesmovedaroundthehouseonallfours.HisparentsbroughtinalittlebrownfemaledognamedLynn.Tomwasoncloudnine.Oneday,thislittleboy,togetherwithLynn,wassittingquietlydownbythesideofthestreetwhensuddenlyagiantdogwalkedacrosshim.Hewasalittlesurprisedandstartedscreamingasloudlyashecould!AllofthisfrightenedLynnawayimmediately.Tom’sparentstriedtoseewhatthechanceswereofLynncominghomeonherown.Butfivedayslater,therewasstillnosignofLynn.Theboydidn’tjusthavetearsstreamingdownhischeeks—hisparentsweresaddenedtoo.4续写原文Thewoodsbehindtheirhomestretchedforover50miles!Togetherwiththeirneighbors,theysearchedforoveramonth.ButLynnwasgone.Tom’sparentswantedtochooseanewpuppyforhim.ButnodogcouldreplaceLynnforhim.Tomwasnotthesameboy.Helockedhimselfinhisroom.Heseemedtohavelosthislovefordogs.Hecouldnotfocushisattentiononhisclassessohedidn’twanttogotoschool.Hewouldeasilygetangrywithpeoplearoundhim.Tomchangedfromahappy,smilingboytoanupsetandannoyingkid.5续写原文Tom’sparentswantedhimtostayhomeandhehadbeenstudyingathomeeversince.Hisparentsaccompaniedhimalmosteveryday,butstayinghomedidn’thelpmuch.Theboy’smotherworriedalot.Onerainyafternoon,shesawhimstaringoutthewindow.“ImissLynnsomuch.Iwonderifeverythingisokaywithher?”Ithadbeenalongtimesincehisbeloveddogranaway,butTom’sdespairwasasgreatasthedayithappened.Dayslater,Tomwalkedoutthefrontdoorwithhisheaddownandsatbythesideofthestreet.6段首句Paragraph1：Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Paragraph2：Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了汤姆从小爱狗，父母给他带回小狗林恩，他欣喜若狂。一次外出，巨型犬惊走林恩，此后五天毫无踪迹，众人苦寻一月无果。汤姆大受打击，把自己锁在房里，厌学且易怒，父母让他居家学习也无济于事。一个雨天，汤姆思念林恩，几天后他低落出门，意外的是，一只大狗出现，竟是林恩，它还带汤姆走进树林里的小窝，汤姆重拾快乐，重返校园。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.一只巨大的棕色狗穿过街道，停在了哭泣的男孩面前。汤姆泪眼朦胧中，恍惚以为是幻觉，可那狗眼中熟悉的亲昵让他瞬间清醒，真的是林恩！汤姆激动得扑上前，双手紧紧抱住林恩，泣不成声：“林恩，你终于回来了，我好想你！”林恩也不停地蹭着他，喉咙里发出呜呜声，似在诉说着这些日子的思念与漂泊。汤姆仔细端详，发现林恩身形壮实了些，身上虽有些许伤痕，却无损此刻重逢的喜悦。11续写思路分析Para2：Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.林恩舔了舔汤姆的脸颊，接着缓缓走向树林边缘。汤姆满心疑惑，赶忙跟上。走进树林，只见一处隐蔽角落有个简易小窝，旁边散落着些小动物骨头，汤姆瞬间明白，林恩这些日子独自在野外求生。看着眼前场景，汤姆眼眶湿润，他抱紧林恩，心中满是心疼与庆幸。此后，汤姆仿若重生，笑容重回脸上，他重返校园，学习劲头十足，对狗狗的爱也愈发深沉。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Throughhistearyeyes,Tomthoughtitwasahallucinationatfirst.Butthefamiliaraffectioninthedog’seyeswokehimupinstantly.ItwasLynn!Tomrushedforwardexcitedlyandhuggedhertightly,cryingbitterly.“Lynn,you’rebackatlast.Imissedyousomuch!”Lynnkeptrubbingagainsthim,whiningasiftellingherlongingandwanderingthesedays.TomobservedcarefullyandfoundLynnhadgrownstronger.Althoughthereweresomescratchesonherbody,itdidn’tlessenthejoyofreunion.14范文呈现Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.Tom,fullofdoubts,hurriedtofollow.Enteringthewoods,hesawasimpledeninahiddencorner,withsomesmallanimalbonesscatteredbesideit.TomunderstoodimmediatelythatLynnhadbeensurvivinginthewildalone.Lookingatthescene,Tom’seyesbecamemoist.HehuggedLynntightly,hisheartfullofheartacheandrelief.Afterthat,Tomwaslikeareborn.Hissmilereturned,hewentbacktoschoolwithfullenthusiasm,andhislovefordogsgrewevendeeper.15升级版范文呈现Ahugebrowndogcrossedthestreetandstoodinfrontofthecryingboy.Tom,hisvisionblurredbytears,initiallymistookitforamirage.However,theunmistakableglimmeroffamiliarityinthedog’seyesjoltedhimbacktoreality.ItwasLynn!Withasurgeofemotion,Tomflunghimselfforward,enfoldingthedoginatightembrace,hissobsechoingintheair.“Lynn,you’vereturned!I’vemissedyoudreadfully.”Lynnnuzzledagainsthim,hersoftwhinesseeminglyrecountingthetalesofherabsence.Despiteafewscratchesmarringhercoat,thesheerelationoftheirreunioneclipsedall.16升级版范文呈现Lynnlickedhischeeksandthenwalkedtotheedgeofthewoods.Tom,consumedbycuriosity,hastenedtofollow.Deepwithinthesylvandepths,arudimentarydencameintoview,accompaniedbyremnantsofsmallprey.Instantly,TomgraspedLynn’ssolitarystruggleforsurvival.Overwhelmed,heclutchedhercloser,hisheartamelangeofanguishandgratitude.Fromthatmomenton,Tom’sformerselfreemerged.His