作文13 江西卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英语满分作文解读+素材积累

作文13江西卷2021年江西中考英语书面表达TheValueofNegativeResultsWeallavoidfailure（失败）,andmostofusfearit.However,withoutfailure,progresswouldbeimpossible.Whatdoessuccessusuallycomeafter?Failure.Itseemsthatonecannotexist（存在）withouttheother.Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,thoughweareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.______Inthepasttenyears,forexample,somescientificmagazineshavepublishedreportsoffailedtests.Itisbelievedthatscientistscanlearnmore“negative（负面的）”resultsandthatthiscanfinallyleadtopositiveresults._______TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute（机构）ofBrilliantFailurestolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.EliLillyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs（药物）thatdon’twork.Infact,oneofthebusinessworld’smostfamousfailuresbecameoneofitsbiggestsuccesses,inpartbecausetheproduct’smakerslearnedfromtheirmistakes._____Theproduct,thoughunique（独特的）atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy;besides,someofitsmostimportantfeatures（特点）didn’tworkproperly.Asaresult,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.______Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromitifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent（执着的）.ThoughApplestoppedsellingtheNewtonin1998,thefirstiPhonewasn’tavailableuntil2007.IttookalotofresearchandhardworktogofromtheAppleNewtontoiPhonebutintheend,theeffortbecamesuccessful.Allinall,thereisalotwecanlearnbystudyingmistakes.Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin.______A．Onetrulycannotexistwithouttheother.B．Wearebraveenoughtofacedifficulties.C．Intheearly1990s,ApplecreatedaphonecalledtheAppleNewton.D．Thebusinessworldalreadyunderstandsthevalueofnegativeresults.E.TheAppleNewtonhaswonpopularitywithpeopleallovertheworld.F.However,thingsareslowlychanging,especiallyinbusinessandscience.G.ThestoryoftheAppleNewtoncanteachusanimportantlessonaboutfailure.1．_______2．_______3．______4．_______5．_______6、书面表达失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，采取有效行动，失败为成功。写作要点：1WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?2Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?3Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?要求：1短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3词数不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1．F2．D3．C4．G5．A

6、例文Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveourproblems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspokeninfrontofthepubliceversince.Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakinpublicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,bepersistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.【分析】本文介绍了人们对待错误不同态度，过去的时候人们害怕错误，避免错误；现在人们正面错误，从错误中吸取教训，改进产品。1．根据上一句“Acceptingfailureisnoteasyformany,though.Weareoftenunwillingtoacceptfailurebecauseourprofessionalfamedependsonsuccess.”可知人们并不愿意接受失败，但通过空格后的内容可以知道，人们开始接受失败，并在科技和商业界做一些与失败有关的研究。前后存在转折关系，F选项“然而，事情在慢慢地改变，尤其是在商业和科技方面。”，符合题意。故选F。2．根据空格后“TheABNAMRObankstartedanInstitute(机构)ofBrilliantFailuretolearnmoreaboutwhatworksandwhatdoesn’tinbanking.Similarly,EiLilyandCompanyhadfailurepartiestostudythedrugs(药物)thatdon’twork.”可知商界已有人士认识到失败的价值，并进行相应的研究，D选项“商界早已领悟到了负面结果的价值。”，符合题意。故选D。3．根据下文“Theproduct,thoughunique(独特的)atthetime,wasexpensiveandheavy”可知这个产品在那个时候是昂贵且笨重的，尽管很独特，此处在介绍一个新的产品。C选项“在二十世纪九十年代初期，苹果公司创造了一款名为苹果牛顿的手机。”，符合题意。故选C。4．根据前文“However,Apple’sCEO,SteveJobs,believedintheproductandhebegantofindoutwaysofimprovingit.Intime,thisledtotheproductionoftheiPhoneandtheiPad,twoofthecompany’smostsuccessfulproducts.”举苹果公司由失败到成功的例子，可知失败极为重要，与后文“Notonlyshouldwetrytolearnfromit;ifwewanttosucceed,wemustalsobepersistent(执着的).如果我们想要获得成功，不仅要从中学习，还要坚持不懈。”相衔接。G选项“苹果牛顿的故事告诉我们一个与失败有关的重要道理。”符合题意。故选G。5．根据前文“Perhapsthemostimportantlessonisthatfailureandsuccessaretwosidesofthesamecoin。”可知失败与成功是同一枚硬币的两面，所以二者相互依存，A选项“失败与成功无法离开彼此而存在。”，符合题意。故选A。6．（1）.题干解读：本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章，谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，结合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么，你的失败经历，要如何将失败变为成功。（2）.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么，时态为一般现在时；第二部分描写自己的失败经历，时态为一般过去时；第三部分为如何把失败变为成功，时态为一般现在时。写作时要行文连贯，条理清晰，语言准确。2020年江西中考英语书面表达为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心(EnglishTeachingResearchCenter)正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议。写作要点：1.YourfeelingsaboutyourEnglishrevisionclasses.2.Classactivities:a.WhatdidyourEnglishteacherusuallydoinclass?b.Whatdidyouusuallydoinclass?3.YouradviceonEnglishrevisionclassestoyourEnglishteacher.要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswere_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswereusefulbuttiring.Inclass,myEnglishteacherorganizeddifferentkindsofactivitiestohelpusreviewwhatwehadlearnt.Sometimessheexplainedhowtousethekeywordsandsentencepatterns.Wetooknotesandmadesentences.Withtheteacher'shelp,wepracticedlistening,readingandwritinginclass.Butweoftendidexercisesandhadexams,whichmademestressedout.IhopeEnglishrevisionclassescanbemoreenjoyable.Wecanplaygamesandrole—playconversations.It’sagoodideatohavediscussionswithmypartnersinEnglish.What’smore,Iliketeacherswhoarealwayswithasmile.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料类作文，要求写一篇关于中考英语复习教学现状的文章，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法、复习课上老师及同学开展的一些活动、个人对于英语复习课的一些建议，以上写作要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态以为一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全。首段介绍了自己对英语复习课的感受以及老师在课堂上的教学活动和学生的学习情况；第二段介绍了个人对英语复习课的改进意见。文章使用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。3.高分亮点：短语：takenotes；makesentences；practicedoingsth；stressedout；what’smore。句型：疑问词+动词不定式；which引导的定语从句；it作形式主语。2019年江西中考英语书面表达文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“Weneedtojudgepeoplebywhattheydo,notwhattheylooklike.”你同意文章最后提出的观点吗?对此观点你有何看法?请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。写作要点:I.Youropinion(agree/disagree/…);2.Reasons(looks,personality品性,ability…);3.Anexample(yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/…).要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PossibleversionOne;Iagreewiththeopinion.Comparedwithlooks,personalityandabilityaremoreimportant.Becausewecan’tchangeourlookseasily,butwecandecideandcontrolwhatwedo.Thankstothekindandhard-workingpeople,oursocietyisbecomingbetterandbetter.Forexample,MaYun,awell-knownbusinessman,doesn’tlookhandsome,buthecreatedAlibabawhichhaschangedourlifestyleandmadeourlifemoreconvenient.Hehasbeendoingsomuchforoursocietythatwealladmirehim.Becauseofhiscontributiontooursociety,weeventhinkhelookssocool.Solet’stryourbesttodomoreusefulthingsforoursocietyandpaylessattentiontoourlooks.PossibleVersionTwoInmyopinion,IthinkweneedtojudgepeoplebybothwhattheydoandwhattheylooklikeAperson'spersonalityandabilityareveryimportant,butforsomejobs,looksarealsoimportant,suchasanactororanactress,awaiterorawaitress,orevenateacherBecauseit'senjoyabletoseeagood-lookingpersonForexample,myteachersinmyclassallteachverywell,andtheyarekindandhelpful.Allofuslikethem.ButthemostpopularteacherismyEnglishteacher,becauseshelooksreallybeautiful.ShedressesherselfupeverydayandalwayshasasmileonherfaceSolet'stryourbesttoimproveourability,personalityandlooks.【详解】这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。2018年江西中考英语书面表达假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。ChineseCultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPastandpresentTime:______Places:teafarm,teahouseActivities:1.teaprocessing2.ateaartperformance…FolkMusicMusicpiecesandtraditionalinstrumentsTime:_______Places:musicroom,schoolhallActivities:1.takemusicalinstrumentclasses2.attendafolkmusicconcert…Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroduce______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroducetea.Ithasalonghistory.ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina.Sowewillhavesomeinterestingactivitiesaboutitforyou.OnSaturdaymorning,youaregoingtovisitabigfarmwhereyoucanlearnaboutteaprocessing.OnSaturdayafternoon,youaregoingtoateahouseafterdinnerwhereyoucanwatchateaartperformance.Whydoweplanavisittoateahouseforyou?Becauseyoucanlearnalotmoreaboutteaculturethere.YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets.Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如helpsb.do，aboutChineseculture，I'dliketo，oneofthemostpopulardrinks，begoingto，afterdinner，alotmore，bemadewith，listento，haveagoodtime等。而ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina./YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets,/Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2017年江西中考英语书面表达微笑是人类最美的语言．某英文报以"Smiles"为题，举办中学生征文活动．请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文．内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示．

提示：短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数．Power of smiles

（get on well,bring good luck,…）Your own story about smiles↖Smiles↗↑

What you've learnt from the storySmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                                                

A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.First,Whenwehaveaproblem,conflictormisunderstanding,onlysmilecanhelpuscommunicateandrelease；whenwearefacingwithsomedifficulties,onlysmilecanhelpusovercome.Second,smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother＜高分句型＞．Third,smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.＜高分句型＞

IrememberIfightwithmybestfriend,I amsosadandIamafraidthat wewillnevertrusteachother.Butasmilemakesusbegoodfriendsagain.＜关于微笑的故事＞Fromthattimeon,Iknowthatnomatterhowlargethedifficultiesare,nomatterhowmuchthesadnessis,youneedtokeeponsmilingandtry to useasmiletocreateyourconfidence.＜从故事中得到的启示＞【分析】这是一篇图表作文，让我们写一篇以smile为题的作文，这要求我们发挥自己的思维力和想象力，写出微笑的力量，写作时应该用第三人称，时态为一般现在时为主，内容包括：首先详细阐述一下微笑的力量，其次，写一个关于自己的微笑的故事，并写出从故事中得到的启示．

重点句型：

Smilecanhelpusgetonwellwithotherpeople,whichmakesustrusteachother.译为：微笑能帮助我们好好地与人相处，让我们比此次信任．此句中短语特多，如helpsbdo

帮助某人做某事；getonwithsb

与人相处；makesbdosth让某人干某事．一个句子中能有三个重要短语，不愧为高分句型

Smilecanbringgoodlucktous,andwewill thinkthatlifeissunnyandcolorful.译为：微笑能给我们带来好运．我们会认为生活是阳光的多彩的，此句中有个这个重要短语bringgoodluckto给．．带来好运；and连接两个句子，构成复合句．

【点评】写图表作文时，我们最好不要漏掉其中的要点，行文注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，适当写几个复合句比较用易得高分，但同时注意，适当用几个人连接词，first,besides,what'smore,last等，这样会使文章显得有层次感，同时，在作文完成的时候注意检查，修改，如果有条件的话最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，方能成为一篇好文章中考英语作文满分必备的句型1.重点句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…对某人来说…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能…

such…that…如此…以至于…

3).not…until…直到…才…

例：Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback。

4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…

Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)5).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子那是因为…7).Itissaidthat+句子据说…

Itisreportedthat+句子据报道…

8).Thereisnodoubtthat