作文16 辽宁锦州卷（满分作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语满分作文+万能模板+热点素材

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊真题在线作文16辽宁锦州卷真题在线小作文（辽宁省锦州市2021年中考英语试题）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的语篇。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为40-50词；2.必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；3.续写部分至少一段,第一段开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。Manystudentshaveanumberofinterestingideasabouttheirdreamschools.Maybepeoplewillbuildtheseschoolssomeday.Let’shavealookatsomeofthem.Inmydreamschool,therewillbenorealclassrooms.Wewillstudyinourownrooms.WithVRtechnology（虚拟现实技术）,wecanstudymore.Paragraph1:Inmydreamschool,wewillhaveflexible（灵活的）learningchoices.________________考题解析_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析1.题干解读：题目要求根据文章以给出的部分进行续写，主要是写出自己梦想中的学校会是什么样子，要加以发挥，要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的部分很好的衔接起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，辅满分范文以一般将来时，注意无单词拼写和语法错误。满分范文真题在线Wecanchoosewhenandwheretohaveclassesfreely.Sowewillneverbelate.AndbesidesChinese,mathandEnglish,wecanstudydifferentkindsofsubjectsthatweareinterestedin.Thereisnoexamofanysubject.Weloveourdreamschool.真题在线大作文（辽宁省锦州市2021年中考英语试题）假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Lucy正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请你根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Ms.Liu。Appearance（外表）Tall,thin,smartPersonalities（性格）Helpful,friendlyFavoritecolorPinkHobbiesReading,traveling,watchingmoviesAchievementsThefirstprizeintheteachingcompetition要求：1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；2.请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；4.词数：80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLucy,ThankyoufortellingmeaboutyourChineseteacher.Ithinkheissuchagreatteacher.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Liu._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewritesoon.Yours,考题解析ZhangHua考题解析满分范文1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和内容，描写自己的英语老师的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。满分范文DearLucy,ThankyoufortellingmeaboutyourChineseteacher.Ithinkheissuchagreatteacher.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Liu.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsothin.Shelooksverysmart,too.Becauseherfavoritecolorispink,sheisinterestedinallkindsofthingsthatarepink.Shehasalotofhobbies,suchasreadingandtraveling.Sosheoftengoestothelibraryafterschoolonweekdaysandgoestotheplacesofinterestonweekends.Shealsolikeswatchingmovies,butsheseldomgoestothecinema.Sheissoexcellentateacherthatshewonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitioninourcity.Sheishelpfulandfriendlytoeveryone.Wealllikeher.Pleasewritesoon.Yours,名师点评ZhangHua名师点评2021年锦州卷在考题形式上跟前几年相比没有变化，皆是续写+大作文的形式，既考查了学生在日常生活中的英语应用能力，也考查了学生对于生活中相关话题的英语表达，既给了学生想象空间，也在题干要点中给了一定的限制。近几年的书面表达难度都不高，前几年多考察命题作文或半命题作文，且文章中给出了较为详尽的信息，只需学生根据所学知识进行适当发挥即可。在平时学习中，学习也可以多练习此类作文的书写，并学习相关佳句表达。佳句积累1.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsothin.【亮点】notonly…butalso…不仅…而且…2.Becauseherfavoritecolorispink,sheisinterestedinallkindsofthingsthatarepink.【亮点】allkindsof为“各种各样的”，thatarepink为定语从句，修饰先行词things。3.Sheissoexcellentateacherthatshewonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitioninourcity.【亮点】so…that…如此…以至于…举一反三相似题①在过去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老师。言爱学校英语广播电台开展了“Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher”英语征文活动，根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1)你最喜欢的英语老师是谁；2）你喜欢他/她的原因；3）你对老师的感受。2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和名称；2）词数100左右。Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Iloveyou,myEnglishteacherIhavemetmanygoodteachersinthelastthreeyears.MyEnglishteacher,Mr.Huang,isoneofthem.Nowletmetellyousomethingabouthim.Mr.Huangisofmediumheightandalittlethin.Hewearsapairofglasses.Heisgoodatcommunicatingwithothersbecauseheisoutgoing.Helikessports.Youcanoftenseehimplaybasketballwithstudents.Mr.Huangenjoyshiswork.Heisverystrictbutcaresabouteverystudent.Whenthepoorstudentsareintrouble,heisalwaysreadytohelpthem.Hehasmanygoodwaystomakeourclasslivelyandactive.Inhisclass,wehavedifferentkindsofinterestingactivities.Afterclass,heusuallyhelpsthestudentswhohavedifficultyinlearning.Thankstohishardwork,wehaveimprovedalot.Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher！Iwillneverforgetyouforever!【考题解析】【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.要求介绍自己的英语老师，因此文体为记叙文；2.写人叙事类书面表达，人称以第三人称为主，时态主要用一般现在时；3.文章可对老师的外貌、性格、爱好、特长、工作等方面进行描述。【写作指导】我爱您，我的英语老师要点提示素材串联开头：引出话题遇到很多好老师，黄老师是其中之一(oneofthem)正文：详细介绍英语老师1.外貌、性格和特长(beofmediumheight,begoodat)2.工作态度(strict,careabout,beintrouble,bereadyto)3.课堂特色(havedifficultyindoing,thanksto)结尾：表达感受永远不会忘记(forever)相似题②亲爱的同学们，三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师们。请根据以下要点和要求谈谈你熟悉的英语老师。1.要点：1）这位英语老师是哪位；2）描述老师的基本情况；3）你对老师的评价。2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数100词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyEnglishTeacherIhavemetmanyexcellentteachersinjuniorschool.OneofthemismyEnglishteacher,Ms.Li.Sheisaboutthirtyfiveyearsold.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsobeautiful.Shehaslongcurlyhair.Ms.Lialsohasalotofhobbies,suchasreading,singing,dancingandplayingsports.Sheisverypatientwithus.Weallthinksheisafriendlyandwarmheartedteacher.Ms.Liisagoodteacher.Sheislikeafriendofours.Andsometimessheisalsolikeourmother.Weallloveher.相似题③根据中文提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的学校和英语老师Lucy。要求：语言流畅，条理清晰，词数不少于70词。要点包括如下：1.我学校生活丰富多彩,每天只有半小时的作业，有许多课外活动。2.我们有大约180个老师，Lucy是我最喜欢的老师之一。3.她比我妈妈瘦一点，脸上总是挂着微笑。4.她能令每堂课都很有趣，并经常在课后帮我们辅导作业和解决英语问题。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Ourschoollifeiscolourful.Weonlyhavehalfanhourofhomeworkeveryday.Wehavealotofafter-schoolactivities.Thenumberoftheteachersinourschoolisabout180.Lucyisoneofmyfavouriteteachers.Sheisthinnerthanmymother.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Shecanmakeeveryclassinteresting.AndsheoftenhelpsuswithourhomeworkandsolvetheEnglishproblems.Ilikemyschoolandmyteachers.【考题解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题。注意写作要点：1.我学校生活丰富多彩,每天只有半小时的作业，有许多课外活动。2.我们有大约180个老师，Lucy是我最喜欢的老师之一。3.她比我妈妈瘦一点，脸上总是挂着微笑。4.她能令每堂课都很有趣，并经常在课后帮我们辅导作业和解决英语问题。可以根据文章中心，适当添加内容。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用，词数不少于70词等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。相似题④假如你是李华，在新年来临之际，你想给英语老师李老师写一份邮件表达谢意。请你用英语介绍一下你为什么感谢她，以及你今后打算怎样做。提示词语：thank，help，confident，workhard提示问题：●Whydoyouthankher?●Whatwillyoudotothankher?DearMs.Li,Howareyougettingon?I'mwritingthisemailtosaythankyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearMs.Li,Howareyougettingon?I’mwritingthisemailtosaythankyou.I'mhappytobeyourstudent.Inthepasttwoandahalfyears,youhavehelpedmewithmyEnglishandmypersonaldevelopment.Withyourhelp,IbecamemoreconfidentinEnglishandimprovedalot.I'mnottheshyandupsetgirlanymore.Besides,whenIwasintroublewithmyfriendsorparents,youalwaysspentyourfreetimetalkingwithmeandgavemesomeadvicesothatIcouldsolvetheproblemquickly.IjustwanttosaythankyoutoyouandIwilltrymybesttorealizemydreamtomakeyouhappy.HappyNewYear.Wishyougoodluck.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华，要求你根据要点提示，在新年来临之际，给你的英语老师李老师写一份邮件，以感谢她对你的帮助，并介绍你今后打算怎样做注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，叙述过去的事情时，用一般过去时，介绍今后的打算时，用一般将来时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。相似题⑤老师是火种，点燃了学生的心灵之火；老师是石阶，帮助学生一步步踏实地向上攀登。